I don't know. I like Matt, but I also like feel that Jodi and Steve could have something as big as a jerk as he is, lol. Jodi kissing Matt is not cool since she and Steve have been sleeping together. Matt is open and I see him getting hurt. I don't think Jodi know what she wants right now. I do not think leading Matt on is the answer though. Steve has tougher exterior than Matt, but that doesn't mean he can't be hurt just as badly. Steve is just so demanding and while I am certain it gets on Jodi's nerves, she cannot deny her attraction even if she wants to. I think Jodi might feel that Matt is a better pick than Steve and a lot of ways he could be. Matt doesn't seem to have baggage. Now, I think Steve would try his hardest not to let his ex or anyone else or thing hurt Jodi, but Jodi has to decide and going from one brother to the next is low, even for Jodi. I like Jodi, she's been through so much and I guess you can get so caught up and wonder, 'How the hell did this happen?' or 'What the heck was I thinking?' So, hopefully she will figure out what she wants without hurting herself, Matt or Steve in the process.
Although I like Matt a lot and worry about him and his feelings the most, I like Jodi and Steve together.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 04:21 pm
What relationship? They're just having sex. They're not even friends. She has more of a relationship with Matt than Steve. All Steve has done is invited himself over food and sex. He has not even taken her out on a real date nor has he expressed any interest in doing so. He has not done anything to court her as a gentleman. He bought her sex toys. Those were not nice gifts. Those gifts are indicative of their relationship -- just sex! The only thing he's done that was alright is make her a couple meals. He has not expressed any interest beyond sex with Jodi. They could not even sustain a phone conversation.
She and Matt did get carried away but it seems as if he's genuinely interested in getting to know her or at least is smooth enough to pretend. I don't know who Steve thinks he is but he should back off. Maybe she's not into all the craziness he's trying to bring. All that could be an experiment for her. Steve's personality is whack; he's a brute, rude, and just not cool. She and Steve don't really have a real connection. She sees that. Plus, it seems as if he's a trigger for her.
Author's Response:
I was referring to Jodi and Greg... :)
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 04:12 pm
Okay, this situation could turn out very nasty. Matt is a much better match for Jodi. She and Steve don't have poop to talk about. Their conversation was stilted over the phone. The conversation seems to flow with Matt. Plus, Matt is not a jerk. All she and Steve are doing is hooking up. Hopefully, their hook ups won't ruin a potential nice long term relationship with Matt.
Dan is freaking scary. Seriously. She needs to start carrying pepper spray with her. She needs to report his irresponsible pet owner behavior to the homeowners' association.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 03:54 pm
Okay, no, it's not cool to jump from brother to brother. If she was serious about getting to know Matt then she should not have had sex with Steve. Mitch is fair game but Matt is a nonstarter now.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 03:14 pm
Steve needs to get lost. If she wants to date Matt and Mitch, then let her. She's single with no kids. Maybe she's not that interested in dudes with kids. I don't like guys like Steve. He's weird and a jerk. He's always imposing on her. He's not any different than Mitch's secretary.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 03:03 pm
I have a bad feeling about fhis trip home, will that ass Kirk show up? Please update soon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 03:00 pm
I'd rather be lonely.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 17 2014 02:58 pm
Dan is creeptastic, He is a sex offender and Jodi needs to watch him. She needs to get a dog for protection. Please she so needs to go back to therapy! I had to read this last chappy again.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 02:36 pm
Dan is creepy, Jodi really needs be careful around him.... have s feeling he's another Kirk.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 04:52 am
Dan is creepy, Jodi really needs be careful around him.... have s feeling he's another Kirk.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 04:51 am
Ugh, she being a lil too loose to me- and with brothers!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 03:34 am
Jodi needs lots of therapy soon or she's going to be exactly what that muthaf!uker said she is. Damn, don't go out as I f!ck two brothers.😞 thanks for the up date.
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 02:41 am
Hello Daugther,
Sorry that I have not review all of your chapters, but I will said that you are doing an outstanding job writing this story. First, of all I love the fact that "Jodi" realized that she has a problem and will eventually tell her family and perhap "Steve" or "Matt" what is going on inside her head. Wonderful update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 01:15 am
Yep her sexual/ behavior is an result of her abuse. Jodi needs t go back to therapy, asap!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 15 2014 12:02 am
Ugh digusting Kirk!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2014 11:07 pm
This chapter made me want to cry for Jodi, she is not to blame for what happened to her when she was younger, Kirk is nothing but a SICK FREAK, that needs to be CASTRATED... Jodi needs to go back to therapy b/c its clear that she has not fully dealt with this, her father dying, her step mother being kinda selfish and onky thinkin about her grief... I guess since Eddie and the PERV are business partners, Jodi doesn't talk to him... maybe Steve is the one to get her to open up.
Next chapter, I'll be sure to have some tissues.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2014 09:28 pm
this part of the story is too close for comfort tho my tormentor was not so brutal, I had not been able to read this chapter fully but i do like the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate that you like my story. I promise that I will keep you as well as others in mind as I continue. There are many, male and female, amongst us who have suffered in silence for many years. These stories must be told. I only hope to help, not to hinder or cause harm.
Again thank you for your comment and I hope that you will continue this journey with us.
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2014 10:04 am
Jodi needs to go back to therapy, what bringing back those bad memories? Is it her sexual behavior with Steve? Is it something about Steve that reminds of her of Kirk? I feel bad, where ids her brother Eddie? Just sad, especially how she sees herself.
Author's Response:
I wrote this chapter weeks agp. but proofing it for submittal sure took a lot out of me. I must admit that I had to dig very deeply to think like this teenaged girl. It brought me to tears. Thanks for your review :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2014 12:40 am
I agree this isn't her fault (tears of anger) I want Kirk's balls on a platter to feed to the dogs but then again i don't want to poison the dogs. Put them on a platter and let Jodi stomped them into minced meat while he looks on. I wonder what happened to that bastard. I am glad he did not try to find her and continue her torture.
She needs to find help tell someone she does not need to go through this by herself. :'(
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
It was very hard to write this chapter. To think that there are really teens and females in general that are going through this type of thing is very hard! I will continue to try my best to be sensitive and consider their feelings when writing this story. This is a dark tale. I just pray that I can keep it real by digging as deeply as I can.
And as always Thanks for your review :).
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 11:49 pm
That was hott. It would seem that our boy/man Steve is getting attached to our Jodi. He is picturing her in his mind as he has phone sex with her and he seems a bit vocal himself.
Thanks.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 11:32 pm
Damn that mofo raped her and got away with it. She didn't even trust or like herself anymore to talk to her brother. Knowing that he would have beat the hell out of David she should have know that he would have killed Kirk but she was young and naive. Damn I hate that happened to her.
On top of him getting away with it for 4yrs he then opened a business with her step-brother. I hope that that bastard gets his just deserve but he no doubt got married had kids and is living a comfortable life.
Nice update now we know why Jodi is the way she is about being standoffish and doubing herself. Yes, she needs to go back to her therapist. Thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 11:16 pm
Ahem the phone sex was very hot. So is this story😋
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 02:58 pm
That was hot. Please update soon.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 12:33 pm
Another good one
Reviewer: KayMay Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 08:17 am
1 word- awesome!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: April 12 2014 04:44 am