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Title: Chapter 18

Great back story. It explains a lot of Hiram's actions as an adult. Hypocrisy at its worst. Hiram Jr actually had to reeducate himself to dug himself out of that hole he inherited. It's amazing how some folks' world view could be so distorted and ugly.

Keeping going. Your story, though painful, is a good one to tell. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 12:40 pm
Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for the backstory on Hiram Sr. I knew he was living a lie. Most of them are...they want to be with a Black, Hispanic, Asian or Jewish girl, but are afraid of the repercussions of their actions. I am glad that you are allowing us readers into the minds of the other characters in this story and how their actions helped us understand your main characters and how they became the adults they are now. 10 stars 2 thumbs up!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 11:46 am
Title: Chapter 18

Wow. Amazing update. 

 Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 10:27 am
Title: Chapter 18

Endless backstory.  Could have been shorter.  Really just work with what is in the present -basically develop Camille and Hiram's r/ship.  All the other stuff seem like fillers.  Would give 3 stars.

 Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 08:26 am
Title: Chapter 18

Interesting that Hiram Sr. was sleeping with a black woman. Typical,  hypocrisy at it's finest. Good update. I hope we get back to Hiram Jr. and Camille soon.

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 05:29 am
Title: Chapter 18

Good chapter.  I knew that daddy was sleeping with black women. Can't wait for the next update!!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 18

Hiram made somw bad decision but i think that he is good egg and never really accepted his parents teachings. His father was introduced to karma and she dealt him death! ! Poor Mamie she didn't deserve to die. This is so good!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 18

Now I understand Hiram better. They tired they tried to shove all that racist BS on him, yet they can't even live by their own code. Mr. Whitefield got exactly what he deserved. As for Ruth Ann, she can continue to live in her ivory tower. She probably knows more then she is letting on. This is explain her issues with black women and not wanting to accept her granddaughter.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 03:03 am
Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for the chapter.  The background information was really good.

 Reviewer: Leigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 02:50 am
Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for the background information. Good filler. Can't wait till the next chapter!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 02:00 am
Title: Chapter 18

I get so excited when you update. I just love this story so much!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2014 01:44 am
Title: Chapter 17

Loved the update! Debbie needs a reality check!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 05:27 am
Title: Chapter 17

Don't  keep us hanging! 

We are ready for the kkk and Debbie to get what's coming to the!!!

Hopefully you got some hidden dirt in Hiram's mom's/dad's and Debbie's life to shut their mouths. Maybe some generational stuff as to why Savannah's complexion is somewhat tan? Maybe from Hiram's side if the family? Who knows maybe Debbie has slept around with black men!!!!!!

it is time for  Hiram, Camille and Savannah to have some happiness because of everything they have been through, the rejection, prejudice and hard times.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 08:24 am
Title: Chapter 17

Ooooooh girl hurry ! Im anxious ! Lol

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 02:09 pm
Title: Chapter 17

Debbie=Trash & Trouble!

She can not stand the fact that he is choosing a black woman and a 1/2 Jewish baby over the Klan and her! 

DEBBIE needs to get over it and soon!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 06:51 am
Title: Chapter 17

Please don't let this 'favour' be brutal! I can't take camille, hiram and savannah being split up!!!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 17

Enjoyed this story. 

We have the flash backs of the main characters. You have given us a good view of the past. Flash backs are fine, however the present and the future lives of Hiram, Camille and Savannah is what we are interested in.

Don't wait too long with the next chapters.

 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 11:11 pm
Title: Chapter 17

This story really is full of adventure. Being raised in the South, really want that Debbie and the klans to really get it. Wish they could get a good whooping/beating.

Okay, you said Camille and savannah were going to be alright. What about Hiram? This little family could use some miracles(financially and career wise). I would love to see Hiram get a miracle concerning a well paying job or his own thriving business.

And bring out some dirt in Hiram's mother and father's life and that Debbie needs something to bring her high horses down.

Can't wait for more updates a86;a039;

 Reviewer: Cherry Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 06:33 pm
Title: Chapter 17

I am truly enjoying this story thank you for sharing your imagination.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 06:08 am
Title: Chapter 17

Debbie I want to string up in a dang tree!! I love those sweet moments between Camille and Hiram and of course Savvy

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 03:44 am
Title: Prologue

The plot development is awesome:-)! People ABSOLUTELY still feel this way regarding skin color. Colors truck phenomenon is not dead and gone: people are just far more careful to express it particular places. Just take a look at who is a beauty icon and who is not within the AA community. Love the story keep it coming you're doing fine!

 Reviewer: nodrivel99 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2014 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 17

Debbie is one stupid tramp, Hiram wants Class and not Trash. Whatever her and The Three Stooges have planed won't prosper

 Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 10 2014 11:41 pm
Title: Chapter 17

Debbie has got to go. She is not even fit for the Klan. She wouldn't know loyalty if it bit her on the behind. To threaten a kid is even low for her.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2014 11:12 pm
Title: Chapter 17

The jealous haters waste so much time and energy plotting to do harm to others. It's a sad fact of life.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2014 10:51 pm
Title: Chapter 17

Debbie is evil! I love this story! I am very scared for savannah and camille though!

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2014 10:10 pm


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