Thank goodness tomorrow. I was like hey what the heck!?!?
Author's Response:
LOL!!! I know right. But tune in tomorrow and let me know what you think. Thank you so much for reading.
Yevette
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed
[Report This]Date: July 09 2014 01:28 am
I hate conniving bitches!! And I hate more that she clearly got away with something major. Make her pay.
As for the baby, I'm going to assume it isn't his because I'd hate for a child to suffer because of this. Although I do see why Jace could possibly do that given his mother. She's someone who doesn't know when to step off, so the hard line has to be taken with her.
Waiting for the rest....
Author's Response:
Jace is going to have to get Sara in check and quick, if he wants to have a shot at Breezy. Sara is use to getting whst she wants and she knows that Breezy is Jace's weakness. So, she's going to do whatever she can to keep them apart.
Thanks for reading and keep the reviews coming. They are my motivation. Stay tuned.
Yevette
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 09 2014 01:04 am
Yaay, another update.
To be honest though, Sara doesn't actually seem that bad. Or is that just me thinking that?
Author's Response:
She's got a few boundary issues. Plus, she really just doesn't like Breezy. But if i was to take a guess, I would say that she's jealous of the relationship that he has with Breezy.
Thanks for reading. And keep the reviews coming so that I can continue to grow as a writer. Love receiving them. Stay tuned
Yevette
Reviewer: anomy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 11:32 pm
this is getting good. i can't wait to find out what sara did to jace to cause this strain between him and breezy.
Author's Response:
Sara, has a way of getting what she wants and what she still wants is Jace. Even in her present condition. She still can't move on.
Stay tuned. We'll get Breezy's take. Thanks for reading and the review.
Yevette
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2014 10:31 pm
Sara needs an ass whopping, asap!! Why hasn't he filed a restraining order against Sara? That bitch had a dual personality, and their both psychotic. Ladies, can we say medication?! Looking forward to tomorrows update.
Author's Response:
That she does! Jace has let her get away with this foolishness for far too long. But once she insulted Breezy, I think that finally woke him up.
Stay tuned to find out Breezy's take on the whole situation. Let me know what you think.
Yevette
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 10:09 pm
Wow....love it
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: June 30 2014 08:36 pm
I love your story so far. I can tell it's going to be quite a ride!
Author's Response: Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 30 2014 06:01 am
CHAPTER 4
OOOOOOOHHHHHH he in troubleeeeee lmaoooo I love Jace and his crazy possessive ass ahahhah he's seriously still crazily in love with her. So passionate. Who wouldn't feel for him? I'd be just as crazy in all honesty. But she deserves the best and I think he's it!
DAMMMMNNN HE HAS AN EX WIFE???!!!
yep. i'd feel the same if I was in Breezy's position. Imagine that- the man who you loved so passionately but had to escape, is standing here trying to once again get back into your life, and then BAM! his "wife" and her PREGNANT self comes walking through the door. I think she handled herself pretty good hahahah i'd be cold as fuck if i were her. She's not a push over in which i loveeee. I hate it when they create weak submissive females. And i love the sort of balance? like yeah he makes her weak but she has the same effect ;)
cant wait for more! so good !!!! go breezy!!! make him go crazyyy lmfao
Author's Response: Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 05:02 am
Five years later and our girl is still running? Oh, Breezy please tell me that you're much stronger than that! I mean, you knew or, at the very least, assumed that Jace was still married, yet you still allowed him to kiss you and feel you up. And then you want to act shocked and hurt when said wife shows up?
I freaking love Jace—seriously, I've totally claimed him as being mine—so as a result of that love, I'm convinced that there was a perfectly reasonable explanation as to why he married a pregnant Sara. . .right?. . .Right? On that note, I guess we're not suppose to like Sara? I hope she's not going to be stereotyped as the 'crazy wife/ex-wife', but I'm guessing that she will be. It does, after all, make for good drama, which I totally know you're going to gift us readers with in the most awesomely way possible because you, Yevette Linn, are extremely awesome!
In case you couldn't tell, I love your story! I feel so connected to these characters and to their story, so thank you so much for sharing it with us! :)
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! We're gonna have to share Jace. I saw him first. LOL!!! Yeah, our Breezy is gonna have to learn to stop running from tough situations and face them head on. She's had it pretty rough emotionally but she's found a way to cope. In the next chapter we're going to get a little more in dept on her back story. Believe me she is no push over. She just has a weakness and mad, combustible chemistry with one hot sexy ass Alpha Male.
Now Sara isn't crazy, CRAZY. She's just a bitch that can't seem to accept a few realities. That when you've had the best its pretty hard to go back to bullshit and of course Jace is the best.
Jace, is no punk and he will not accept anything less than getting whatever he wants at all cost. And what he wants is Breezy.
So stick with me as we find out how he handles Sara and what its going to take to get a very pissed off Breezy to talk to him, not to mention the fact that his best friend, Paul, already threatened him. So it's gonna be pretty tough for poor Jace to figure this out.
Thanks for reading. Your reviews always make my day. And on a side note, I am sooooo loving ALPHA!!!
Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 08:56 pm
Love this story ;-)
Jace is such an alpha male which is so sexy.
Yes they're possessive and will get jealous of a small child or elderly lady if they see them getting an second of their 'woman' time.
However when these men love they love hard especially if it's good woman like it sounds like Breezy is . Like most love stories it sounds like a mixture of misunderstanding and miscommunication on both sides.
Plus add to the mix the personal growth and self discovery for both Breezy and Jace = the perfect love story. Which it appears you have Yevette, thank you for sharing your talent.
