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Title: Chapter 36

Where were they when they had sex at the office? Anonymous I want Jodi and Steve together too!



Author's Response:

Steve and Jodi have never had sex in either of their offices.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2014 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 1

I can't stand Jodi right now but I do agree Steve is the one for if she gives him a chance and get some freaking help.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 10:05 pm

Title: Chapter 36

I know I am in the minority, but I want Jodi and Steve together.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 36

I'm trying to figure out why Jodi has so much attitude with Steve? What exactly did he do? From what I remember it was her who let him in her house and almost fucked him with barely knowing him for 2 seconds. She then almost fucks him in her office and he succeeds getting the ass at her place. And didn't she just say just thinking about him makes her wet. Now he's the worst thing in the world. Ok Jodi...I see you. Sorry but I really don't care about Craig..he's boring and Jodi with this whole "connection" with him is not convincing but whatev.



Author's Response:

Jodi is still angry with Steve because he called her demanding to know if Matt was still at her house the night before he left for St Louis.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 03:33 pm

Title: Chapter 36

I really can't stand Jodi right now.  Jodi allowed Steve to sex her up in his office that last time. Jodi was the one trying to  have sex with his brother Matt. Her behavior has been just as bad as Steve's, so why treat him so disrespectfully? She had no control over what Kirk did to her especially since she was scared to tell her brother. She can control her behavior and reactions now.  She needs to be by herself until she gets therapy and begins working on her issues.  Steve has treated her as she has allowed herself to be treated. Smh, at Jodi!



Author's Response:

FYI...Jodi and Steve  have never had sex in either of their offices.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 36

Ugh. I cannot stand Steve. He's a jerk. I mean, wtf?! Why is he bothering her with this childish crap? It's not as if they had a strong connection. Steve needs to buzz off.

I would've shoved Dan if he grabbed my arm. He needs a good cussing out. Actually, that might turn on the little freak. 

Jodi needs to see her therapist pronto. She's unraveling and having melt downs nearly every day. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 12:44 pm

Title: Chapter 36

Jodi needs help.  The crying fest as she calls them are coming more frequently and so are the nightmares about Kirk ass.  Have I told you recently how much I dislike that troll.

Craig is a sweetie all these nice men coming into her life but she is a wreck waiting to happening.  Jodi go back to your therapist and get help there is nothing wrong with asking for help.

Dan is creepy Magee and needs to be put down.  Gives me shivers and not in a good way.

Steve is a trip but I like how strong Jodi was then her stomach had to give her away.  LOL!

Thank you chica for the update appreciate it.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 10:01 am

Title: Chapter 36

I hope she keep an eye on dan. He seems pretty fuckig weird.

Reviewer: risk19 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 32

Seems that Jodi's crush has simliar things in common.  I wonder where this relationship will go.  Baby girl though does still need to get some help behind Kirk's trifling ass and his abuse of her.  I wish she could tell her stepbrother what all happened with her.

She deserves happiness and she is not this whore she preceives herself to be she just needs to get help to see that.

I don't think Steve is going to be happy with this new development.

Thank you for the update.  I am finally getting able to get caught up.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 09:26 am

Title: Chapter 35

Short and Sweet your right! So, I was glad Jodi apologized, but I was definitely scared for her when Matt called her out lol. Like damn he put it all out there unlike some dudes who would of played it off like it didn't matter. Truly I was shocked but happy once he let it go.

Any who, Jodi's self talk there was a little disturbing, I mean this girl puts a new meaning to self loathing. IMO I find nothing wrong with exploring your sexuality but she's doing it in a way of self punishment. Obviously therapy never worked for her because if it did then she wouldn't be this screwed up. I can't believe she thinks what that ass did to her was her fault. And for her to go around trying to spread it for any guy who shows her a little attention as a result is just bad. I think she should forget about that Craig guy, keep Matt as a friend, and see where things go with Steve. 

I really hope you do write another chapter today because I'm so ready for Steve to return, I miss him. I want him to come back and get Jodi to put her walls down because I really do believe they can have something special. Steve is not a bad guy, I think it was really sweet when he defended his brother's feelings. I have to admit he's a little obsessive & possessive but the way he wears it is so damn sexy lol. I can't wait for the nex installment.

