Well snap that was good, Steve and Jodi are well matched.  Jodi you need to talk to someone about what happened to you so that you can heal.

Wow, 4 years of rape. How awful!

Oh HELL NO.....that SOB needs ta get got.  Poor Jodi what a terrible way to be introduced to sex.....retribution is very much needed and over due!  Get his sorry ass!!!! 

Powerful, yet sad.   Great job

That was absolutely horrifying, no wonder she's lonely she pushed everyone thast loved her away.  Why didn't her brother Eddie force the issue and see that she was hurting. I wonder will she see herself worthy of Steve or will she continue to push him away? She needs therapy as she never really dealt with being raped. As all those feelingsof being ugly, attractive, and undesireable are a direct result of being raped. I am glad that she realizes that a she can now begin to heal. I now understand the reason for her stupidity. This was an powerful and insightful chapter! You are so talented!

This story is getting better and better as it goes on.

Dan what a dick wad.  I think his wife has left his sorry ass and now he wants to get a piece of Jodi.  It would seem like the men are coming out the wood work.

I wonder if Steve is upset about Jodi seeing Matt.  He already has staked a claim on the coochie but that is about all.  I am confused so I know jodi is.  Where is this fuckfest going.  I don't see a ring on it or any other committment so Jodi has the right to see and do whomever she likes.

Thank you for sharing.

I see she is still feisty, who can blame a 45 hormonal, set in her ways.  But I can see her softening and opening up to Steve, her rudeness to Steve is just a culmination of her pent up frustrations.  Steve's "courtship" is right on the mark, no easy gloves or flowery words, but subtle wooing with cooking laced with subjugation.  Carry on, no need to move to literotica, we can handle habanero level of spice here.

For those commenters who take exception being called "haters" (I labelled with fondness), my intention is not to curtail your freedom of speech, but rather defend the author's vision of the story as narrated.  It would behooves us readers NOT to preempt or judge the story by your own projected scenarios, particularly if it has not been told in the story as yet.

As much as possible,I don't comment until I have read the story in its entirety or I have a plaguing question.  I owe it to the storyteller to have the story told in its complete fruition consistent with its vision.

Get your groove on girl.

Umm yeah that was too hot lol loved Steve's dominant mood

Author's Response:

oh, yes!

Daughter keep it coming it's your story. For the ones who want to take out a page letter... This how you do it STOP READING.

I haven't had a chance to read the new updates yet. But I always check the reviews and after seeing a few of them, all I got to say is...

Wow...people  get up all in their feelings when a girl "out of the blue" gets more dick than she can handle. lol

I think some people fail to realize that a woman can have multiple suitors/lovers at the same time. Just like some dudes. I love that you are writing this type of character that DOES exist out there. All characters don't have to be cardboard cut outs. I love what you are doing with this story. Keep it up and don't let a few bad reviews deter you from how you write your own tale.

Now I'm off to read chap. 17, 18, 19.

I really enjoy this, I continue to RE-read previous chapters.

For the "haters" who refuse to believe that a woman like Jodi couldn't possibly have 3 hot men pursuing her, apparently do not know about the power of pheromones.  This was unleashed with Steve's initial onslaught.  While this maybe fiction, this is very probable...I know as I speak from experience that is why I can really connect with Jodi's plight who's so preoccupied with career that love got sidelined.