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Title: Chapter 5

I am liking your story a lot and the characters and would like to see how they develop.  The age difference only makes the story very interesting.  Plz update soon.

 Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 07:27 am
Title: Chapter 5

Wow. Ok so I've been reading since the first chapter and I've got to say that this is amazing!! I love the pacing and the characters but also how you've written the story. It's like (don't know if this is true) you've been through a divorce etc and you're bringing it out on here. Anyway thanks for posting this and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ken & Jamica takes things slow 😜 10/10

 Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:27 am
Title: Chapter 5

What happens next?  Pls update.

 Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 08:00 am
Title: Chapter 5

I love this chapter :)

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 5

"No, I don't know you from Adam, but I help people. That's what I do, then they are out of my life."

It can be really draining to take on others' problems. There's something mysterious about Jamica.

I flucuate between being pissed at Ken for letting that skank get away with all that she has and being so hurt for him being so devastated by that skank. MJ has always been a selfish git, Ken just didn't want to see it. He may have lived for her, but at no time did he figure in her life. 20 years, a very long time to be deluded. I'm concerned about his dependence on Jamica. She can not be his saviour.

This is a really good story, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 05:37 am
Title: Chapter 5

Supreb!!!

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 05:02 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Mildred is crazy, showing up at the house drunk.  If Ken hated you it would be because you cheated on him repeatedly and didn't hide that you were cheating!  Looking forward to Ken finding himself and being truly happy. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 02:45 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Love this chapter. Glad he had the courage to close the door on his wife instead burying is feelings.  Seeking out comfort is natural response and he found that with Jamica. Hopefully he doesn't hurt her because it sounds as though she has a past as well.

 

 

 Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 01:28 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Great job

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Date: November 30 2014 08:27 am


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