So her uncle was taught by someone with sense. What happened to Kladon then? Is her mother also a warrior? Can't wait for more details. We know for sure there will be an uproar on both sides. Will Merikki be able to stand tall and support her daughter or fall when faced with both Kladon and Keitou. i do hope Keitou comes to his senses.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2014 07:36 am
Thank you for this most anticipated update! Wow to finally know what happened to Raad' s older brother. So sad and that awful event shaped Raad into the wonderful man anD leader he is. Kira's story was just as moving and shaped her into the warrior princess and best match for Raad. They will need each other's strength to deal with the upcoming crapfest that is coming there way. Sap is like a roach he is so hard to kill. Please update soon:)))))Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2014 02:39 am
I am happy that Kira has professed her love for Raad again I can't wait to see Kladon reaction to the love they share. I hope that Raad is still not going thru with this bestowed mess with the witch Helena and her sister whom is in love with another.
Keitou and that axe does he even know how to fight with any other weapon.
I have no remorse for Sap and I wish for a quick demise of him, he does not need to be question because a snake is sly with the tongue.
I hope that Keitou is able to redeem himself in his father's eye.
Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 10:36 am
Why is it that I feel that it is still not Sap's time to get his just deserve that something will happen and he will be spared just a little longer being a thorne in my side along with others.
Kladon is so harsh and unforgiving against his son I hate to see his reaction when he finds out about Kira and Raad.
Awesome update as always. Thank you.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 10:13 am
What in the devil is Sap up to now can someone please do away with his trifling behind.
I hope that Keitou comes to his senses gets stronger and wins back his father's respect but does not attempt to kill Raad that would be bad on all levels.
Thank you for the updateReviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 09:52 am
Sweet Kira I had hoped that you would have learned from your brother and he defeat because of his pride but noooo you turn right around and do a prideful thing and it may be the death of you or you may be found by some seedy type that means you no good.
I thought she was at least beginning to trust Raad but I guess not. The man confessed his love for her.
I have to say that I usually don't like historic stories but something about this story caught my attention and it has been holding on strong to it. I am pleasantly surprised and glad I took a chance on the story. Thank you for sharing your imagination.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 09:38 am
YEAH!!!! Kira finally wised up and admitted her feelings to Raad. I hope their union grows from this chapter forth. So how will Sap slither his way out? I hope Keitou also grows some grey matter soon. He is on a slippery slope. Hopefully the King and soon to be Queen of Egypt can straighten out these two nations.Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 06:12 am
I so wish there were recorders in those days. Sap would have his head on a spear. I can't stand that slimy snake and apparently no one else can either well those that have since enough not to anyway.
I so hope he gets he just deserve and he had the nerve to boist about his deflowing Merit by force and calling her his property really. Get a grip chump.
Thank you for the update. Loving the story.
Author's Response: Awesome! Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 12:02 am
Darn spell check. I meant sociopathical. I really look forward to your updates and whatever you plan for Sap I will be popping a bag of popcorn because that will be epic reading;DReviewer: Charly43 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 14 2014 05:15 am