Reviews For Choosey Lover
Title: Chapter 22

Well  now, Elle really surprised me. Amazing that a boozy Elle is more honest with her feelings. Now, let's see how she acts when she's not liquored up.

In regards to Randall, Elle is a grown ass woman, she should be able to freeze that fucker out. And if he tries ANYTHING, she should first pepper spray that ass and then take his balls as souvenir.

Good update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Boozy Elle definitely came through this chapter. Your guess about non-liquored up Elle’s actions are about as good as mine. You’re not the first to prescribe mace or Mortal Kombat “finish him” style tactics, but let’s see how this goes. Thanks for reviewing Chica!

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 08:02 am

Title: Chapter 22

I am so excited that they are together officially!!!



Author's Response:

Me too! Best believe I got some tricks up my sleeve *wink*. Thanks for reviewing kuriouskale!

CG

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 05:16 am

Title: Main & Supporting Cast

I hope Elle knows self defense. As the other posters have already stated, it sure won't hurt for Elle to polish that resume.



Author's Response:

So you’re #TeamRefreshYourLinkedInProfile too? Lol thanks for reviewing Darqchild.

CG

Reviewer: Darqchild Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 10:58 pm

Title: Chapter 22

i love this story!



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Reviewer: LiLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Great update, glad that Elle was honest with Dean even if she needed liquid courage to do so Lol. 

Elle needs to be very careful of Randall when she's alone with him, andcifvI were her, I would have some Mace or Pepper Spray handy..

Can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

For once, her drunkenness worked in her favor lol. Let’s pray she listens to Dean and doesn’t trust Randall for one second. More is on the way darling and thanks for reviewing liberty lady.

CG

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 09:05 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Very enlightening. Good update. 



Author's Response:

Well thank you Musicluva!

CG

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 08:07 pm

Title: Chapter 22

These two are so cautious and sweet--good for them.  Loved the way she asked Dean to be her beau :-).

Now when Randall asks Elle out she can say oh sorry I have a boyfriend, but he won't care.  I hope her boss isn't pimping her out.  Don't meet Randall at night, in fact don't even answer the phone after hrs. 

I wish Elle had replied to Peterson when he said he believes in her, that she knows what she is capapble of and believes in herself, too.  I say Elle needs to dust that resume off.  

When Randall gets out of hand I hope Dean whips that azz. 



Author's Response:

Happy to hear you loved that scene between Elle & Dean. You and a lot of reviewers are hoping she gets that resume right and tight so she can get the hell out of dodge. YAS to the possibility of Dean whopping Randall’s azz!

I’m lowkey here for this.

Thanks for reviewng hon.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 08:13 am

Title: Chapter 22

Even though she was a little drunk, I'm glad that things are going the right direction. I honestly think that Elle should consider starting to look for an other job with better opportunities and a boss who truly cares about his employees and their well being. This one seems to only think about money and clearly doesn't care at all about Elle at all. Its obvious that Randalls intention is not about business. Her boss most have noticed too. And the way he just did not gave Elle a choice in the matter speaks volumes. She will have to have a serious conversation with Randall, because its obvious that being indifferent and professional is not doing the trick. She needs to flat out tell him that she is not interested and to respect her.

I get that her job is on the line and that she is one of the only black people there. But that doesn't mean that she has to put up with being harassed. She should really take her situation with Randall seriously. Randall is a disgusting spoiled brat and used to getting what he wants. Its clear that he wants Elle and that he will do what ever he can to have her. Elle will have to stand up for herself.  Tell him off, and maybe even record it without him knowing, make copies and use it against him and threaten to file for sexual harassment. She is going to have to start protecting herself, because its clear that her boss won't stand behind her.

Its sad how sometimes woman needs to put up with perverts like Randall. There is just no respect whatsoever. And the fact that these type of situations are not being taken seriously and that most the of the times, the woman/victims are being blamed or not believed is sad. 



Author's Response:

Her boss is definitely looking shady boots right now. Especially since Randall is so forthright with his flirtations, so it’s clear to see why he only wants to see her “alone.” I agrre that being one of few at a job does not mean you have to take bullshit when you see/hear it. And yes, it’s sad that these are real life occurrences in the workplace. It’s disgusting and can definitely be prevented. Let’s see how Elle handles this though. Thanks for your insightful review grazylisa.

