Title: Chapter 13

Hooray for Ron! He finally stood up to Laurie and her parents. I know it felt good to him because it definitely felt good to me. I especially liked the part where he talked about f#cking the sh*t out of Marissa; that made me chuckle. Sorry to hear about your comp problems but I will be keeping a lookout for future updates. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 13

I am that so glad Ron told Laurie about herself and added benefit was Ron telling her parents about themselves.  I am glad that he went to see Marissa!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 13

Great update...

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 12

Horie is up to something Ron don't fall for the banana in the tail pipe!  I want Horie to choke on nut because is wrong for her cheating and trifling ways!! Great chapet!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 05:49 pm

Title: Chapter 12

love the story

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 04:16 pm

Title: Chapter 11

very good update....Marissa is a charactor with a heart

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Ron is staying with Laurie during the holidays? It was bad enough that he was going to be spending them with her & her family but this is a whole other level of masochism! Now staying with Marissa, on the other hand, has potential for all kinds of things to happen. 

Thanks for the frequent updates. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 02:31 pm

Title: Cast Pics

Brilliant!

Loving your story!

:)  i swing by valent chamber everyday just to see if you have updated your story. :)

i wanna see Ron punch Laurie, figuratively speaking, with no regrets later.

I have a feeling Laurie will be coming back to Ron and begging him after he has got over her. :P she seems to belong to that 'class' of people....

i love Marissa and your frequent updates :)

i especially loved how brave Marissa was about asking Ron to spend Christmass with her.

Please finish the story.

I would love to see Ron and Marissa together and happy in the end  :D

 

Happy New Year to you :)

Reviewer: Tannistha Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 30 2013 12:01 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Laurie is bitch you who needs choke on nut from a fruit cake!  Rron didn't didn't have money but Laurie comes from money and it was hers that they took?  why would Ron see that ho at Christmas?  Ron didn't say that he slept with Marissa, horie jumped to that conclusion by herself and Ron didn't deny it out right. Don't like horie!!

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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 02:33 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Ron's heart of ice is slowly melting.   Marissa is good for him and because ng around Ron is making Marissa stand up for herself which is a good thing. I give this chapter two thumbs up!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2013 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 9

this chapter was pretty funny--although I am not feeling any chemistry between these two, yet.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2013 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 9

love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 05:12 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I feel so bad for Ron because Lauris is quite the bitch and the judge is allowing her to steal Ron's money.  That is legal extortion!   Does he have to pay that ho alimony too? Marissa give the man a break sure he treats you like crap better tlhis his life is in the crapper right now.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I like this chapter. Ron is finally showing some redeeming qualities. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 01:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Ah, I see him softening up.  Great update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 12:28 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I was wondering what happened to this story for so long. Glad its back.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 10:38 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Good update.  I hope that she doesn't regret telling Oliver about Ron.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 01:34 pm

Title: Chapter 8

What happened to you not saying anything Marissa? 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 01:31 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I feel bad for Ron because ex-wife fooled the judge and has now legally pilferred his money and loft.  I am glad that he apologized to Marissa.  Good stuff!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2013 09:29 am

Title: Chapter 7

Wow, that was shocking. Ron is being kinda of nice? Woah! LOL! Great job, can't wait for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 09:07 pm

Title: Chapter 7

LOL.  Is he going to work in wrinkled clothes the next morning?  I hope not.  Loved the update.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 10:16 am

Title: Chapter 7

I forgot to add, thanks for the frequent updates! 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 10:00 am

Title: Chapter 7

Why has Ron been angry for so long? The impression is that he's been that way for years but the divorce hasn't been in the works that long, has it? And what's the story behind his wife's cheating? I like Marissa and Ron, please continue.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 09:57 am

Title: Chapter 7

I knew that Marissa would treat Ron with kindness even though he doesn't deserve it.  Marissa is a good egg!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 07:05 am

Title: Cast Pics

I like it! I'm looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: Tia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 01:14 am



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