Thank you so much. I both love your story as well as the little rants slash teachings that you put on the end. Thank you because they help to make my day better.

I soooo agree with your 5 points. I would love to have a conversation with you. Love the story. Ryan needs to stop lying, it's not good. Come clean. I like these two characters. Glad I finally got around to reading it. Thanks for sharing.

If the story is interesting, the longer the better and yours is very interesting. I'm loving the way you write. I think no matter what size you are or how you look or if you're a woman or a man, if you have confidence in yourself, it makes you 100 times more attractive. Confidence is the key and believe it.

I love you! Your comments make me laugh. And I appreciate the fa pornct that you're trying to make her as realistic as possible, including her being weaved, and not having hair that comes from that Native American heritage going on. Haha. And that she is a thick sister. ;) so gracias.  You write what I cannot. And I appreciate it. 

I am so glad they have interacted. I am excited about the next chapter!

I don't think I've commented on this story before but I'm enthralled. You piqued my interest with Jason momoa's face. You had me with the storyline. I want to see how this plays out.

Secondly, your five things list made me chuckle. I completely agree with number five. I've been sitting here like 'how can you bring back something that never left?' But yeah, woman on woman hate has got to stop.

I'm so feeling the time jump. Do it.... Do it please!!! I ain't to proud to beg.

Good story and finally a story that brings out the issues of negative social constructive mentalities that tend to dominate all societies.  Particularily because all Western issues have now been magnified in other cultures because our culture is so pervasive and let's not even get into the racist microaggressions of white and POCs when it comes to these issues.  Ugh, ugh, ugh.   Anyway great story and I can't wait to read.  Why is it that I want Jahni with a new woman?  Maybe it's because I want to live vicariously through a girl with glasses who finally gets the hot guy.  

Great story.

I'm loving your top five comments at the end of this chapter. keep releasing your stress

I'm really enjoying what I've read so far and look forward to your updates. Love your visual inspirations for the lead characters. 

I've walked both paths and understand Camille's thoughts and perceived bashing of smaller women. I think it's realistic that she may have some less than nice thoughts because being plus size you're held up against a standard that doesn't reflect you. It's a defense mechanism. It might not be right but it is realistic.

I've recently lost quite a bit of weight (Over a 100 lbs) and let me tell you life has changed. The biggest thing I've noticed is I'm not invisible any longer. So ironic that it took getting smaller for people to actually notice me. So from my perspective I understand Camille's inner dialogue.  

As a black woman who suffers from a medical condition that has ravaged my once full head of hair I was excited about a character that was a proud weave wearer. If given a choice would I rock my own natural locks, heck yeah! Can I also just sport a bald head (it's that bad in some spots), you betcha. There's a third choice and it offers me the option to be creative and still stylish. So weave it is. I know your character is doing it as a protective style but I urge everyone reading to remember everyone has a story. 

I guess what I really wanted to convey is that I relate to Camille. It does help me enjoy the story. The flip side is even if she were my polar opposite I'd have an open mind. Sometimes it's cool to see how the other half feel and think. Bias is usually created through life experience and isn't it fascinating how it takes shape. 

I'm not knocking anyone who's submitted a review. I just strongly support the author being able to write her characters, her way. So far, I'm enjoying your pace. I love the humor and this is one I watch for updates.

Can I just say I love your characters!!!! I love that Camille is shapely with darker skin. I LOVE it. I get so sick and tired pepping self-hate in a lot of these stories. I also love that Ryan is a man of color. I got the impression that the valent chamber was for "interraical" relationships but literally even story is with a white guy. Nothing against them but yeah...let the other men shine too. Definitely on point about the weave thing, too. 

I loved their introduction!! Why he gotta lie thou? Just tell her you own the damn place. Ok look if not now hopefully song. I think out of all the lies that you could have this one is just not worth it. Keep it one hundred and fiftie! 

And yes I can't wait to see them out in public!! New scenery yay! Keep it up coming I'm living it!

also YAS to all of number 4!!!!!!!!!! Nothing left to say dats it

I have been natural my whole life. Had the puffs all through middle school and loc'd up in high school all the way up until I graduated from college. I got a weave after that but was still natural. I see nothing wrong with weave being that underneath it I had the protective braids. I believe in healthy hair overall. If weave achieves that, then weave it is. I know I STILL have my edges. 🙆💆

anyhoo!! I am digging the story and your end of story rants/think pieces. You are super awesome, keep doing what you do best!! 🙌