OMG!!! I've seen this story many times and passed it. I'm mad that I waited so long! I'm soooo hooked!!! I forced myself to stop reading so I go to sleep. I laughed until I cried at the "I am a virgin!" outbursts. Hilarious! This is a really good story, one of my favs. I am picturing Henry Cavill as Matt. Will you have character pics?
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you're enjoying my story :)
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2014 02:09 pm
I adore this story! please keep writing, and keep updating, love to see what the future holds for them <3
only thing that bothers me is how Madi keeps calling Matt a racist, yet she's the only one that keeps bringing up race lol.
Also being from London, England myself, its nice to see a story set here even though i love the American ones.
I find your writing really inspiring, if u ever get a minute i have a few ideas i'd love to chuck around with you.
Author's Response:
Gotta love London! Glad you like my story :)
Reviewer: Landa92 Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2014 04:14 pm
@ Kamille, my understanding is, that goes not only for blacks but ANYONE, irrespective of race, whose parents or granparents weren't born in England.
Reviewer: foosrule Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 24 2014 12:03 am
Hi, just a quick note to say if she is black she is not English but rather should would be classified as British
Reviewer: Kamille Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 23 2014 02:56 pm
Tjis is a story that I almost passedup. It is so good. I've read up to chatpter 18 and I can't wait to see how this dinner at his parents' house goes. It's good to see that Matt is following his heart for now anyway.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 03:50 am
How did I just find this?! Imma need an update by like tonight LOL
Reviewer: Bryleigh Lisette Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 12:16 am
This is a fantastic story. I've been overlooking it. Truly 5 STARS * * * * * .
Too bad that it's not drawing redaer's b/c it's one of the best stories on this site.
Here, you'll find that b/c of timing or naming, excellent stories still have low readership.
Besides your summary and the actual story have little in common except for the characters' names.
Reviewer: willieriley Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 20 2014 02:09 am
Wow what a way to be introduced to everyone not good, but then again they need not have been so aloft with her at least fake it or not. Glad she has his nieces on her side if not it would be more of a disaster . Inviting his ex how disgraceful then sitting him beside her at dinner another slap in the face. He should have known she'd know what was happening under the table. Why didnt he get up When she touched him the first time. He's in deep water now. Can't wait for what's coming next
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 10:09 pm
I'm only on chapter 3, but Madi seems extremely rude and tactless. It's actually a bit offputting because although she uses every opportunity possible to show the world that she's not a stereotype, she actually ends up expressing stereotypical behavior by continuously playing the race card and reacting to Matt and his butler so combatively. I think it's a very well written story but her behavior is extreme and slightly overdone.
Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 16 2014 05:55 pm
Great story. Can't wait to see how the family reacts!!? Update soon please.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 02:08 am
Just found your story last night. I'm only on Chapter 8 but I love it!!! You are soooo talented. I swear this story should be published, it's that good!! Ok, just wanted to say that real quick. I'm trying to read alittle while I'm at work. Love it!!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 06:31 pm
I love this story! I hope the parents aren't total wankers
Reviewer: Apple Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 14 2014 11:41 pm
Iwant you to know that you really have talent. I love your story. While it may need some editing tips, it is far superior to a lot of the stuff that people are paying good money for. Keep up the good work!
Brenda: preacharomantic@gmail.com
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2014 12:57 pm
I am so loving your stoy. Nathan is a hoot, Dante is finding that he is interested, Matt is your true alpha--I lol when she fainted the first time they had sex, and aunt Cleo is as bad as the people leaving the nasty comments online.
Oohhh, I can't wait for her to meet his family---hope aunt 'i don't care if i'm on a megaphone' cleo is there.
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2014 01:20 am
Hi! I have no doubt in my mind that this story is and will continue to be a knockout.
Just one thing. Can you please tag the violence and sexual assualt warnings. The first paragraph of this story is extremly triggering for those who have experienced sexual assualt or rape and wish to avoid reading about it.
Thank you & happy writing!
