Lisa and her demon spawn are Satan's embassAry on Earth. I want those two to die! ! Navy is working my nerves again. Navy you must deal with has happened to the world. Just suck it up!!
Author's Response:
Lol yeah Lisa and her baby are quite a duo. I believe that Nava is working through what's happening in her own way. Most times people don't accept things until they have no choice. That's what I'm working towards. Nava tries to be strong but under the protection of Connor she doesn't really have to. So (spoiler alert) I'm going to shake things up majorly and force her to survive and live up to her potential.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: May 02 2015 04:02 pm
Thank god for interruptions, I was cringing while reading this. I'm not saying I'm happy about ciaras brutal murder but she had it coming and thanks to that Nava saw just wat she was getting herself into. I'm also scared for Darrell I have a feeling that Corners going to take him out before he prevails in his plan to fix things. I think Nava and her pack of 5 are better of outside the warehouse if only Nava could start believing in herself more but I do understand her concern. I am hooked I can't wait for another update hopefully it will be soon.
Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2015 07:19 am
Please,pleasedon't let Nava whore herself out to crazy Conner. Jack and Lauren will look down on you, bc Conner will make sure all know.
I think it is time that the group start going out with Conner to look for provisions---if something happens to him, they will all starve.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2015 02:35 am
Why is Connor protecting that evil woman and her demon spawn? What does Java want to talk to Connor about and will he listen? Love Jack!! Thank you for updating!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 09:35 pm
I can't believe I use to doubt this story and my word was I wrong it's really good I found myself anxiously waiting for an update and you didn't disappoint I can't wait for the next update :-) and I am courious to know what is Nava planning to do with Conner. He gives me the creeps anyhoo great chapter can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 08:51 pm
Uh oh! Why do I feel like Nava is about to make a deal with the devil. Love this story can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: jetzero Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 05:34 pm
Nava is a real badass now, I really like it ! Ciara doesn't know what she triggered. I'm glad she defended the little boy. People better not get on her nerves ! lol
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2015 12:05 pm
Nava don't like the little girl and the little girl don't like her, but no one had better lay hands on the boy. Surprised she didn't tell Conner about Tyler giving extra to Ciara, but I think Conner sees all.
Tyler is a snake and will stab you in the back, literally, while Conner is the one you keep around to help fight, but know if you have to put him down you best bring your A game.
This is such a good story and so well written that I kind of spatz when I see an update.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2015 06:35 pm
Nava has found her strength. Why didn't Connor let Nava kill Ciara? I am happy that Lauren has forgiven Nava too. I am so happy to see Nava warming up to that little boy As he needs love and affection. Awesome sauce!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2015 11:14 am
Being faced with being a sacrifice will turn you like that... You go Nava, but get some sleep .. What the heck is Conner? A vampire lol I'm still trying to figure him out. This was such a good chapter! I've really missed this story! Hope another update will be soon
Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2015 04:56 am
Wow, Nava read Tyler and hearing the truth about himself infuriated him. I hope Connor beats the snot out of him and puts him out. Tyler will have to die and that saddens me. Not!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2015 01:23 pm
Wouldn't trust Tyler or Conner. She knows Tyler hates her bc she is a woman and Conner wants her when she is helpless and scared. Nava is getting stronger and my money will be on her when it comes down to Tyler.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2015 04:25 am
Poor little thing, you did more than well. Connor better not let the traitors unpunished ! After this traumatising event, she deserves to be cuddled and I hope the little boy did well without her. I really love their sweet bond. Great update !
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2015 08:07 am
Once my Girl snaps back to her senses, she is going to be a force to be reckon with. Now she knows at any time she could be on her own; she also now knows she will fight to the end to survive.
Shame on Conner for sneaking a feel on a tramatized girl :-),but he did clean her up without violating her, which means he still has some humanity left.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2015 08:35 pm
Once my Girl snaps back to her senses, she is going to be a force to be reckon with. Now she knows at any time she could be on her own; she also now knows she will fight to the end to survive.
Shame on Conner for sneaking a feel on a tramatized girl :-),but he did clean her up without violating her, which means he still has some humanity left.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2015 08:34 pm
Wowwwwww. This story is so good . The summary doesn't give it justice.
Author's Response:
Thank you I really suck at summaries I've been trying to redo it but i can't seem to capture the story in such few sentences. However thank you very much for reading.
Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2015 06:28 pm
Wish that I could feel sorry for Nava she got what her dumb ass deserved. Tyler was wrong for ignoring her call for help, however. i hope that she aplogizes to her friend because she was bogus for what she said. Will Nava be less annoying now? Each chapter is amazing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for you're review. As far as Nava being less annoying I hope not but each chapter she'll unlock a new piece of her new self whether good or bad. A series of events is leading her towards her true self and her inspiration for surviving. Now some of those new characteristics may be good or bad but hey no one can ever accuse me of creating a Mary sue lol thanks again for reviewing
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 06 2015 04:31 am
Wow! Talk abt cliff hangers! 😯 update soon!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2014 02:58 am
Bet Ginger was bit on her shoulder and she told Cherise to stay away--so she knew, too. Would not trust Conner one bit and she needs to apologize to her friends, if she survives. I just love your story.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2014 07:19 am
I knew it, I hope that she kills Ginger. More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2014 05:32 am
After reading the missed chapter I'm back on the fence about liking/ hating Connor. I still want to slap the hell out of Niva but I understand its a process so I am keeping the faith.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2014 02:09 am
Well look at that Conner is human. Yay, now I don't feel so bad for thinking he's hot. He's still an asshole but at least he's not a complete moron. My opinion of Nava hasn't changed though. But I trust her stupidity to be cured as she learns to survive more.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2014 10:30 am
Tyler needs yo be beaten! ! Nava may be annoying but she deserves some respect as a human being. Connor apologized, watch him Nava as that waa shady. Awesome sauce!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2014 12:48 am
I'm so loving this story !! I suspect Ginger was bitten, otherwise she would have revealed her wounds, sneaking B*! But I also think that this will help Nava grow up a little bit and have the sense of a real survival when she'll be forced to kill Ginger all by herself in that closed room. Great story, thanx for sharing !!
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: November 27 2014 07:52 am
I missed this update! ! Nava is a pain in thr posterior and I wish that Lauren would slap the sugady out of her. Cooll beans!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 26 2014 01:37 pm