Whew....hawt (fanning myself), who knew Jodi is a 45 yr old virgin. Great culmination and consummation narrative. More...I hope she continues to be feisty.
Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2014 05:47 am
Steve is like a tall glass of milk he does a body good!!! Reading this chapter made me thirsty.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: April 03 2014 05:45 am
Thank you for the update!
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 03 2014 04:54 am
Carry on, no judgment is necessary, this is a welcome respite from goody two shoes character. Jodi is 45 for crying out loud, late bloomer, anti-social and lonely, of course propensity to be desperate is a foregone conclusion. Loved the story, my only comment is it has become a series of cliffhangers making me anxious to read the next chapter. You really know how to build it up and leave me hanging, which like Jodi makes me desperate for the next update. Also looking forward to unraveling the Boston mystery.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your encouraging words. To have so few reviews and then to have several bad ones in a row can be quite disheartening. Although this is fiction I feel that there are many women out there that think like Jodi.
Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2014 04:11 am
Keep it coming!!! Write this story how you feel it should go. You will still have readers following it, even if some don't.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I am somewhat taken aback by some of the comments; however I will continue to tell the story as I have written it. Thanks again.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2014 12:48 am
I'm not really liking Jodi at the moment. She is turning in too a ho. And these are the types of woman that later complains that no man is taking them seriously. Does she have no self respect or dignity? She almost slept and did a lots of dirty things with Steve, and now she lets his own brother kiss her? I bet that as the story progress she will also let him fuck her. And when she is done, with him, its Mitch turn to get a taste. Is she really this desperate for attention of a man? what a waste.
Reviewer: anony Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2014 10:11 pm
This story seemed interesting in the beginning. But I'm slightly disappointed in the turns of events right now. She was a nobody with no friends or man and all of a sudden she has three man who is interested in her? She is messing around with Steve. Don't tell me that she will also give it up to also Mitch and Steve's own brother Matt? I mean she already kissed Matt without even caring that she had almost slept with his brother. I'm so disappointed. I knew she was lonely. Just did not expect her to be this desperate too. I really hope she won't turn in too a slut and sleep with all three man.
Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2014 10:03 pm
Yeah I'm done with this story. Its absolutely ridiculous how out of nowhere Jodi has three man interested in her. She had no social life, she was invisible and now all of a sudden she the bomb. The woman that all the man wants. And to top it of now this girl Carry hates her too because she is getting all this attention? How did she come to that conclusion so suddenly? I bet Jodi will turn in to a slut, sleeping and messing around with Steve, Mitch and Matt. Nahhh, I done with this. Good luck.
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2014 09:55 pm
Girl, if you don't stop with these short hot chapters am burst😫 Good update.
Reviewer: Ani Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2014 05:29 pm
Can't wait for an New update...Love the story ( I kind of just want her to be with Steve) but thats just me. LOL
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2014 01:48 am
Here's my thought Ms. Jodi been lonely for how long? And in her wildest dreams she have three guys wanting her. I say Jodi have fun be safe with it, and see where it goes.
Reviewer: Ani Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 09:53 pm
Jodi is going to be stupid isn't she? Anyone could see that Steve is upset because he has feelings for her, But his treatment of her will make Jodi toss around the punany to Mitch and Matt just because she can, i am disappointed that Jodi has ho tendencies.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 08:39 pm
Interesting! Please update soon.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 07:33 pm
Don't dare move this story to lit cause I'll move with it, lol great chapter we need a lil litnasty in here lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2014 10:14 am
hey I miss reading your story, I hope you update soon 😊
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 08:57 pm
Love it!! I can't wait to know about them! I like a lot that in this chapter we are able to know more about his point of view.
Thanks from the Mediterranean Sea
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Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2014 03:27 pm
Will Steve ever sit down and tell Jodi how he feels about her? He has got see that his cray cray act is scaring her away even if she enjoys the sex.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2014 01:07 pm
I like this story but it is a little far fetched that she went from a solitary existence to three rich men suddenly after her. Is everyone else in the office, her complex, the world blind. Because it's not like it was a developing attraction all of a sudden she looks lie a sex kitten but just to them. It seems really random. I like the explanation of why Steve knew the layout of her home. But he is still a lil crazy.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2014 04:47 am
Ha Steve designed her home that's how he knows his way around her home he had me worried for a second.
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2014 04:50 pm
It will get when Steve realky zes that his brother is attracted to Jodi too. I feel better now that I know that Steve is divorced and didn't cheat on his ex-ho. Did he get tested? Is he dure thst Maddie and Mason are his children? I neither like nor trust his ex-ho Susan. Good stuff!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2014 01:12 pm
Please don't tell me that now out of nowhere she is going to have three men chasing after her and turns this in to a whole love triangle between two brothers and a friend. I just hate how unrealistic they sometimes makes the story. The main lady is a nobody with no boyfriend and social life. Then all of a sudden she gets not one but three man fighting and chasing after her.
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2014 10:40 am
I bet Matt wants to ask Jodi out on Friday. We all know by now that Steve is not about to have that and I am so surprised that he pulled back from Jodi in her office and let her walk away with pushing it. Then we also have Mitch who no doubt want to compete for Jodi's attention as well.
I thought it was funny as hell how they were talking about Carrie like she was a dog...I was giggling my ass off. LOL! They don't seem malious in fact they sound like sweethearts but she is a trifling trick right along with Steve's ex-wife Susan.
We are definitely going to have to find Mitch and Matt some chocalate flavors to have their noses wide open Jodi already has Steve's open. LOL even though he hids it very well.
Thank you for two great updates. Waiting for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2014 08:29 am
Thanks for the update, i'm liking Steve😉😏
[Report This]Date: March 26 2014 07:31 am