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Title: Chapter 4

I hate when he's reminiscing about thaT w**** he call a wife. beautiful as always keep writing and keep updating.

 Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 4

Very good story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Stunning summation of Mr. Ken feeling of how the courtship of his marriage started. He stated he has no feeling for Jamica, yet he makes a point to seek her attention. In small way his is like Mildred trying to find that something that will make life bearable until he realized it's okay to let go of what people expected of you. Mr. Ken did not trully realized what type of person he marry. He placed Mildred on a pedstal from the beginning and close his eyes. In a way he used Mildred to escape from his father demands. Jamica level of maturity and balance thinking is refreshing.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 02:44 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Mildred was slut bad when he met her,  Ken a ho does not make a good wife or mother. Ken learned the hard way and it took twenty years to sink in. His memories of MJ are just sad as she never deserved him.   I don't believe that she ever loved Ken she was just using him.  Jamaica seems to be very mature for age, but the age difference is a concern.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 01:14 pm
Title: Chapter 4

This is really interesting to me and I am really enjoying it. I like how there is a gradual build... But I cannot lie and say I want them together or see what happens to Mildred lol. 

 Reviewer: Daddyprincess Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:29 pm


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