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Title: Seven

It was dumb of her but she had to try, I guess.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 09:06 am
Title: Seven

Amora is in trouble....

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 06:29 pm
Title: Seven

Glad there has been an update. Excited to see what happens next

 Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 04:16 am
Title: Seven

Please update sooon!!!! Like this story. She really should have paid attention now I think she really just upset him. The characters are blossoming. Like the bodyguard giving up info about Noah and how this is the first time he has opened up some. Keep the updates coming loving this story. 

 Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 02:07 am
Title: Seven

She should have know that wouldn't work, but certainly understand her trying. This whole thing is still surreal for her.

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Date: December 01 2014 01:10 am
Title: Seven

Now, did she really think Noah didn't have contingency plans on this first outing.  C'mon now.  Looking forward to how he handles her at home.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 08:36 pm
Title: Seven

I can't wait to see what happens!! Thanks for updating. 

 Reviewer: xDangerousLovex Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 04:21 pm
Title: Seven

Damn, she didn't get very far, her father is such an asshole!!  Noah will probably handcuff her to bed now. Thank you for the update.

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Date: November 30 2014 01:57 pm
Title: Seven

She sucks, she's in so much trouble now lol.

 Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 01:35 pm
Title: Seven

Loved the update! He knew she was going to try to escape. Now she's in trouble!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 07:28 am
Title: Seven

Glad to see an update! What's going to happen next! I can't wait!



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Thank you for reviewing!!! And you'll have to stay tuned :)

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 05:27 am
Title: Six

Please continue

 Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 12:15 pm
Title: Six

I like this tale. Can't go wrong with an possessive or obsessive hottie that is wealthy. You should read "The Rancher's Callous Heart."

Some constructive criticism... umm, I do like the story, but the tone should be adjusted. 

Something about the story is off. Either he's a real jerk that is into BDSM (the chain and basement. That was weird just to have her change her clothes?) or he's a possessive man (you're mine to blah blah blah); which I love in a tale.

i think I recognize what it is about this story. It is rushed. You seem to miss some major character adjusting events/moments. His character is now no longer a jerk after kidnapping her earlier in the evening? Slow their budding relationship down. But then this is just my opinion.  Anxiously waiting for chapt. 7 

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2014 03:46 am
Title: Six

Intersting story! Can't wait for more!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 02:22 pm
Title: Six

I just found this jewel.  So far I'm really enjoying it.  I'm confused about why he initially chained her in the basement and then hours later introduced her to his friends.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 06:26 pm
Title: Six

Welcome back

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 04:55 am
Title: Six

Great update...

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Date: September 05 2014 05:48 pm
Title: Six

I'm so glad you got your enthusiasm for this story back. I love this story.

 Reviewer: kier101 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 04:47 am
Title: Six

Interesting story so far! Hope she is able to blossom while with him. Seems like she had a tough life growing up with her dad!

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Date: September 05 2014 01:50 am
Title: Six

So glad that you updated. More, please. :)

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Date: September 05 2014 12:26 am
Title: Six

Honestly, Noah confuses me. He's a dangerous man, and can change dispositions at the speed of light! That's a little nerve-wracking! He smiles at her one minute and threatens the next. Amora interests him. Why? 

And Amora, she's all over the place with her emotions and reactions, but I get it with her. She's freaked out beyond belief at what is happening to her. She's going to become some crime bosses' sex slave as payment from her father! Or maybe not? 

And what was with that growling he did at the dinner?

This is going to be interesting to watch.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 07:59 pm
Title: Six

I'm loving this story but I wish you would write longer chapters.

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Date: September 04 2014 07:44 pm
Title: Six

I am so glad for the update.  Can't wait for the next chapter

 Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 03:42 pm
Title: Six

Yep, her father was a asshole and needs to have a come to Jesus meeting via Noah..  She wants to sleep with him, so yeah i think that she is attracted to Noah.   I believe that Noah will treat her better than she has been treated in her whole life.  Me likey!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 01:35 pm
Title: Six

I hope u update soon

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Date: September 04 2014 08:33 am


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