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Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I love a Good North Carolina based story. :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 05:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This story is so strange to me because of the point of view but I really love it and the pace your going I willing to go along for the ride because you've got me hooked now.

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Date: November 30 2014 05:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Rarely do I see a story about a relationship from the husband's POV. This is great writing,you've set it up for a few scenarios. I'm excited to see which direction you choose.

 Reviewer: mya1967 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 02:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I just feel like a lot of people are so quick to shout the word "divorce". Every relationship is different and loving someone even though they have repeatedly hurt you doesn't necessarily mean you're a fool. People evolve in relationships and sometimes, especially when a couple married young and for so long things can turn stale and it might seem that they don't connect and their might be some serious problems but it doesn't mean that it means they should go their separate ways. It's just really part of the process. 

I personally see Jamica as someone who sort of enlightens Ken AND Mildred in a way.

 

 



Author's Response:

A lot of people are quick to scream divorce, and that was one reason why I had originally planned to not have them get a divorce. However, I wanted to introduce Jamica into his life in the cleanest way possible, and where he feel like he needed somebody to journey along with him. I did not want the wife to be dirty and him be dirty as well. The only way he would have grown, in my mind, is if his wife wasnt there suffocating him, and hindering him from blossoming as a person. And you are correct, maybe, in your statement about Jamica enlightening the both of them! I have plans. Muahahaha. :}

 Reviewer: anomy Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like your story so far. Do you have someone in mind for the main characters? 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I have no idea who I have in store for the characters, but I do have a general look that I am going for. If you do, just shoot me a review of who you think may fit and I will give it a go!

 Reviewer: lovelydreamer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 11:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Supreb writing and strong character driven emotions.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 07:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Damn, I hate Mildred! ! Why is still married to her? He should hire a PI so when he divorces the ho, he won't have to her alimony.



Author's Response:

You always seem to be one of the first to respond to my stories! Haha. :} I like your input. You were going in the right direction with the divorce, but there may or may not be some bumps in the road. I havent decided that. He will get his happiness. That much I have planned!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 01:37 pm


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