Reviews For Choosey Lover
Title: Chapter 12

I so don't like Elle's immature antics.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 09:57 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I really dislike this Elle. She's selfish.

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Date: February 12 2015 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Cute!

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Date: February 12 2015 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Waxed kitty and killer dress? It  better be on and poppin' next chapter!



Author's Response:

All I got to say Khamalani…It’s. About. To. Go. Down.

That's enough tea spillage for now. Thanks for the review hon.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 12:19 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Thus chapter was hilarious,  when she got waxed and her nanni buffed up I had to chuckle.  I can't wait for Dean to see Elle in that dress   Break him off piece Elle!! Good stuff! !



Author's Response:

Good to know it made you laugh…that means it did what it was supposed to do lol. I think everybody's ready for Elle to show out next chapter---especially Dean. Thanks for reviewing pmgayles!

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 25

I hate you so much right now (- ____-)!!



Author's Response:

Probably cause I'm petty boots.

#ButIStillLoveYallThough 

Thanks for reviewing A_Girl_Called_T!

CG

Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 10:42 am

Title: Chapter 25

Yes we are waiting. Poor Dean has had blue balls since college.  Elle is horny but scared.. damn give it up already.  She needs to come to the party prepared.. condom, wax, and days off from work.  He'll love her anyway he can get her.



Author's Response:

What if she showed out and came to dinner in a Velcro dress? For easy access?

J/k.

But next chapter ain’t  a game. Thanks for reviewing and making me cackle Michmom2!

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 25

That conversation with Tracie and Elle about that wax job made my stomach hurt I laughed so damn hard! Tracie and Elle are so stupid together. You can tell they've been friends since the cradle. And Tracie is always getting Elle to do something dumb...lol!

Why is Tracie being so secretive about New York??

I have to see the dress!!

 



Author's Response:

As a unit they're definitely a H(ot)A(ss)M(ess). They met in college, but you’d swear they’ve know each other longer. And that New York trip will be discussed in future chapters. Now, you know I got pics of the dress too *wink emoji*. Thanks for reviewing flikchick!

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 25

Awww come on! You can't leave us hanging like that....update soon please!!!



Author's Response:

But I did.

Because I’m petty.

Sorry for the wait Anonymous.

CG

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 24

Seriously, why can't Randall just get the hint. Its getting ridiculous now. Is he obsessed with her or what? Seriously going as far as to go to her company, to be a client just so he could get close to her and get her to sleep with him sounds a little obsessive to me. Because I really can't imagine a man in his right mind, who is rich and could get any other woman would go this far only for a quick fuck. Especially when the woman had made it clear that she is not interested. I think that Elle handled the situation with Randall well in this chapter. But I still don't think she truly realize how unpredictable Randall can be and how dangerous this can be for her. Randall had made it clear that he wants her, and if he is willing to go this far as to go to her workplace, should definitely set her alarm bells on. She also needs to talk to her secretary, and tell her that when she schedule her appointments with Randall that all their appointments will be done strictly at the office. No lunch or anything else, especially if they are going to be alone.

 

I like how Elle and Dean's relationship is progressing. But when will they finally get the deed done? Like really there is always something in the way. First she wanted to wait, then there were no condoms, now Dean is sick and when he got better it turns out she is on her period? Like really. What is next? Dean not being able to get it up?

 

Great chapter though. 



Author's Response:

Randall has definitely shown his ass on more than one occasion. Even in previous chapters, he was very adamant even with Elle’s obvious resistance. Once again, proving he doesn’t take rejection well. Furthermore, I agree with Elle taking way more precaution in handling him. Especially since he’s shown us that he doesn’t mind mixing business with pleasure.

Dare I say it, but the fact that they haven’t done the deed is kind of aiding their progression. Before they got together it was a no go. But now that they are, it’s been interesting to see how they handle all these blockades to still be intimate. No worries, their time is coming soon enough.

Thanks for reviewing Mary_ann.

CG

Reviewer: Mary_ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Yazsssss lord yassss I love this story too much and I jsut started reading it today I might have read it earlier but my memory is jogged a bit since it was deletedbut yasss!!



Author's Response:

I love how hype you are lol.

And thanks hon.

CG

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2015 12:32 am

Title: Chapter 24

Lol, loved Elle taking care of her man, I remember when I got sick, my Uncle brought me some Hennessey, it worked wonders.

