What Mr. Ken's wife is doing to him is tantamount to emotional abuse. It's a shame he feels like he has to swallow that mess in an effort to keep up appearances.
I like where you are going with this story. So far it's emotional without the usual overwrought melodrama that you sometimes find in stories on sites like this.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
[Report This]Date: March 14 2015 07:14 am
Mr. Ken needs to file for divorce ASAP. He needs to stop being a Pussy! His wife is a first class bitch. Lets see how Jamica and he works out. Let him have some fun for a change. Why should his wife have all the fun. He deserves something new and fresh in his life. He is so sad. Jamica should put a pep in his step! lol
Author's Response:
You are right. He should have some fun, but I want his fun to be the right way, and for him to live life without holding on to the hurt that his wife has caused him. We will see where this all goes!
Reviewer: madison Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 08:50 pm
The problem with Mr,. Ken and his wife. They marry to young and they needed to explored their youth. Mr. Ken is so caught up with how his marriage used to be. He need to divorce his wife, and learn how to live again. His wife has already distance herself from the marriage and children. Amazing writing.
Author's Response:
You hit the head on the nail and that is all I am going to say! Thank you for your review. ;} I want to take him on a journey of living again but it will not only be a journey of him alone.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 07:13 pm
I really like this story update please
Author's Response:
Thank you for your post! And no worries! Hopefully I will bust out a couple of chapters in the next two days because I have plans for these two.
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 06:31 pm
That mad me soo sad!!! I mean this man even though he had nothing he continuously gave his wife things that they didn't need but wanted more if she didn't spend money like she did he'd be rich and she'd be cool I guess. She put a facade on hi and its crazy! Hopefully everything goes ok with him being alone and him finally finding true love he thought he had.
Author's Response:
Hopefully, if I write the story right you will continue to cry! Haha. And he will get his happiness, I promise you that. :}
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 04:58 pm
Wow, I'm seriously liking it. I hope Mr.Ken gets back with his wife.
Author's Response:
Hey! Thank you for leaving a review! Tell me how you are liking things so far. I have plans for Mr. Ken, however MJ doesnt bring him happiness. And from there we will see whether she stays in his life or goes.
Reviewer: anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 04:33 pm
Oh Mr. Ken, my heart really goes out to him. I hope he is finally done w that chick, cause she is just running over him. I can't wait to see how this will turn out w him and the waitress.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 03:13 pm
This is the second book that has me in tears.
Author's Response:
I guess if I had you in tears I was doing something right! I wanted this story to be emotionally provoking and have my readers feel as if they were watching a Nicholas Spark's movie. Haha. But thank you for posts.
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 02:21 pm
This is really good. You're so into depth with this story and its amazing. Keep going, this is awesome :)
Author's Response:
I thank you very much for your post! I try to connect with the readers through pain, and I am never sure if I explain things right to provoke the reader's sympathy with my characters. So your post meant a lot to me. I wanted to take it a little bit furthter and make it a tad bit more realistic.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 02:19 pm
Mr. Ken is fool, divorce that cheating ho!! You deserve to be loved and Mildred is incapable of love. She shows that she doesn't even love her children, how do you forget yoir child's birthday? I really hate MJ!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2014 01:50 pm