Who granted Pinocchio's wish of being a real boy, becasue we need her to make Alfred a real man. That was hot, Alfred put it down, touch down!!! Selena is already attached to Alfred, I have a bad feeling. This here is the sugady!!
Author's Response:
LOL PM, you know Alfred was "made to order" like the challenge. Yeah, Selena is attached and so is Alfred! More is coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: September 24 2013 04:15 am
I love your book, the character keep me on edge of my chair and laughing out loud. Good job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 24 2013 03:04 am
Must Alfred be an android?! I love his character!
Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response:
Yep! He's an android, but anything can happen in Sci Fi, right?
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 24 2013 02:25 am
OH so much conflict! This really is good Brenda. You have a gift. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
OMG! That means a lot coming from you after reading that movie in the making you wrote! :) Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2013 09:06 pm
interesting twist wit hthe prime directive. Loving this.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2013 09:04 pm
And bingo... we have located the main problem - the Prime directive. We'll have to find someway to get rid of the prime directive in order for him and her to be completely together.... huh I wonder how it's going to be done, if at all. Soooo excited to read more
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2013 01:37 pm
Awww, Poor Alfred...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2013 07:25 am
I am enjoying this story and Im starting to hate the primary directive.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: September 22 2013 02:44 am
Why can't Alfred be a real man?! He's perfect!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 22 2013 02:17 am
Oh my gudness!!
Reviewer: Ayoo_Joi Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2013 10:43 pm
Oh my... I NEED MORE! Don't stop. Are you trying to drive me insane! This was so good. Update asap :D
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2013 10:35 pm
I had to close my eyes on some parts. @_@
My cheeks are red! My goodness!
Are all first times like this?! Lawrd help me!
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2013 10:18 pm
Oh boy. I can just SEE all the trouble Selena and Alfie are going to get into, and I like it!
Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2013 06:13 pm
..a glass of wine wth my cigarette please. Alfred is hilariously sexy!!!Love this story just as I knew I would. You Rock Mrs. Brenda!!
Reviewer: mya Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 21 2013 03:53 am
Hilarious and sexy... I love Alfred.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2013 01:23 am
pass me a cigarette, too...this was hot! i'm sad alfred isn't real. haha
Reviewer: LiLi Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 10:59 pm
HAHAHAHAHAHA I. Can't. With. Alfred! The last part though LOL I die. I love him he's hilarious. I wonder what Selena is ging to do? Faint? That's a big possibility hahaha
Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2013 09:40 pm
Girl pass the cigarettes! I'm going to end up a chain smoker reading this story!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 08:02 pm
You can't stop there UGH!!! More, more, more please :D
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 07:39 pm
SHIT!! I need a cig too. Alfred Alfred Alfred! Smh. That Alfred is something else!! Lol. I need me an Alfred!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 06:17 pm
Beautiful
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 06:04 pm
Damn that was hot!! Brenda you made break out in sweat!! Alfred does a body good!! It was so good that Selena passed out! Hot damn!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 05:43 pm
Lol...I love your story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 05:39 pm
Alfred is so funny and definitely Alpha. I can't wait to see what he has in store for Selena next.
Great story.
Thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 04:38 pm
Alfred is a trip i tell you. I like him but it just goes to show be careful what you ask for either that or the fact what women think they want is not always ideal for reailty .
Reviewer: Jovana Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 03:47 pm