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Title: Part 1

I am enjoying your story and look forward to the updates.  Oliver need to get with the program and figure out why he is mean to her.  Our girl needs to look within herself and figure out why she is willing to settle for someone disrespecting her--she is worth a million cougars.   

I don't think Mac would be good for her in the long run, but he is good for her ego.   



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I think every person, except maybe Yelena, has some growing up to do... just like in life, there's always room for growth and change. Glad you're enjoying it!

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 05:27 pm
Title: Interlude 1 - The Cha Cha

love the chemistry & the flow.  looking forward to more.  thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

you are most welcome! thank you for reading :)

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 04:38 pm
Title: Interlude 1 - The Cha Cha

Haha..this story is soo light, cute, and enjoyable. Keep going!!



Author's Response:

i needed something a bit lighter to give my brain a break from the darkness that's looming in Veiled..

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 02:38 pm
Title: Interlude 1 - The Cha Cha

Mac is smooth and that dance was so unexpected.  Learned something new  both Mac and Dinah are dancers from way back and Oliver likes Dinah.  This next dance lesson should be very interesting. Good stuff!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you picked up on those little bread crumbs :) thanks for reading!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 11:14 am
Title: Part 1

Great story can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

I've got a few ideas floating around in my head.. shouldn't be too long :)

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 02:59 pm
Title: Part 1

Oliver is an attitudinal asshole yet I like him anyway. Dinah annoys me as she tends to stick with men that don't respect her. She allowed Bryan and now Oliver to walk all over herxand I want to know why?  Did she grow up without a father in her life? Mac  is an man ho and Meredith is an embarrassment to women everywhere. Merri Oliver does not want you and you know it but you choose to ignore his clues both verbal and nonverbal. Merri is cray cray and she needs go go bye bye. Me likey!



Author's Response:

Lol.. I always look forward to your comments! Hopefully the character flaws won't keep you away...I'd hate for you to miss out :)

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 01:58 pm
Title: Part 1

I hope you do update soon. I actually like this one more than Veiled. Not so much into women being tortured and killed. All the same, I'll be looking out for more of your writing...



Author's Response:

Thank you much! I'm trying to keep it diverse and interesting :)

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 10:47 am
Title: Part 1

Very good start



Author's Response:

thank you much :)

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 08:16 am
Title: Part 1

I like this one!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 05:01 am


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