I love a story that I can visualize the character actions, movements and features. What a wonderful start to your book
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 10:19 pm
Great start please continue
Reviewer: Primegirl04 Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 05:03 pm
I am confused, the village was named Kumli and where is it located? It has to be in America since there was a Native American tribal burial sight or at least it should be. How did Nikolai meet Caroline name his beloved? Cast pictures? Is the blonde finished or will try something again? More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 04:41 pm
You should definitely continue.It's very intiguing story....Would love to read more.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 02:24 pm
Yessssss! Sounds really good!! Continue pleaaaassseeee
Reviewer: BubbleGum7 Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 01:13 pm
Yes, you should definitely go on! In which way is he a monster (description!), is it his physical or his behaviour? Are you going back in time when they met? Does it take place in a remote place that actually exist or did you create an entire society? there's so much to discover, so yes, I must read more. Good Job!
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 12:14 pm
Please do continue!
This is off to a wonderful start. =]
Date: August 04 2013 11:20 am
LOVE! Would like to kow more about this Nikoli character and Carolina of course.
Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 10:02 am
I like this story so far! Its interesting....continue!! :)
Reviewer: xsweetdellzx Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 09:42 am
Ummmm yes definitely continue, seems very very very interesting.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 09:21 am
Hmm...It's a bit confusing, but with some exposition it could be very interesting.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 08:25 am
Continue pleeeease continue!!! This is a great start. Can't wait for what's next.
Reviewer: MiAmourrr Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 08:18 am
Please continue, I have a million questions some background info might answer, lol.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2013 07:15 am