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Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

I knew something was rotten in Denmark!! I kept asking myself why Richard hated Anthony so much? Now the truth comes out!! Richard is still a bastard though. Anthony's momma got some  'splaining to do!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, she does.  Thanks Khamalani!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Holy Shit!!!  I swear I didn't see that one coming.  Please let Natalia tell him.  He needs to know and this will bring so much closure to everything.  Momma can't say crap!  Daddy isn't daddy so Nat can't feel bad about being with both of them.  Anthony will be hurt, but it just makes so much sense.  The way Richard treated him...everything!!  I'm glad Nat took the keys and left when Anthony told her to go home.  I'm also glad Anthony didn't have to fight his fake-ass daddy.  Crap where is Rich Jr. when you need him?? :0  Anyway, great chapter.  Hopefully there's a baby in the oven because they have come so far in their relationship in just one night.  Momma is gonna get it and good soon.  Ahh, I cant wait.  These cliffhangers be killin' me! Once again a perfect chapter...so good!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Michmom!  So glad you liked it.

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Date: February 28 2015 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

The best twist to this story would be for Anthony to be  Richard's half brother. Anthony's mother had a fling with Richard's father......Or Richard had had a vasectomy without wife's knowledge and never revealed. Great story!! 



Author's Response:

Mercede knew all about the vasectomy.  But the "my father is my brother" twist would be very interesting.  Thanks True2me!

Reviewer: True2me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Too good! I  knew Richard wasn't his father,  and I loved how you  slowly  revealed it. Looking  forward to seeing how Talia handles this information. 



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Thanks Kuriouskale!

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Date: February 28 2015 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Oh shit!!!!  Momma was creeping.  Please let her tell Anthony and bring this crap up if his mom tries anything.  This is why Richard's behind never loved Anthony.  Oh please tell Nat.  This is closure that Anthony needs in regards to Richard and a little fire power for his mom.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but the thing about ammo is it always has a potential to backfire.  Thanks Lajack!

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Date: February 28 2015 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Oh shit!!!!  Momma was creeping.  Please let her tell Anthony and bring this crap up if his mom tries anything.  This is why Richard's behind never loved Anthony.  Oh please tell Nat.  This is closure that Anthony needs in regards to Richard and a little fire power for his mom.

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Date: February 28 2015 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Oh. My. Gosh.



Author's Response:

Exactly.  Thanks JFJD!

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Date: February 28 2015 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Brilliant!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Pearlcat!

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Wow, so unexpected, so awesome a story!



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Thanks Jahchannah!

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Date: February 28 2015 06:49 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Oh wow, now I can almost understand why Richard treated Anthony the way he did only almost because Anthony was an innocent child and if he didn't want to raise another man's child, he should have divorced his wife at the time instead of mentally abusing an innocent child. As for Anothy's mother, wow. She's got some damn nerve. Once Anthony finds out his mother better not open her damn mouth about how he should run his life when she had the nerve to try to pawn another man's baby off on her husband. I bet she thinks she got away with it but for some reason Richard must have forgiven her. Maybe he was in love with her at one point and thought he could stay in the relationship with her but as Anthony got old, he was a constant reminder of her infidelity. That could possibly be why Richard is such a selfish douchebag, but then again he might have already been a douche because he got a vasectomy without telling his wife. That woman can have several seats. She's worse than the hood rats on Maury. This will hurt Anthony, not because Richard isn't his father but because his mother is a self righteous liar but this will make it easier for him to tell her to go kick rocks. I also hope he finds his real father and forms a real father son bond. This chapter was amazing. I love this story so much. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Happy2bNappy!  So happy you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 06:15 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Dun! Dun! Dun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Lol!  Thanks Dee!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

I'm on pins and needles 



Author's Response:

Me too.  Thanks SunnySideDown!

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Date: February 28 2015 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

I knew it!!!! Anthony is not Richard's son. Great build up!!! 



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Thanks True2me!

Reviewer: True2me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 05:03 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

I knew it was something up with Richard and why he was doing anthony like that. I don't know if I could tell him or not because I don't want him to feel as if I betrayed Anthony, but then I don't want him to go and catch a murder charge. This is so good.



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Thanks Dallas5star!

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Date: February 28 2015 04:34 pm

Title: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

These heart palpitations. .....I am going to have my doctors  start billing you for them lol



Author's Response:

Lol!  I'll set some funds aside.  Thanks Artamiss Caine!

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Date: February 28 2015 04:28 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Please let it be a baby or you will break my heart please dont break my heart



Author's Response:

Aw...  I'll see what I can do, but I make no guarantees.  Thanks Sweetrst1!

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2015 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

I have to say I'm hoping for them to be preggers I think hey need & deserve to be but if not they will face this together because they're communications are better & both has chose each other despite what anyone thinks.

Author's Response:

I fully agree.  Thanks Kvgurl!

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 25 2015 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

i forget to say that Thomas is on my s*** list...! what he said didn't impress me. not at all. i mean if Richard couldn't accept Anthony when he was an innocent child then what makes Thomas think that Richard would accept Anthony now, even if he dumped Natalia...?!! is there a reason behind Richard's hostile towards Anthony or he just resent him because Anthony was born at a time when Richard didn't want any more kids?

i'm was glad that Rich had a "come-to-Jesus (LOOL!) talk with him (which i'm curious to hear more about =p). however i was a bit disappointed in Anthony. he knew that Thomas wasn't happy hearing the "whole" story but he was glued to the phone. work or not i wished he would've been more supportive - instead Natalia stepped up and showed us a major change - she's done apologizing her love for Anthony.

along on my list of people that need to leave Anthony alone is his mother. i get that she's concern and worries about Anthony but she isn't listning to a word Anthony is saying - he's happy and that should be enough!

you've warned us that the road ahead is going to be tough and maybe the person i think  will bring everyone together - because i refuse to believe that this story wont have a HEA, JJ...! LOOL! - is Anthony's grandfather. i loved how he took Anthony fishing and i believe he will end the upcoming storm...

