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Title: Chapter 9

Thank you =)

 Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 09:57 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Yes!!!! You are back and what a chapter to return on.

So they finally came together ;-) (yes pun intended). I really miss this story and was checking the site frequently for an update.  THANK YOU, so much for the updating. 

I hope lukas finally let's his emotional boundaries down and let's Elise love him. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Ok woman I'm going to need a good drink after reading this. Dammmmmmmmmmmm that was hot hot hot  to the hot ok.  I knew it was Paul i had feeling about him. Why would he do this is the big question.  I hope he doesnt' regret sleeping with her and hope the same for her. Thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 05:44 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Yes, Elise finally admitted her feelings. I would like for Elise to apologize to Lukas. But I am glad that they are both giving into their feelings. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 04:08 pm
Title: Cast Pics

Missing this story. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 12:55 am
Title: Chapter 7

Elise definitley deserves an apology too. Lukas is a colossal ass and why does she let him and her father run all over her? I thought she was suppossed to be strong and successful. She's a bit of a pushover.

 Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2014 09:40 am
Title: Cast Pics

Thank you for the update.  Adding Keith to the mix, the game just changed. .....

Please update soon! !!!

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2014 01:50 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Dam Keith is fine hell I will give him chance just call me. Boy I was super shocked that he kiss her but ,you can tell he is feeling her big time. Just when you get burn badly it very hard to trust someone. Thanks for the updated you rock.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2014 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 8

Oh Elise, don't do it. Lukas is not going to like this. I'm looking forward to meeting Mila.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 04:39 am
Title: Chapter 8

Hark - a contender appears! Man, how did I know Tyson Beckford was going to be Keith? =D

 Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 8

Tyson, that man is still fine!!  I am so glad that Elise has finally seen the light about her behavior sexual and otherwise but now she's running!! Team Lukas!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 08:28 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 08:24 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Noooooo E don't do it... Keith's not the one for you boo

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 07:17 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Great update!

 Reviewer: Aiwen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2014 05:33 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I hope that Elise will grow up. At least she isn't acting like the spoil rich girl anymore. I like Lukas and I can't wait to see him interact with his daughter. What is going on with Kori? I hope that we find out soon. Will Devyn have her baby and wedding in this story or Kori's story? Thanks for a great read. I am looking forward to reading more. Take care until the next update.

 Reviewer: Divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2014 04:20 am
Title: Cast Pics

Like the development of Elise's character, baby girl is growing up.

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Awwwwwwwww! :( Poor things !

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Fantastic update ;-)

 Reviewer: Juliet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 11:37 am
Title: Chapter 7

More please. Good chapter.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 05:36 am
Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter!

 Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2014 02:50 am
Title: Chapter 7

I'm shocked that she said I'm sorry but I'm glad that she did. You can't play mind games with someone heart and maybe Lukas will give her  a chance. Now something tells me  their  is  a mole  in her father company that is doing this  or someone from a rival company making sure these accidents happen. Either way I hope the find out soon thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 03:54 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Elise has finally grown up to bad it almost dying that to happen.  I am glad that she opened up to Kori as she needed to hear how wrong she was. Elise actully felt guilt for how she treated Lukas. It was sweet that she caressed his jaw after offering her apology and what a sexy jaw it is. This is some good story telling!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 02:17 pm
Title: Cast Pics

 Enjoy this chapter.  What's up with Kori?  Am looking forward to reading her journey. 

Am enjoying all three of these ladies stories and the journey they're experiencing both individual and collectively.  Kori, Elise and Devyn friendship is so genuine you can tell they really support, love and care for each other. Love how they encourage each other to learn to accept and love themselves whilst at the same time encouraging each other to find happiness and to reach their full potential.

Simply loving this story :-) 

 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 12:49 am
Title: Chapter 6

Great update! Thank you.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2014 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 6

Loving this chapter. 

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Date: April 06 2014 09:30 pm


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