Wow, her donors were evil as hell, that are all going to hell in gasoline draws wearing a pork chop sandwish necklaces for the hounds of hell. I am so happy that Camille opened up to Hiram. Awesome sauce! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: December 05 2014 02:52 pm
Camille"s birth parents are pathetic people, and it would be poetic justice if not only they did need Camille, but one of their daughts married a guy that looked like Shaquille O Neil Lol.
I am glad that Camille told Hiram about her past.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed
[Report This]Date: December 05 2014 02:19 pm
Yaaaaay ! After the calm theres always a storm though huh ?
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2014 02:18 am
That was great! This love scene was so tender and genuine between Hiram and Camille.
Every man should make love the way Hiram just did to Camille; he was caring and
paient and really knew how to pleasure her. Don't worry about those who didn't stick
around it's ther lost and they missed out. Great job and update soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 02 2014 10:39 pm
Thank you for the wonderful update. I personally love the pace of the story, for me if feels so more realistic and makes the relationship between Hiram and Camile more genuine and special.
March pieces, this is your story and you write it however you like. Unfortunately one of the downside of this site is I feel that some people forgot that you talented people share your stories with us for FREE! !
Unfortunately you can't please everyone, the only person you can please it's yourself. I love your writing and am grateful for you sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 08:53 pm
I am enjoying your story and I appreciate the wait. Sometimes the sex just comes too fast for me. And in this case with Hiram's past, it would have been unbelievable for Camille to trust him that much right away. Good job.
Reviewer: Candace Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 08:40 pm
I get excited everyone there is a new chapter for this story. I like that there was a slow build up in their relationship. It makes it feel more real. You can't please everyone, write the story how you see fit and people will love it or chose to read something else!
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 07:50 pm
Thanks for the update I love how your pasting this story. The Celebration of christmas & little Savvy's birthday. That little girl had a blast at home and at Camille's family home. The extra was them growing closer & finally admitting their feelings for each other. The love scene was sweet and hot
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 04:03 pm
I love the slow build between Camille and Hiram, and their love scene was worth the wait, those two deserve all the happiness.
Ok now can that Ho Debbie get what's coming to her. Oh and have Hiram get his nephew away from his toxic family. Lol, that's my Christmas wish.
Author's Response:
Thank you liberty lady I actually was thinking towards the end of the story Hiram gaining custody of Steven but I'm still thinking about it. Not a bad idea though.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 02:58 pm
Awesome sauce!! Hiram and Camille are so cute together. Savannah is one spoiled little cutie and she's walking. Thank you for this amazing update!! I love how Hiram and Camille have admitted their love for one another. I am waiting for either death or jail to meet Debbie and those other racists hicks!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 02:21 pm
With everything going on in their lives, job cuts, hiding in the woods and being harassed by the klans, this no time for an additional child.it seems as if Hiram would have used a condom!!!!!! Lets's get some stability, marriage then SEX!!!!
Author's Response:
This is what's really beginning to frustrate me. For a while now I've been getting complaints on why Hiram and Camille have yet to have sex and that's all some not all have been waiting for. I wanted them to at least fall in love first then make love. Then when I do post the chapter some of you complain just because it was unprotected. Well how do you think Savannahs came to be? I understand there is a high risk for pregnancy with unprotected sex however at the same time you don't conceive every single time. And maybe just maybe Camille wasn't ovulating at the time since that's when the window for conception is oon most of the time. Yeah a guy can ejaculate but the female has to be in the fertile window. The ironic thing is you would have complained if I had then wait until they're married because that wouldn't be until the end and you'd be still be complaining about why it took so long or why they only had sex once. Smh I'm sorry but some of you just can't be satisfied and I'm just done.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 02:18 pm
Love the back story. Your story is great for people that are looking for more than a one shot. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 02:15 pm
WOW!!!!! Yes, Finally.
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 01:53 pm
No condom?
Author's Response:
No conception took place Camille was not ovulating
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 01:21 pm
I loved the Christmas celebration with the family. I know that Hiram loved all his gifts from Camilla and I had no problem with you waiting til they made love it was right on time. They had the chance to get to know each other and fall in love.
I was nervous when I thought that Randy and Garrett were going to take her. That was a huge relief when Hiram came to her rescue.
Not that that have had their love making session I hope they are able to enjoy each other just a little longer before Debbie rears her ugly head.
Thank you for the story and update.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 11:01 am
The LOVE scene was touching, and tender. Just what Camille needed from Hiram. That was a big step for all 3 of them towards being a real family.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 08:27 am
Enjoyed this chapter. I am glad Hiram and Camille expressed their love for each other. I can't wait foe the update. Hopefully it is soon.
Reviewer: Waiting Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 05:05 am
It was excellent, well worth the wait.
Reviewer: Soulholder Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 04:51 am
Hiram and Camille are doing the right thing; working on giving Savannah a litte sister or brother.
Reviewer: Katt Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 04:26 am
Loved the update! Camille and Hiram have finally admitted their love. Hope things work out for them.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 04:13 am
Sweet! Looking forward to watching their relationship continue to grow. Can't wait to learn why little miss Savannah looks mixed, either. Keep it coming...I'm loving it.
Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 03:50 am
Worth the wait!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 03:28 am
I love it, the love scence was written very tasteful.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2014 03:02 am
Hope an update is coming soon!
Reviewer: Good reading Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 30 2014 08:17 pm