Too short. Need more! So, is the clause in the contract especially for her ? I like it, I hope she falls hard for him.
Reviewer: Shadow Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 09:30 pm
The clause isn't a hardship, as if she does fall in love, she will want to marry. Interesting that he had that contract drawn up before he met her. Is he willing to marry anyone, provided they love him?
Interesting.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 09:28 pm
The plot thickens. The marriage clause at the end provided a really nice surprise. Jamison is definitely more than he pretends to be. I would like to know more specifics from the contract. You're off to a great start.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 08:30 pm
Yes! Ready for the date! Is HE just looking for a hook up with a smarter girl? Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2014 06:23 am
I have a question. How old is Elise?
Author's Response:
23
Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2014 05:10 am
Interesting. Now what is she going to offer Jamison in exchange for her tuition? Companionship? Help in his office? I hope they work out the details at dinner.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 08:59 pm
Like jameson... Dying to see the date.. Update soon!!!
Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 06:52 am
Sounds very dominant, I like!!
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 06:45 am
Just an fyi. In the last chapter it stated Elise was in medschool and this chapter said she was pre-med. I can't wait to see where their date goes. Update soon
Author's Response:
Ok thanks. She is in med school sorry for the mix up.
Reviewer: mavs0515 Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 06:12 am
Interesting. Can't wait for their meetup.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 05:57 am
Jameson is quite cynical and his mother is nag. Jameson doesn't want the type of woman you are trying to set him up with leave the man be!! He will be very surprised when he meets Elise, she is woman that works hard for her money. Looking forward to reading about their date.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 05:53 am
Looking forward to reading about the date.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2014 05:10 am
Good start. Keep it going. Can't wait to meet Jameson. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 06:01 am
Great!!! I can't wait to see what's in store!
Reviewer: LaceTurkeyExpress Signed [Report This]Date: July 14 2014 04:08 am
The second part was pretty good why redo it?
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2014 05:38 pm
Good start! I want to read more.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2014 10:15 pm
Why did you restart the story?
Author's Response:
The secnd chapter was not right just under some reconstruction
Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2014 10:56 am
I love this pairing. And it totally works that he's a young startup millionaire.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2014 12:41 pm
Nice beginning...update?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 10:09 pm
I like her so far. I hope that she is able to finish her schooling and fall in love as well.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 09:26 pm
Very interesting liking the premise of the story Can't wait to see what happens next when Elise meets Jameson who is hooooottttt by the way who wouldn't want that to be their sugar daddy I sure would
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 08:17 pm
I like the thought the man should look older more refined the girl should favor keke Palmer the-man jason stratham just a thought
Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 06:17 pm
You have me intreauged. I want to see where this is going. Love the character pics! He's hot! Corrine Bailey Rae is so naturally pretty! Good pairing😄
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 06:14 pm
great start so far! more please!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2014 01:51 pm