Reviews For Breaking Through
Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoying your story so far, shadow! Will you put me out of my misery and update soon? :)

Author's Response:

Aww! you're so sweet. Thank you. I'm working on updating one of my other stories, but this one is getting updated right after.

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 04:40 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I'm really liking this story , can't wait to see where it's heading ! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 03:49 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Why don't they just tell each how they feel?  Why is Kassidy still in high school and not a freshmen in college? Malcolm is too fine, Akira is too fine I am in fine man heaven!!!

Author's Response:

pmgayles!!  Next chapter we'll find out why Kassidy is 19 and still in High School. Why have'nt they told each how they feel? Well a 16 year old  immature Akira basically told Kassidy that he didn't like being kissed by her and acted like he wasn't attracted to her because well he was ( that's the logic Akira was working with at that age). - that's from the first chapter.  Later it became insecurity and fear of his feelings not being reciprocated. But, that's about to change real soon! Girl, you ain't lying, those men are sexy as hell.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2014 03:02 pm

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