Great start! Can't wait to read more. Love these two already. It's great to hear that Chase has gotten rid of Angie, but I hate that he has to pay her deceitful behind alimony!
Author's Response:
I know. I think they will be adorable together. I think Chase doesn't mind paying as long as he gets rid of her. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 11:43 pm
She dropped out school and her father let, which is what I don't understanf? He hae to know that hw WV wouldn't be around forever, how well could she handle the business side of the business. Chase saved her life! ! I love this story already!! If he gets married will stll have to that ho alimony? I know that the woman getting ends the ailmony payments. More please!!
Author's Response:
pmgayles!!! Well something would have had to happen for her father to let her quit school, right? All that will be coming up soon. and all I have to say is this isn't the last we'll see of Angie. As always, thank you for reading my story and reviewing it. You fucking ROCK !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 11:21 pm
I guess Maya is used to being around people? So, what...she just quit school and hung out fixing cars with her dad at the garage? But she's responding to Chase in a sexual way..and seems to know what she's talking about. She can't be that inept socially, right?
Author's Response:
Flikchick, you're getting way ahead of me. She did go to school till 8th grade so there's that social experience and she did have to deal with customers at the shop so there's that too. I think she probably feels more socially awkward than she actually really is. As far as sexually knowledge, wait till you meet her Aunt Glenda!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 10:52 pm
Awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and review it.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 09:20 pm
Oh Yeah!! You got me!!
Author's Response:
Good! LOL! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 08:17 pm
A female mechanic? I love it. Great choice for the cast. I wish Maya wasn't so shy, but I'm sure you'll work that out of her soon enough.
Author's Response:
azzure1020. Everytime I see your name I want to say "azzure/ blue". I love when a woman can do a traditionally male job well. It's sexy. Yeah, I'm sure Chase will help work some of that shyness out of her soon enough. Thank you for reading and reviewing it. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 07:47 pm
This is a great start! Chase and Maya are going to be good together. I can't wait to read about Maya' s mother. She sounds like a piece of work. Please update soon:))))
Author's Response:
Thank you Charly43. Yes, Maya's mother is something else. I will be starting the next chapter soon. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 11 2014 07:29 pm