CG

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 22

The drunken confessions of Elle continue. I really do like where the story's heading, and how the relationship between the main characters is unfolding. Randall is a snake and he's going to cause some problems in their relationship. Either way I'm glad this antagonist got the protagonist to move in the right direction. Thanks for another great update. 



Author's Response:

Oh thank you HumorMe!

You’re too kind.

CG

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 22

Elle said please, maybe she is growing?  Don't  trust Mr. Peterson  and DC het boss is an asshole for putting her in a situation where sexual harassment will take place. Mr. Peterson won't  take no for an answer. 



Author's Response:

She's trying and nobody’s here for Elle’s work situation right now. But that’s to be expected. Thanks for reviewing pmgayles!

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 22

It's about time Elle was honest about her feelings.



Author's Response:

Definitely! Thanks for reviewing Khamalani.

CG

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 04:42 am

Title: Chapter 22

These two are soo good together. I'm glad they've taken the next step. Elle did the right thing being open with Dean, first about the Randall situation and also about her past. Awh. True love.



Author's Response:

Well I’m glad to hear you’re here for their budding relationship. Thanks for reviewing MI97.

CG

Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 28 2015 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 21

I really love the chemistry between these two. 



Author's Response:

Glad you love it! Thanks for reviewing kurious kale. It's been really encouraging as of late.

CG

Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 09:44 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Don't get me wrong I like the story but Elle is getting on my nerves. Great story though....



Author's Response:

That makes you one of many lol. I’m used too it, but I’m glad you still like it. Thanks for reviewing AD.

CG

Reviewer: AD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 21

Is anyone  besides me still annoyed with Elle?   Why is she so prickly about Dean?   What's  with all game playing?  Break the man off a piece, you know you want to! 



Author's Response:

Sorry to annoy you again pmgayles lol. I hope I won’t let you down next chapter.

CG

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2015 05:09 am

Title: Chapter 21

Dang I love me some Dean!!!!  I love me some him (in my Toni Braxton voice).  He most definitely got skills and had her forgetting everything.  If that darn alarm didn't ring, he would be ringing dem bells all night long :).  So let's see what pervy randy will be up to at this meeting in the morning.  I still wonder why Elle is so hesistant to claim Dean.  I mean you cooking for the man and you can't say he's mine.  I might be offended if I was him and aware of these conversations.  Once he sexes that up, let's see what tune she singing then.  Otherwise she saw how he could get someone else, who was typically a gold digger but liked the loving and stayed.  Hmmm, I think if he had ole girl hooked with lackluster performance, once he gets with Elle, she will be walking bowlegged, sitting on a donut at the office and needing an epsom salt bath.  Just sayin'



Author's Response:

When I got this review, I was in the dentist office hollering.

Walking bowlegged? Sitting on donuts? Epsom salt baths?

I. Can’t.

I agree. Elle is definitely schleep on Dean’s skills. Hopefully she’ll open up a little more to let him show her what he’s clearly capable of. Thanks so much for reviewing lajack1!

CG

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 06:29 pm

Title: Chapter 21

I'm liking this Dean. It's like he said, f' it, I'm going for what I want. That's more of who he is I think. Elle, on the other hand is...Elle. So, I have no expectations for her. I will just see where it goes.



Author's Response:

I think your Dean analysis is spot on. Elle is as you say…just Elle lol. I’m glad you’re still along for the ride and thanks for reviewing BellaChica.

CG

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 05:40 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Elle is not taking Dean seriously where Randall is concerned, but she will.  She should have sent him a pic goodnight--in bed with his shirt on :-).



Author's Response:

No she's not taking him serious. But let’s hope she sees the light soon. And I definitely thought about adding that but figured they had enough one-on-one for the night lol.  As always, thanks so much for reviewing Penelope.

CG

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 05:26 pm

Title: Chapter 21

I am loving Dean! And I adore their relationship, it seems Elle can be herself with him.



Author's Response:

Well I’m glad you’re feeling Dean and their relationship. And I agree, Elle does seem really comfortable around him. Thanks for reviewing keluboo!

CG

Reviewer: keluboo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 03:57 pm

Title: Chapter 20

New Reader 

 

I just want to say though I ADORE your writing style and this story in general, I really truly appriecate how much you update this story. Gone are the days when authors write as prolific as you do and the fact that you write SO MUCH and still manage to make them be amazing adds is so awesome. 