I hope that soon Dean and Elle will finally get Physical, it seems that fate is playing a cruel joke on them Lol.

Randall is still creepy.



Author's Response:

Glad you like & Henny does do the trick. Here’s to praying all the stars align for them to finally get some action lol. And girl when isn’t he? Lol thanks for reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 09 2015 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 24

Lol oh lord you had to bring Gloria into the mix. Haha great chapter. Can't wait for the next update! 



Author's Response:

That gif speaks to me on so many levels. Y’all don’t even know. Thanks for reviewing alee92!

CG

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 05:58 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update. I really love their chemistry and how Elle  handle  Petersen. 



Author's Response:

As usual, you’re very welcome kuriouskale!

CG

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 05:05 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Ok, I'm liking Elle now...if only Peterson would take a long walk off a short pier.  I need for him and Dean to have a man to man quickly.



Author's Response:

This is the second time someone’s brought up Dean intervening…we’ll see. Thanks for reviewing Drea.

CG

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 03:57 pm

Title: Chapter 24

LMAO that gif is wild! You're wild! AHAHAHA Love it!!!

 



Author's Response:

Lol I keep a few of them handy, so I’m glad you love it thincakes.

CG

Reviewer: thincakes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 24

Awww, Elle letting her feelings come out now.  I am so happy.  Now all we need is for a**face to leave her the heck alone.  I would tell that secretary he is to always be announced and waiting for me in the conference room with plenty of camera's and hell I'll have the secretary in there too to take notes on the meeting , in case he forgets anything and she can send him a write-up later.  Bish please, this is a workplace, not a club or something.  I would also prep the resume and think about starting my own business, taking their clients with me. 

 



Author's Response:

Apparently, A**face would get everybody’s hands judging by a few of these reviews. Great points about how to handle the situation. Let’s hope Elle implements further action in keeping him in check. Thanks for reviewing lajack1!

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 24

Peterson is trouble with a capital  T!! Dean is sick add Elle is taking care of him I am truly surprised  by her actions with Dean.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Basically & am I sensing a slight change of heart on Elle? Or nah? Lol thanks for reviewing pmgayles.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2015 04:30 am

Title: Chapter 23

I loved it!  Finally Dean gets some physical love and affection.



Author's Response:

Right, if only he had those condoms. Then it would’ve got REAL physical. Thanks for reviewing hon!

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2015 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 23

Go'on Elle! 😄 



Author's Response:

Ms. Foster if ya nasty...

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 08:43 am

Title: Chapter 23

things are getting hot! I can't wait for their first time after all these years.



Author's Response:

You and all the other readers & reviewers are in the same boat lol. Thanks for reviewing katt.

CG

Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 04:06 am

Title: Chapter 23

Dean was cautios and right to let Elle make all the moves, but next time be on your game and get some condoms.  I don't think Dean is going anywhere, but the dude hadn't been lax in getting some, so Elle may need to doublecheck and make sure they are exclusive. 

He cares about Elle, but is on guard about the man she is working for.  I say get that resume uptight. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, he knew to pump the breaks when he didn’t come properly prepared. And they're exclusive, Dean’s just surprisingly patient. Now Elle’s job situation will get tackled soon. Thanks so much for reviewing Penelope!

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 05:36 pm

Title: Chapter 23

I still love Dean more than I like Elle. Elle is no longer tap dancing on my last nerve she's tugging  on my patience.  I am happy that she thought about Dean and his obvious  need and got him off. As that shows growth on Elle's part. Love her friends!!!



Author's Response:

I figured it was her timing you couldn’t stand. I get it. Thanks for reviewing pmgayles!

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 01:25 pm

Title: Chapter 23

That was kinda funny! Sloppy drunk Elle just saved them six more months of torture! And she was a little too honest with the backstory there. TMI!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, sloppy drunk Elle is way more upfront and brutally honest. Sorry if you weren't feeling the back story. But thanks for reviewing flikchick.

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 09:47 am

Title: Chapter 23

Poor Dean...no.condoms! Oh well at least she made him feel good. He'll be prepared next time!! Good chapter



Author's Response:

Oh I’m sure he’ll be good and prepared. Thanks for reviewing Michmom2!

CG

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 05:46 am



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