Could you please try to make the chapters longer? The story is great, but the chapters are just too short. You could also try to put more than just one scene in the story. That is the only complaint that I have. The pace of the story is okay. But the length of the chapters are just too short. Its leaves you unsatisfied. Sorry if you feel offended or that I'm trying to push you. That is not my intention.

Ruth has fallen off her rocker. She is willing to let hate come between her family. I can't wait to see all see all the secrets fall out of that family tree.

As for Debbie, why is she so determine to have Hiram? She certainly worked her way through the Klan. She is a stalker.

This little plot is going to backfire big time for Debbie, Ruth and Hiram's sisters.  None of them are considering what Hiram wants.  It's all about their wants and the Klan's wants.  Just based on this little bit of time, Hiram would hurt anyone who came after Camille and Savannah including family.

I like the story, but I do wish the chapters were longer with a bit more meat. I get with time and just general writing styles it might not be plausible, but I would love to have more than one "scene" in a chapter. It's kinda like watching a movie and it pausing after every event. Luckily you update pretty frequently so we're not left wondering for too long. However, even with the lengths you don't necessarily "drag" the story and you keep the information so relevant. There's no real filler drama and I love that. Of course there's the racism and the crazy white woman, but it's portrayed as true racism and not just prejudice. I don't get how they're so active as a KKK sect, but I'm from a metropolitan where racism is hidden in the crime rates. I would love to see flashbacks of Hiram's and Camille's childhoods especially in comparison to Savannah's.  The irony would be too great if Ruth or Hiram Sr was half black and passing as white. I would love it! 

Continue to be amazing and I can't wait for an update! 

well it looks like Debbie psycho cake is about to be let loose.  She really think her birthday cake is soo good that he will be blown away.  Hoe, the reason he don't want you is because your vajayjay is floppy.  He knows others have been there, many others.  That is not attractive.  If he went his own way before what makes you think he will succomb to you now.  He's not even talking to his momma because of her racist viewpoints about his child.  She is seriously delusional if she thinks harming his child will bring him closer to her.  If I knew how to do gifs I would so have Kat Williams WTF face right now.  Matter of fact, it would be a billboard size sign above the whole klan meeting.  Looking forward to more Camille and Hiram.  I would hope Hiram finds himself somewhere decent to stay, food, clothing so he can feel more accomplished.  I would expect they would hit at his pride to try to bring him into the fold once again.  Just writing out loud.  Want to see how you develop their relationship in this racially divided town. 

Interesting update! Hope Hiram doesn't give into his family's wishes for him and Debbie needs to get a life that doesn't involve Hiram. His whole family needs a reality check!

uh oh we got some crazy bitches on the loose

Aw, sweet.

Loved the update!

The moving topic came up  Yippie ! Hopefully they talk about it a bit more and get this move on the road lol ! Great chapter ! KeEp up the great work ! :)

Awwww, I love where this is going. Eeeee!

Slowly but surely....

That was a sweet update! Loved it! Love the interaction between Savannah and Hiram! Hope Debbie don't become too much of a problem for him.