Title: Chapter 9

Come back! 😭

Author's Response:

LOL! Celestial Child, I'll get back to this story at some point. I just published one of my first stories on Amazon. It's called "Thank God for Dogs" - you can find it at www.amazon.com/dp/B07W3PLXD5

Reviewer: CelestialChild Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great update!  I've finally caught up, looking forward to more.  

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 07:02 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Stacy needs to go somewhere sit disease ridden cooch down.  Love Charity, that little girl is a live wire! !    More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2015 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 9

More, more, please. Please continue the story. 

Reviewer: Iliketoread Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I need an update on this story. It's so good. I hope Ben ships Stacy off somewhere where she isn't needed or can't be found.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 9

You gotta gives us more... I'm enjoying this to much! lol

Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Awww he's really a sweeties

Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Oh Come ON!!!! A chiffhanger seriously??!!! I will have to track this story so that i do not miss out on anything. 

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 06:22 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Good twist, I didn't see that coming at all

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 9

Good grief...their marriage was screwed up before it got started. God thing Nana was in the picture, no telling how Charity would be right now.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 9

great update!  

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 9

DON DON DONNNNNN!!!! LOL! His late was super DUMB. That man is fine, rich, loving father and wanting her only then she CHEATS. WTF??? Great chapter, I was sooo happy that Stacy got her ass handed to her. You don't mess with a parent's baby girl, Ben was not having that. Go, Char :D


Please post more soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 05:51 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Stacy is working me and she is working me hard.  It's all I can do not to want so badly to be written in the story and give that heifer an old time beatdown. I just want to kick her teeth in.

Charity poor thing gets not discipline from Daddy which does not understand that its only hurting her instead of helping the all around situation not only for Jazz sake with her care but all around structure for Charity herself.

So with Bella having a sex addiction is it a fact that Charity is Ben's child and not the next man's?

Great update more please.  Thank you

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 11:37 am

Title: Chapter 9

I anbsolutley love this. Just read all 9 chapters. This is turning out to be so complex and that is greatly appreciated. Can't wait for the chp. 10


Reviewer: IndianChocolate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 05:14 am

Title: Prologue

i was not expecting that.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 9

Charity is not the one. She "handled" Stacey. Had me rolling.

But on the real, Charity needs to be taken in hand. Hopefully, Jazz will be able to make a difference. Miss Charity is a DIVA.

So, now we see why Ben was sexing that skank while married to Bella. However, did he really have to do it? I know he needed to ease the tension, but to screw around with an employee for that long is asking for trouble. How could he not see that? For a smart business man, he is a DUMB man. I am glad that he's being honest with Jazz.

Can't wait to see her reaction to that little bombshell.

Enjoyable update as always.

Author's Response:

Hi BellaChica! I'm reaching out to you because you were a faithful reader in the past. Today I launched my first book on Amazon and I wanted you to know. It has been updated since my humble days on VC so I encourage you to check it out if you'd like! It's FREE for the next five days! You can find Thank God for Dogs at www.amazon.com/dp/B07W3PLXD5. Happy Reading! 


Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 9

Talk about dropping a bomb! So he was sleeping with his assistant because he could not deal with the fact his wife was a sex addict, and had cheated on him several times. So in order to cope they decided to have an "open" marriage...WOW!!! That explains why Stacy acts like he belongs to her exclusively. Oh well she better get ready to find a new job, because she just made the ultimate mistake....yelling at the boss' daughter and making her wait to see him... that was  a big NO NO!!! 


Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

Wow!  I love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 12:53 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh wowzer! Hello revelations...Jasmine is in trouble though.  Her heart is already in it with this family and now she know this about Ben's past....

Great chapter, absolutley love it when I see these updates.

Reviewer: diggity35 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 8

I just wanna say I'm am so loving this story and want more! Please please update and let me add a man with a deep British accent just does things to me its so attractive ;)

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 8

YES!!! Loving it!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 08:07 am

Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful story!

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 7

Oh, I am in love with this story! Please update soon. I eagerly await your next installment!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 05:15 am

Title: Chapter 8

Ok, why did she go all Florida Evans on us?

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2014 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 8

I know how u feel.  I always tell my husband he had me at hello.  He is Australian.  I love your stories:)

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Date: January 23 2014 11:13 pm

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