Reviews For More Than Life
Title: Chapter 3

I love Mr. Ken's POV.  It's rare to read such an excellent story completely from a man's POV.  You have captured something special and put word's to his soul!   

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad Men finally got rid of his wife. What an ungrateful bee-otch!! I would like to know Jamica's POV, but not knowing what she's thinking puts us in Ken's shoes. So I'm torn!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

This is very refreshing. Loving Ken's POV, nice to hear a man's thoughts. Glad he is divorcing Mildred she was a leach. Hoping he and Jamica's friendship begins.



Author's Response:

Thank you! A lot of stories I read in general, especially romance books and novels, are from a woman's point of view. There are a lot of ladies on here I feel that try to add in a man's pov along with the females and I love it! :} I thought this would be refreshing for a change, to show not only women are hurt, but they are capable of hurting too. Lookout for Jamica. 

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 06:56 am

Title: Chapter 3

I wasn't expecting that at all! I can't wait for more. Please, post again soon 😄



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I am glad that I can give you the unexpected. You will hopefully get more. Stay tuned! :}

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 3

I like this story but I hope Jamica won't be his emotional Kleenex.



Author's Response:

Maybe she is his emotional kleenex. Haha. I am playing. I will not do that. I would like to think of her as being more like a white out. Take out the things you dont want and replace them with what you do. :} I dont know if thats any better though. Haha. But thank you for your review!

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 3

Well done, I would like to read Jamica point of view.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I am going to mainly focus on Ken's point of view maybe until the end, or Jamica's point of view is vital. The reason I have not written from her pov is because I have not comprehended fully who she is. Plus, I feel only Ken can explain to you what she does for him. You will get some of her though!

Reviewer: Baub Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 3

I like it from Ken's perspective. This was not what I thought it was going to be. It is a pleasant story. I am curious how this will end. You will find your way, take your time it will come. I am so glad Mildred got hers. Most ppl don't know a good thing until it is gone. Are you going to explore why Mildred began the affairs?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your post! I am glad it is not what you had expected. :} I have the ending all planned out in my head. Thank you for your kind words. It is difficult writing, especially when the simplest of words can mean so much but be portrayed differentely than you want them to. I will explore it, but only briefly. My main focus is on Kevin and his recovery, and through that we will learn of Mildred's reasons. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 3

Ken served MJ the divorce papers, that made me so happy.  She cussed Ken out calling him ungrateful,  has ass is the ungrateful one. Cheating on Ken the father of her children.  I am so flad that the ho gets not damn thing extra.  I had to read this last chapter twice because I loved rwading about MJ's downfall! Awesome!!

 



Author's Response:

Lol. Your posts always make me laugh, espeically since you had to rerad it twice. Honestly, I have a plot twist for all. Whoever becomes Team Mildred or Team Jamica. But the divorce I feel was needed. He needs a permanent break away from her. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:35 am



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