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 06:27 am

Title: Chapter 35

I am so annoyed with Jodi, it is fine that she wants to journal her feelings but she still needs to talk to a therapist.  Maybe she would do better with a female psychiatrist? I am trying to feel sympathetic to Jodi but damn she's stuck on stupid!  I am glad that she apologized to Matt, buf for him to call her and not the other way around bugs me. Jodi is mentally stuck at fhe age that she was first raped her emotional part of her brain has never matured. I want her to realize  that having sex with every man that she meets is not the cure but a symptom of her problem. If she wants companionship try not to jump every man in your presence.  

I am so done with Jodi, you will have those things that you want until you heal you psyche. More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 02:46 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Matt is too good for her. She needs to hang on tightly to his friendship while she works on her issues. She should marry this guy! He was super nice when he could've (and justifiably) been a douche. Matt is awesome. He's not going to put up with crap but he does it in a very kind mature way.

Jodi impressed me this chapter. She kept it together on the phone with Matt and was able to articulate why she behaved so poorly. 

Jodi needs help and there's no shame in that. She shouldn't beat herself up over it. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 02:34 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Jodi is in a really bad place right now. She needs to see her therapist; she's unraveling. She's ready to have sex with everyone in her circle. Fortunately, Matt and Craig are not willing to hop in bed on the first date (which weren't even real dates). She needs to handle her issues. She's using these men to keep her bad memories at bay (that Steve's nonsense triggered). She should try to meet some new friends (women friends) and get a new creative hobby (painting, writing, whatever) because she needs an outlet. She needs better coping skills and how to not feel so miserable alone. 

Did Jodi even call poor Matt?! She should've called him first thing in the morning or sent an edible fruit arrangement or something. She better not ruin it with Matt. Matt would probably give her the time she needs to work through her immediate issues and encourage her. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2014 01:52 pm

Title: Chapter 34

This woman is mess up. Lonely I don't think so. Damages is more like!!! Good read.  I do fel sorry for those men she is leading on, because of her damages past. Jodi needs therapy now.

 

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 34

First and foremost, I like Jodi and I just feel like now that she digging herself in a deeper hole. She KNOWS that she needs help, but she decides not to do it. I am going to put the rape on the side for now, but this messiness of a drama is her doing all because she doesn't want to be lonely. I do believe it is based off of fear that she needs someone there to protect her from harm or something, but she's going about it the wrong way. I am SO glad that Craig told Jodi that he wants to take things slow, and I already gave him brownie points for that. The fact that she felt hurt by his decision just lets me further know that she needs help. First of all, she needs to know how to defend herself, stay true to herself, and cut off all contact with all of these men, including Craig, so that she can work on herself.

Jodi knows this. What she needs to do is to confront her past face-to-face because who is winning in all of this is not her, its Kirk because Kirk is looking like the good guy because she did not tell her family and friends about what had happened. She needs to get help, face her family and Kirk, tell her family what Kirk did, put his ass on blast, and lock his ass up. After that continue to get help and not see any men for about a year or two until she fully love herself and being back to who she truly is all over again. Right now, she is not capable of having a relationship.

I am just waiting for her to call Matt and telling him that she hope they could be friends. Again, if Matt accepts, then fine. If he doesn't, then that's his decision. But MY GOSH JODI stop the madness already honey and get help.

Keep updating because I am here till the very end. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your input. Keep it coming!

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2014 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 34

What's to enjoy? Craig, Steve , Mitch, Matt, Dan, Kirk, fuck the mail man?! This story just became a headache because of Jodi. I can't deal she don't want HELP!!!!! This shit remains me a story I once saw on lifetime.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 11:57 am

Title: Chapter 34

Yeah, I'm done with Jodi. Yes I know that she is a victim of sexual abuse. But that is still not an excuse to be acting like a desperate slut. Hope that Craig will stay the hell away from that ho. Any decent guy ho is looking for something serious would drop her ass after that stunt. She talked to the guy for 1/2 days and she already asked him to fuck her. I'm sorry guys but she is loose and she acting like a ho. If this was the other way around, as in Jodi was the one who was interested in Craig and Craig asked her to stay to sleep with him after knowing her for only 1 or 2 days, everyone would be calling him a jerk who is only looking for sex. Well this is exactly what Jodi is doing. I think that that is the only thing she wants from Craig or any other man. Sex, while clearly is attracted to him, it doesn't seem that she is also interested in him for something more than sex. Nothing wrong with that, but its still disgusting. 