Looking forward to reading more ;-)
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for reading. Aren't Alpha Males just the best? Yes, they are jealous, possessive, and even obsessive of the women that they love. But they love so hard and will do anything for them. But more than that, they will do anything to keep them.
Yeah, we've got a bit of a communication problem going on between these two. But Jace, had better learn to tie up his loose ends or he's gonna wind up losing a lot more. And Breezy is going to have to learn to stop running when things get tough. Although she's not the same girl that left five years ago. Time has changed her and him.
So stay tuned. I will post again this week. Keep the reviews coming. They are great motivation.
Yevette
Reviewer: Amaya Signed
[Report This]Date: June 29 2014 06:03 am
Oh hot damn, I'm loving the complex plot of this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned things are just about to heat up. Will post again this week.
Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 03:22 am
What on earth happened here???
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Hang on. We're about to find out what the deal is with Jace and his crazy ex wife.
Thanks for reading and keep the reviews coming. I really appreciate them.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 01:26 am
Run, Breezy, Run!! Loving your story...wonder how low Sara and Jace are going to feel knowing their actions help keep him from his kid. What did Sara mean by ...'we've been here before" nad Breezy comment on this not happening for a third time? Jace better not ba the daddy to Sara's baby.
Author's Response:
You almost got me. LOL!!!! But no spoilers. I love a reader that pays attention detail. Thanks for reading. Stay tuned. I will post again next week.
Yevette
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 12:35 am
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss!! Love it please continue! I have no clue what went down between this trio? Did she stumble upon the pair when they were younger? Was Breezy the other woman? So many question!
Author's Response:
More back story to come in the next chapter. But Jace has his work cut out for him.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 12:14 am
He married Sara because she was pregnant did he? I bet the baby was not Jace's. That dirty ho zdara!
Author's Response:
LMAO!!! You have just made my day but there will be no spoilers. LOL!! You'll just have to stick with me to find out what's up with this little trio.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 12:13 am
Sara is cray cray and still won't leave Jace alone. Why is Sara still harassing Jace? Who's devil spawn is she carrying? It's only devil spawn because she's gestating the spawnage. She is going to listen to another word that Jace says and she won't let him lay one finger on her either. Jace needs to put TRO on Sara fast! Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Yes indeed Sara is a little touched and obsessed with Jace. But when you've had the best its hard to accept anything else. Even when you're crazy. LOL!!
Thanks so much for reading. Stay tuned. Will update again next week.
Yevette
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 11:58 pm
Well dang, it just got real.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. It has indeed gotten real. But we're just getting started. So hang in there with me. I'm posting weekly.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:27 pm
OMG so glad I decided to read this story!! Excellent start up and great delivery can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reading. Will post again next week so stat tuned.
Reviewer: kiki729 Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:14 pm
All I can say is OMG, and it's to short
Author's Response:
LOL!!! I'm working as fast as I can. Thank you for reading. Stick with me and the OMG moments will continue. Stay tuned. Will post again next week.
Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:05 pm
O Shit!! Jace better take care of his business. Girl you have me soo hooked on this story. As soon as I saw it was up I stopped everything to read it . Awesome job! Ready for the next!!
Author's Response:
Indeed!!! This was a screw up of epic proportions on his side. But if the truth be told, she should have asked if he was still married instead of letting him feel her up. LOL!!! But it is so hard to resist the sexiness that is Jace.
Thankyou soooo much for reading and stay tuned. Will update next week.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2014 10:01 pm
Oh my days!!! This story is is soooooo good. Jace is bringing it wiith the alpha vibe
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Jace is sooo an alpha male. He really can't help it. He and Paul both have this protective vibe when it comes to Breezy. She kind of brings it out of people.
So staytuned. Things are just heating up. Will update in a few days.
Reviewer: Judahlove Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2014 07:12 pm
Issshhh just got real!!!??? Update soon!
Author's Response:
Yes indeed!!! Thanks for reading. Stay tuned. New update coming next week.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: June 19 2014 09:39 pm
well damn... i'd probably be waiting butt naked on the desk for him... goodness me
LAWDDDYYYY what are you doing ?! do you understand how bad it is for me to sit here longing for a fictional character? dammit if i met jace in real life... i'd bring out my inner devil LMFAOOO be like "well hey there, less talk more action" he'd probably be like wtf... hahahaha
OKKOKKKKK I LOVE BREEEEZZYYY ! she seems so innocent, yet you can see her fierce no bull shit side. I LOVE IT . i honestly hate submissive female characters. AND JACEEEEE OHHH LORDDDD Jace! he seems so ... primal .. so alpha-male like. it makes me go crazy hahaha like he seems like the type to be so possessive and jealous ... yuummmmyyy
but whats better is that she seems like she can put him in his place when the time is right. like the end of the recent chapter, i think he won hahaah only because they both know of the history they have together... i think she has the power in the end !!! power of the vagina !
ahahahhaah
ok ok i'll stop.
loveddddddddddd it
Author's Response:
LOL!!!! You are most awesomely a breath of fresh air. Thank you sooo much for reading my story. Jace is very much a Alpha male and very possessive. He is so sexy and awesome. But fear not, Breezy can most difinitely give him a run for his damn money. Her innocence is equally matched by her strong will.
As the next few chapters progress, you will see who these two really are. Where they come from and what it is that drives them. Jace has made some mistakes and everything that he has done up until this point has been to correct those mistakes.
So stick with me and enjoy the ride. It's gonna be a hot and exciting one.
Your review has made my day!!!
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: June 19 2014 03:48 pm
You know next week starts Sunday, Just saying :) I am loving the story. By the way is her secet a baby??!!!
Author's Response: Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 18 2014 12:25 pm
Good! Lets see what is what!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2014 10:06 pm