This shit! Is going to take sixty chapters before she have a break through. I'm done.
Author's Response:
??? I am surprised and disappointed at your description of my story.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 18 2014 03:09 pm
Too many memories, it's starting to take away from the story.
Author's Response:
Jodi's memories play a HUGE part in her present!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 18 2014 07:33 am
Why had her day already been cancelled?
Author's Response:
Beth is a very efficient assistant. She anticipated that Jodi would need another day to recover.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 05:10 am
If I had a choice of dealing with Steve and being lonely. I believe I would choose the lonely. They are both crazy, her for letting him in her house and him this goes way beyound tame BDMS, he is breaking her down.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2014 05:06 am
Kevin is truly obsessed....but I don't know if that's such a bad thing. I guess it depends on how hot he is lol. He has a huge sexual apatite and seems to be flawless in bed but that means nothing if he can't stimulate Jodi's mind. She was in love with Greg and never slept with him so point proven.
Author's Response:
Great observation!
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 10:17 pm
Not liking Kevin either, I am team Steve all the way! Jodi needs to go to doctor, the headaches concern me.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 17 2014 08:16 pm
Another great chapter , I hope Jodi get helps before the flashes spiral out of control.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 04:49 am
Damnnnnn.....that was hot. Kevin really knows how to put it down, just like Jodi I would of been in his bed 2 months later lol. I was hoping Greg would give her another chance, but IMO that night with Kevin should have her seeing no one else but him. Now only if she could have that with Steve then this story would be perfect. Craig is boring me to tears, like seriously the girl barely flirted with him and he starts blushing like a school girl...No not sexy. Matt is irrelevant to me...sorry.
Can Jodi finally go to therapy so she can stop all this mess and become a grown woman. I need her to start a grown up relationship, hell she is 40. But please don't let her relationship be with Matt or Craig...I don't want to be bored. Anyway, good chapter, it looks like Jodi's past is way more interesting than her present. So please updat with more of her past.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I must say that I do get a tad bit more enjoyment when I write about her past. Her life as an older adult can be mundane, but let's see if it sparks up! :)
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: May 10 2014 04:55 pm
This is to hot!!! Excellent!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Anonymous, for the review and for sticking it out with me.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 10 2014 01:08 pm
Oh. My. Bob. That was raw and hot and I think I need a drink and a cigarette to finish that chapter off right.
Author's Response:
LOL! Yeah, I almost bought a pack of ciggies myself!
Reviewer: Alle Xandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 10 2014 07:32 am
impeccable chapter :) like always
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: May 10 2014 01:52 am
Jodi needs help and needed help since she was raped. Jodi is much too free with her body, she wanr2 to feel in control of body by sexing any man coming near her. Was that scene with Kevin af5er Greg had kicked her to the curb? I am trying so hard to sympathize with Jodi, but I can't get past ghe stupid. Good stuff!
Author's Response:
Yes. The scene with Kevin was after Greg broke up with her. More Jodi "adventures" to come...unfortunately, things will get worse before they get better . Thanks for your review, pmgayles.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 10 2014 01:38 am
:/
If you turn Jodi into some ratchet ass hoe, i will forever consider this story as a fucking joke. This story was sooooo good! But when you had her kiss Matt .... Steve's brother of all people ..... it just kinda got disgusting. (what she and steve got going on is erotic and cute and hot, but when you add matt into the mix you just make her look like a whore).
Reviewer: ogechiokafor78 Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2014 08:17 am
I absolutely love your story. It is intense and it is real. Great job
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 04 2014 03:30 am
Loved this chapter :)
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2014 03:17 pm
So old azz is forty two now? No matter Jodi have a lot of nerve to say how Steve wants to fuck her whenever, but here she is doing the same almost with all those guys she came across. ugh. I don't like her at all.
Author's Response:
Yes, Jodi is 42 now and is haunted by memories of her past.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 03 2014 02:05 pm
WHEN IS SHE GETTING HELP!
Reviewer: lord Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 03 2014 08:50 am
What is triggering her memories? Getting drunk and havimg sex with men thay she knows won't cure what ails you Jodi. Craig deserves better rhan whay Jodi will give him, Jodi maube you need to realize that Steve treats how you allow him too, You want a relationship but your behavior doesn't say that, your behavior says all I want is sex! Jodi get some help sweetie, she needs a guard dog that will bite Dan in his ass!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2014 06:27 am
uhm i dont know i have never heard of anyone masterbating with a pillow i am going to keep reading and see how it goes
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2014 04:21 am
When Jodi is with Steve I like her. Those two need to let it out in the open...Jodi needs therapy.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 30 2014 07:36 pm
Lol, I love them. With Steve and Jodi everything is so light. There is just this push and pull you get from them that is so enjoyable to read. I have to say Jodi is less annoying when around him. Excited for more update soon.
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2014 06:32 am
Steve is a jerk. Seriously. Why is he messing with her when he knows that his brother has sincere and serious intentions? He's not even a gentleman. He's crude. His invitation was ridiculous and immature. Ask her to dinner. As he can see, she has plenty of offers of sex with nicer men. Give me a break. His game is weak. I hope she focuses her attention on getting better and dating someone that sees her as more than an object to satiate his deviant desires.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2014 10:05 pm
This story is a confusing rollercoaster ride. Jodi knows she needs to seek help again. All these men around does not seem to be helping her mental state. It's almost unfair what she's doing to them.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2014 08:03 pm
Jodi is always running away. Steve should just come at Jodi right although she'd stll be stupid. Steve is jerk yet I still like her.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 29 2014 07:07 pm