Reviewer: anony Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 10:07 am

Title: Chapter 34

No offence but this story has just to many guys, that I feel that I won't be able to keep up. There is Steve, Matt, Mitch, creepy Dan,  Craig and I think that as the story continues Kirk will also appear again. I know that this is your story and all, but if you can try tone it down a little bit. I personally find it a little bit exaggerated when there is so many guys showing interest in to the main girl. I'm not saying that its impossible. Its just not really realistic. And besides that its just to many characters which is overwhelming.

 

As for Jodi, I just don't know. I kind of felt sad for her in the beginning and was understanding about her traumatic past. But as the story progress I like her less and less. She is just too easy, its ridiculous. She had talk to him like what 2 days, and she already wants to sleep with him. I'm glad that at least Craig has some self restraint. Because Jodi clearly does not. I know that she has problems and all. But seriously, that is just to much. And In my opinion you can't always use that as an excuse. Also I think that Craig me be genuinely interested in her. But its obvious to me that all Jodi wants and looks for in a man is what they have between their legs. She needs help ASAP.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 09:55 am

Title: Chapter 34

Uhhh....I don't know. I feel like Jodi jumping from guy to guy is blah. It's like every guy she's with is just not genuine. Seriously her crying over this Craig guy was strange, girl it was just one evening with him and she caught feelings that quick & hard. Girly got really deep and rooted issues, I hope she gets help. 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 34

Jodi is annoying me again, i want her acknowledge that she needs help. Dan is getting creepier with each chapter.  He is a rapist waiting to happen..  Why hasn't she called Steve or Matt back to apologize?  i just want slap some sense into Jodi!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 34

Hey there, I really like this story and look forward to each new chapter, the only thing I could criticise about it is that it is getting to broad, meaning I think there is just to many storylines, too many guys, keep it simple with Steve, Matt and Mitch if you want the love triangle thing.  Its just getting a bit complicated and it means that I like Jodi less and less as the story progresses.  I hope you don't take offence to this, if you like it the way it is who cares what I think :)

Reviewer: Jo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 33

I'm with Steve too! He really likes Jodi and wants something with her, but she's thinking so wrongly of him because she f!ck up. Now, i can see if she told him and he blew her off then he had his chance. She didn't as of yet. Either way Jodi is not for him he should cut his losses because this child is so ready to spread like peanut butter.

Therapy ASAP!!!

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: April 23 2014 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 33

Oh no, I do not like that. I'm totally Team Steve, so her saying that she is his whore is not good. I feel like she's saying that she is in the same situation with Steve like she was with her rapist...ah no! From what I read everything with Steve was VERY consensual and VERY enjoyable. Jody needs to get it together, and keep the guys at a minimum. I like Matt but he's Steve's brother so she should drop him. And Craig?!

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 33

I’m trying to understand Jodi. She is a victim of sexual abuse and she needs help. It’s sad that she won’t realize that. Now like I said, I know that Jodi had it hard and that she is a victim and all, but I’m starting to not like her a little. She is putting herself in to a mess that she can’t handle.  She has all these guys after her and she is kind of leading them on and gives them the impression that they may have a chance.


I’m very glad that she had a great time with Craig. She really deserves it. But the way she is handling things with Matt and Steve is not right. She needs to be honest and clear with Matt. She is leading the guy and that is not fair to him.  And besides that she is sleeping or slept with his brother. Again I know about her being a victim and all, but that doesn’t mean that she doesn’t know that sleeping with one brother, and going on dates and leading the other on is wrong. 


As for Craig I don’t know about him yet. He seems like a cool guy, but its still too soon yet since we don’t know a lot about him. And if she wants to continue seeing him, she will have to stop sleeping with Steve or be honest with Craig that she is not looking for something serious. Then he will know where he stands, and she won’t be leading him on. I still think that Steve could be right for her if he stops being so bossy and persistence on her. 

Reviewer: Lissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 10:40 am

Title: Chapter 33

what a stink bitch, lol, can u clear something up please, is Jodi 45 or 25??



Author's Response:

Jodi is 45. I had discrepancies in some of the memories of her highschool years (beginning in 28) which are addressed in a chapter 31 review by Sunnysidedown. In my efforts to "save" Jodi I had her use a cell phone which was pretty much nonexistent in the years of 1986 and 1987...

Sorry for the confusion..most memories are in italics, if that helps.

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 07:08 am



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