...weeell, at least i hope so, lool! thanks for the updates!



Author's Response:

I get your disappoint with Anthony.  He did leave the castle unguarded.  Between work and believing his brother had the good sense and decency not to go in on Nat as soon as his back was turned, he didn't anticipate a need to protect her from him.  Had Anthony not been on the phone, he would have probably been more aware of the tension and did what he needed to do to keep his brother in his place.  But Anthony feels he's behind the curve with Natalia, and is constantly working trying to measure up.  You'll get a bit more insight into that, what Rich told Thomas, why Richard resents Anthony, and the role Pop-Pop plays all of this very soon.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yuukiyanagi!!!

 

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2015 11:43 am

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Jesus...! What...!? We're having? You mean those tiny shoes might come to be used!!?? I just...

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Author's Response:

LOL!  I LOVE IT!!!  Thanks Yuukiyanagi!

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Date: February 24 2015 10:22 am

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Oh Joelle, I'm throwing myself at the mercy of your kindness and goodness, please let the baby be real, in fact, please let it be twins, a boy and a girl cause let's face it, Natalia's not getting any younger and I read somewhere that a person has a greater chance of having twins the older they get. Js. Besides, after all those two have gone through and probably will go through with his disapproving family and crazy Sabrina, they deserve to be happy. I think Sabrina will try to cause more trouble but might back off when she finds out about the babies, I doubt someone like her will want to raise someone else's biracial kids. I can see Anthony's mother giving Natalia a hard time but  I think she will behave when the babies( I hope babies, lol) come because she wants to be in her grandkids life. She may never like Natalia but she'll behave for the sake of her grandbabies. As for Anthony's father Richard, he can go kick rocks. I hope he remains bitter until the end and dies from psoriosis. Another great update.



Author's Response:

I love how you took that twins idea and ran with it.  Sabrina is still very much in love with Anthony (or thinks she is), so a couple biracials babies might not be too much for her to handle.  And you're right that Anthony's mother would likely be softened by the propect of not getting to see her grandbabies (grandbabies? Now you got me doing it) if there are any babies to by had. 

No need to wait for cirrhosis to take Richard out (Lol).  When he finds out about Nat and Ant and the pregnancy, he'll more than likely have a coronary. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Happy2bNappy!

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2015 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 1 - Cougars

I'm having a hard time liking Natalia something about her just irks the shit out of me but I still wanna see her get her happy ending even if her personality and hypocrisy are tap dancing on my last remaining nerve.

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Date: February 24 2015 12:13 am

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Nat with the damn dramatics in the beginning of this chapter had me hella shook. I was expecting the worst. But when she told him she was pregnant I was like...

Hopefully, in eight weeks we'll hear good news. You kept me on my toes the whole chapter, JJ. Loved it.



Author's Response:

Lol!  I love that clip.  Thanks CaramelGal!  So glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2015 08:34 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

The title of this chapter gives me hope, please give her a baby, pleeeease. I'm so emotionally invested in this story, it's not even funny.



Author's Response:

No promises, but I'll see what I can do.  Thanks Crayola10!

Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 23 2015 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Damn, Anthony amazes me more and more.  That man right there and I do mean MAN.  Sabrina behind is only saying this crap b/c she wants Anthony and he doesn't want her.  SHE is trying to use his family to get him.  Natalia isn't using his family, she ONLY wants him.  She would also be willing to let him go if he would be happy with someone else because she loves him.  Hmm, Sabrina what about you??  Why are you "friends" with your ex's mother like that, cordial is fine but talking to her about his and Rich's business.  I hope Rich don't find out or he might just catch a case.  His mother doesn't know him and is trying to bully him into an unhappy life.  I now really wonder if Rich loved his wife or if she was the family's choice.

Hmmm, can't wait for more updates and please let Natalia be pregnant and she carries the baby full term.  They both need more sunshine.

 



Author's Response:

Anthony is doing his best to step up to the plate with Natalia.  That's going to become harder once his family gets involved.  And if Sabrina goes all crazy, julted ex on him, that'll happen sooner rather than later.  Rich finding out she's been dogging him would be a very bad thing.  He already doesn't like her and is protective of Nat, Ant, and their relationship. 

Rich's relationship with his wife was complicated.  I don't know how much I'll get into it in this story, but you'll probably see at least a glimpse.

And yes, Ant and Nat need a lot more sunshine in their lives.  But Nat knows to prepare for the worst, because a storm is always brewing.  Stay tuned...  Thanks Lajack!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2015 06:51 pm

Title: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

It's a bitch that Ant's mom and Sabrina are trying to run his life. I understand being concerned as a parent, but after he told them what he wants and he's happy multiple times, at some point you have to let go and let them live their life.

I really hope things work out favorably for Natalia and Ant this time around.  



Author's Response:

I agree with your approach to parenting adults.  We'll keep our fingers crossed for a bouncing baby something.  Thanks Musicluva!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2015 05:00 pm



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