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Title: Chapter 15

Jodi got it bad

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 15

I'm loving this plz update soon.

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 05:06 am
Title: Chapter 1

Better stick to the chamber even with lotsa literotica Laugh out loud, you really know how yo build tension and leave us hanging every chapter, this should be titled cliffhanger.   Love the story, carry on, requested jacci to feature this.



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I am so very humbled by your comment. Thank you so much for your review as well as the recommendation.

 Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 14

Omg! Omg! Omg! Please tell me your doing another update today the suspense is killing me! And Steve doesn't seem to happy with some other man touching what he thinks is his lmao this was so far the best update girl I'm lovin it!!!!!

 Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2014 12:28 am
Title: Chapter 14

Come on jodi you are stronger then that make this situation work for you sista girl.  Steve is a very possessive so and so aint he.  LOL!  I am loving it.

Mitch and Matt seem to be interested in Jodi so yeah there is definitely compation for ole Steve there and Jodi should milk it for what its worth.  Not be on the run from the man.  I like how she was able to be professional during the introductions.  I was laughing my a## off with reading his expressions whenever Matt and Mitch touched her.

Thank you for the quicky.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 14

I wander what's happening next????

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 08:51 pm
Title: Chapter 13

OMG! How did I possible know that the Sinclair owners had something to do with Steve himself.  LOL! Loving it.

It would seem like Mitch has a bit of an interest in Jodi as well but it could also just be his personality to flirt with every woman.  He seems to already have a rep among some of the woman in the business. The skinny heffa as his sec seems to be one of his flings or a potiental wannabe.

Oh I love it if Steve has a bit of compatition I can't wait to see what you have in store for us and Jodi.  LOL!   LOVING IT INDEED!!!!!

Thank you for the great update.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 06:29 am
Title: Chapter 13

Bwahaha...ohh Jodi girl!!!! I can't wait to see Steve maybe be jealous about Jodi. 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 04:23 am
Title: Chapter 13

Are Steve and Mitch related?  They are both tall, blond and fine!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 02:51 am
Title: Chapter 13

I knew it. And Mitch is sounding like a contender.

 Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 01:58 am
Title: Chapter 12

Is Jodi going to need a TRO against Steve? He is displaying some stalker tendencies and that ain't good. What is Steve's major malfunction? He is definitely on the crazy side of aloha!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 04:24 pm
Title: Chapter 12

First, I want to thank you for updating so frequently, i'm so curious about him. I am want to know his story, why is he like he is, why is he into her, who is he? 😬😯😃

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 08:12 am
Title: Chapter 12

Steve didn't answer even one of her questions, UUUUUUGH ! I just as curious about him as Jodi's nosy a** neighbor :-) . I do a little happy dance everytime I see you'veposted a new chapter.

 Reviewer: kisser Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 04:19 am
Title: Chapter 12

She is really beginning to annoy me. 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 04:06 am
Title: Chapter 12

They are hilarious! Hahah.

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2014 03:55 am
Title: Chapter 11

Dang Dan is nosey and inconsiderate of his neighbors no wonder his wife jumped ship she probably didn't go on a vacation she took off for good.

No words for Jodi currently.

Steve I wonder if sampling her cake then leaving it open in the fridge was just another way of his domance and control seeping in on Jodi.

Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 5

This chapter made me want to scream at her! What in the world!! Doesn't she watch Criminal Minds. Screw that, just your regular 6 o'clock news.  I don't usually have such strong reactions to characters, but that was just a dumb move.

 Reviewer: M_Denise Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 11

Don't like Dan!! Steve just keeps right on tickingJodi off, although it was funny when he left thwt note after eating some of her cake.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2014 01:23 am
Title: Chapter 11

wonderful job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 08:13 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Ahhhh! Interesting.  Steve seems to know alot about Miss Jodi or he is a good guesser or maybe even more he knows what he likes and what he wants her to do.  What an ego but he is truly turning out to be all ALPHA.

Jodi finally admitted to herself that she is also a pyscho freak and it's not all Steve by himself.  LOL!

Thank you for the update.  More soon please.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 10:21 am
Title: Chapter 10

Like the song says, "nobody wants to be called a freak, but everybody wants to be freaked; she's a freak y'all." Keep the chapters coming.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 08:25 am
Title: Chapter 10

Those are some interesting gifts from a man who has never even taken her on date.  Those two are two freaks in a pod. Will she or won't she wear the butterfly to work?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 01:07 am
Title: Chapter 10

Good job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 12:34 am
Title: Chapter 8

I don't think that it's creepy, but I don't understand how a woman could find being spanked and disrespected arousing.  Steve has not won me over yet and it this rate he never will.  Hell I have never understood the whole S&M thing but in story itmakes an enjoyable read.  The whole time I am however I am thinking, WTF is wrong with this couple?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 02:41 am
Title: Chapter 9

Damn, he laid it on her.  I don't particularly care for rough play but in a story it's okay.  He just left her after he tore that tail up.  Can't wait to read about what happens next.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2014 02:31 am


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