Now onto this child, 

I like Elle I really do but i think she's the biggest tease ever. I don't see her logic in her teasing him like that then hanging up , then when he comes over , you talking about waiting. Which I respect but its the way she went about it that got underneath my skin. 

I don't know why i feel like Elle not telling Dean about Randall is going to come back to be a huge issue but I guess time will tell. Thank you for another splendid add! BTW who is the person that plays Dean? He's quite gorgggg 



Author's Response:

Adoration? Prolific?

Lemme first thank you for your kind words hon!

Everybody’s saying she’s a tease. I just think she’s a bit uptight and afraid to go out on a limb. Her fear is what’s keeping them at this pace. Now this Randall situation…we’ll get to that shortly. Trust. And that’s Aaron Taylor-Johnson. Ain’t he fine? Other than that, welcome to the function Frenchie2!

CG

Reviewer: Frenchie2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 04:09 pm

Title: Chapter 20

You have phone sex with a man and then want to take things slow... I'm with Tracie "child BOO". At least Dean is being realistic with his. He knows what he wants and ain't trying to hear anything else. Love it!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 20

You have phone sex with a man and then want to take things slow... I'm with Tracie "child BOO". At least Dean is being realistic with his. He knows what he wants and ain't trying to hear anything else. Love it!

Author's Response:

So glad someone used the “Child Boo” phrase in the reviews. I live for quotes in reviews. And yeah Dean is coming forreal. Now if only Elle would do the same. Thanks for reviewing shellyme.

CG

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2015 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 20

Can't wait for Dean's sexy self to lock Elle down



Author's Response:

*Giggles* Girl me too. Thanks for reviewing alee92!

CG

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 08:22 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Ha! She better listen to Tracie. Men do that mess for real!! And Dean has already considered himself waiting for Elle long enough.



Author's Response:

Tracie was only speaking from experience, but I’ve definitely heard of men doing the same things in real life. Elle better watch herself lol. Thanks for reviewing flikchick!

CG

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I'm glad that Dean and Elle didn't have sex and that they are taking it slow. They still need to get to know each other a bit more. And while I think its a good think that they are taking it slow, I'm not sure if Elle is doing this for the right reasons. I still have the impression that she is still not sure about what she honestly wants out of this. I honestly don't understand why she is so scared and insecure about this. I get that she was used and hurt in the past, put at this point, she can't continue to use that as an excuse anymore. She seriously can't think that Dean is only stringing her along for sex. The guy has put up with her and her stupid ways for this long. Its not worth it. If its sex that he wanted he wouldn't have continued playing this cat and mouse game with her. He would have left her ass already. He can get sex anywhere and from woman who are a lot more sexy and hotter than Elle. 

She should be happy that Dean is supportive, patient, and understands her reason of wanting to wait, because any other male would have left her and her mixed signals. Dean is obviously a gentleman and would never forced her to do anything that she is not comfortable with. But some may find her playing hard to get, annoying and that she is playing with their emotion. I know that she won't change by night though. I'm glad that she is at least trying, and that Dean is a lot more communicative. Because he too was just too laid back and never said what he actually wanted to say or was thinking.

I also hope that Elle won't mess this up because of what Tracie said. I don't think that Dean is trying to tie her up or has some control issues. But I do think that for now in their relationship that Dean has to take some kind of control, otherwise nothing will come out of it. If he wasn't the one to take the first step, who knows how long it would have took Elle to take it, or if she would have took it all. And like she said so herself, she did wanted to see Dean, but she was going to see him on her own accord. How long would that have take? Weeks? Months? Elle is kind of slow and I'm sorry to say this, but also a little dumb, when it comes to her private life. If with this attempt things doesn't work out and that she continues with her doubts and what not, that Dean should walk away from her for good. 




Author's Response:

You made some interesting points. Dean is definitely extremely patient and Elle is a bit ditzy when it comes to her personal life. I think Dean’s initiative is much less of a control issue and more a means of keeping things a float. Elle’s timing can be overly lax and snail’s pace, so him taking the reins is helping them progress. But hopefully with this time they truly gain a better understanding of one another and take the next step to something realer. Thanks a bunch for reviewing Alexandra!

CG

Reviewer: Alexandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 06:25 pm



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