I am happy the story was finished.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2014 01:05 pm
I think you meant 'clutch' or 'handbag' instead of sheath (which I think is a dress) in the first paragraph.
On the one hand, I hate that you finished it so quickly. The pacing was a bit wonky, but it all worked out in the end. On the other hand, I'm glad that you DID finish it. I'm kinda glad for the happy ending, but I thought it was going to go a lot further with twists and turns before we got there.
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Date: April 13 2014 12:53 pm
I would like to see Marks viewpoint again. Why didn't he want Kerri and what was it about Quen that made him propose in 8 days. Honestly that would hurt me the most and what I couldn't get over. In all honesty, I probably would have distanced myself from the whole family and found a live interest outside the family not to be surrounded by Mark's dumbass. How unworthy do you think I am that you proposed to someone you just met after 8 days. It seems like she was always the back-up. What do they say, always a bridesmaid and never a bride but he wants to keep her from becoming a bride. Men, and they say women are complicated.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 06:56 pm
Good story. It's sexy and interesting. At first I thought I wanted her to be with Mark, but Brandon may be the better nan. Mark had lots of opportunities and never wanted her!Why? He's jealous and impulsive - I mean he got engaged to Quen after 8 days! What gives? Can't wait to see where you go with this story.Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 05:21 pm
Mark is an ass, he wants it all a loving wife and Kerri on the side. But Kerri ain't having it. Is Brandon really attracted to Kerri or is he trying fo get back at Mark for being his parents favorite. Not his fault i kmow what it feels like but i love my big brother will of my heart. He has laways been in my corner. But i digress, don't use Kerri Brandon!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 04:48 pm
Na it's good to know that Brandon isn't just using Kerri to get back at his family. He may have been A black sheep for 18 years but at least it wasn't because he was setting g fires or some crazy mess like that. I'm happy for Kerri and hope Mark doesn't ruin it.Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 04:27 pm
Looks like Kerri and Brandon are gettin' there. Mark is going to have to put up or shut up. But I think Kerri isn't going to care at this point. Brandon makes her a priority. What woman would turn that away.
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Date: April 12 2014 04:06 pm
If nothing else wakes her up from any of Mark's temper tantrums it is the fact that out of all the years of knowing him and basically being a girlfriend he CHOSE another woman over you and I don't care, NO woman deserves to be second choice. We all deserve to feel that we are the best. I hope Brandon is real bad truly wants her at his died and not just a girl to sex.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 05:23 am
So, Quen takes Mark talking to her like sh!t? She's going to get EXACTLY what she allows this little pissant to dish out. Girl needs to get the hell out while the getting is good, 'cause Mark is playing an f'in game with both of these women. I honestly can't see what either sees in this man-child (more emphasis on the the child part).
I really hope that Brandon has more substance to him than what I've seen so far. Does Kerri really want to be with him or is this some itch to scratch. And Mark, gah, what a maroon.
Can't wait to see what his next manipulation will be. I'd like to see what the parents think of their offspring. Is Mark considered to be the "golden child", since Brandon has been labelled the "black sheep". Why did he come back home anyway?Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 03:55 am
Mark needs to stop being a douche he should realize that he has a great woman in Quen and she is willing to put up with his stupid and selfish self because she loves him. He needs to let Kerri go and stop ruining potential relationships for her. She deserves better than to be Mark's backup choice. I'm glad that Brandon realizes what a great catch that Kerri is and that he is not going to let any obstacles stand in his way of having her for himself. I don't believe that Brandon is just using Kerri I believe that he knows that Kerri is for keeps. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.Reviewer: AvidReader28 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 02:18 am