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Title: Chapter 3

Well hello...:-)

Will the next chapter(s) dive in depth about how their relationship started. It said that he was married. Did he married young and why was he married?

Where is the ex-wife? Will the previous jealous women surfaced? Will Breezy give Jace a chance or after the wedding she'll dissapear? But since she told him where she was I guess he'll find her or something *Shrug*

Well like you see I have a lot of questions (Even more)XD

Hope to see you update soon.



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Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting update but still want to know what's the back story between the two of them.

Author's Response:

We'll get a lot more back story in the next chapter 2 chapters. Thanks for reading. Stick with me. Will be updating more next week. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 3

LOVE IT! You're a fantastic writer! Anxiously waiting for your next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reading. Stay tuned as the story unfolds. Will post again next week. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

Me Likey....I like the predatory behavior, alpha males are my fav keep it coming!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Jace is very sexy Alpha, plus he can sing. Stay tuned. Will post again next week. 

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving the build up. It's so good. Please! Please! Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Hang in there with me. Will post again next week for sure. 

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh you suck I can't believe you ended it there.Nice update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Gotta keep you wanting more. LOL!! Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 3

Why did she run again? Breezy obviously still has feelings Jace and Jace is still in love with her. Hoq long as Jace bwen divorced? So good!!



Author's Response:

Many of those questions will be answered in chapter 4. Stay tuned. Will post next week. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh my sweet tomatoes!!!!!



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Thanks for reading. Will post again next week. Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:46 am

Title: Chapter 3

Ohhh Lord!!! Hot Hot HOT! I'm trying to rack my brain to figure out what happened between them. Please don't keep us waiting too long with the next update. 



Author's Response:

Many, many thanks for reading. Things are going to get really hot. Stay tuned. Will post next week. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

More!  Please!



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More is definitely on the way. Thanks for reading and stay tuned. Will post next week.  

Reviewer: lilmissg69 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2014 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 2

When is the rest of it coming? Please don't keep us hanging.

Author's Response:

Will post again soon. Thanks for reading. Hang in there with me. I appreciate it sooo much. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2014 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 2

Awesome plot and story



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: angelbaby Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 2

like like like



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, stay tuned!!!

Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 12:21 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update! Breezy and Phoenix have an interesting relationship,love them! Oh oh, can't wait to see what happens between Breezy and Jace.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Stay tuned. I'm going to try to post every week. Breezy and Phoenix are really fun when their together. I love them too. Things are about to get very interesting between Breezy and Jace. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 2

Update soon. This is amazing!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! Going to try and update weekly. Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: April_Destinee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 01:58 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Oh gosh 0_0 this next chapter is going to be interesting 



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Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 03:14 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Yeah. Breezy. 

Update soon, please.



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Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 08:16 am

Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving the buildup, but now its time to find out what the deal is between these two.



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Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 07:24 am

Title: Chapter 2

Update soon. Please!!! Can't wait to see what happens when they see each other again. 



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Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

Well,  Breezy and Jace ran into each other right away, somehow I knew that it would happen. Is Jace still married? 



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is great so far! I love it!! I'm so curious to know what actually happened between Breezy and her "heartbreak"!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Please stay tuned. Things are about to get really interesting between Breezy and Jace. I'm going to try to post weekly. 

Reviewer: universauhl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh Man!!!!!! I'm ready! Bring it on! I was gripped immediately! One chapter? I'll have some more, please!



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Reviewer: Eureka Vignette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ohmygooooosh pleeeeeease upload sooon, feeling this all over. Can't wait till bee meets him!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! Stay tuned. I plan to upload one day next week. 

Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 11:04 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Very good!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! 



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Thank you!! Stay tuned!!!

Reviewer: Alisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting!



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Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2014 05:57 am



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