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks for your encouraging feedback. Apologies re the tagging issue which will be addressed. It is not my intent to cause offence to anyone who may read my story.
Reviewer: Lola Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 12 2014 08:55 pm
I gotta say I lost sleep over this one, I could not put it down. Anyway this is such a good story so far. The characters all seem to developing nicely. I just wish madi had some more backbone. She's a grown woman and I don't care how guilty her crazy ass aunt makes her feel. she is allowed to not only say no, but call her aunt on her hypocritical stance. Matt is well I don't have enough time and space to write all that's wrong about him but it's working. I love that he's atleast willing to risk his social standing and more because he is standing up for what he wants and now cowing under all the pressure. Also holy crap I don't think I've ever worried so much about race in my personal life, and this is has got me cursing and calling foul lol. This is provoking story writing it's great and thank you for it.
Author's Response:
Glad you like my story so far! Hope it continues to keep you interested. I know some readers may perceive the main characters in a less than stellar light, but I wanted to convey that we can all be flawed in one way or the other. Hopefully you don't end up disliking them too much
Reviewer: mags Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 07:14 pm
I am a very picky yet avid reader this by far is one of my favorite stories now so I really hope you keep writing
Author's Response:
Gosh, you made me grin from ear to ear with your comment. Thanks
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 04:34 pm
I love it instant fave!! I hated to come to the end of the post! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind and encouraging words. Will def update some more soon and fingers cross it's just as entertaining
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 02:28 pm
OMG-OMG-OMG!! You are doing the MOST with this story and I love!! Here in the south a few mamaws teach that the "white man" is evil so I can relate to Poppet's racist rants. It's been drilled into her by overbearing, "do as I say not as I do" Auntie. Auntie Cleo reminds me of my Auntie Sam; i'm sure Auntie Cleo still has plastic on her couch and signs on the refrigerator that says "clean what you mess up and don't make a mess in MY kitchen" Anywho, GREAT story. I love your style of writing. Are you published? Do you have other stories? If so, please share:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your great encouragement. Published? Not yet, but working hard getting there. And yes, I do have other stories but in a different genre.
Reviewer: Mech Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 02:15 pm
Interesting beginning!
Author's Response:
I sure as heck hope so too.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 06:04 am
Madi need to get a backbone with Aunt Cleo because I wouldn't give a damn about her opinion when her kids haven't turned out like anything. Where you gonna get the money to come here. I ain't sending you none. Matt was right because if his family said similar shit about her she would be offended and call them racist. The shoe goes on both feet. I hope she gives him the benefit if the doubt and Nathan as a friend need to just support his friend and stop with the snide, subliminal comments. That is ticking me off. He hasn't learned from dating his girlfriend. His friend is happy and that should be what matters. He bowed down to his family and he expects Matt to do the same. You are spoiling me with so many updates.
Author's Response:
Lajack1, I must say you had me bursting out in laughter with your comment. Just love it. 'I ain't sending you none' That's just classic!
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 12:04 am
"I am a virgin" just priceless, everytime she says it i am embrassed for her yet, i understand why she keep saying it .. i am happy that matt get her everytime she say it....good work on the plot , you have me hooked. keep writing , i will be looking out for your updates.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your encouragement and I hope you like the rest to come
Reviewer: Alexis Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 10:59 pm
I am still smiling. This story is just sooo cute and sexy. I love ex-virgin Madi. Please continue. GREAT STORY
Author's Response:
Glad I could bring a smile to your face, your comment brought a smile to mine so thanks
Reviewer: beastman0969 Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 09:16 pm
Aww, thanks! I too remember sneaking my mom's Harlequins, then hiding them so she wouldn't know I had my grubby mitts on them. Once again thanks
Reviewer: K Carr Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 09:15 pm
Awesome please keep writing. Antivenom is my favorite writer on this site. But now I'm not so sure. Again AWESOME
Author's Response:
Thanks! Very kind words from you.
Reviewer: joynicole Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 11 2014 04:28 pm