What a great story, please don't take long with the updates. I love this couple and the story is beleiveable.
Reviewer: Black girl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 18 2015 07:43 pm
These two are like a force of nature when they get together! Wow! Your writing is intense!
i don't think this is where these two end... I have a hunch!,
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 06:21 pm
Very nice story. And the beginning certainly hooks the reader. It is a very emotionally charged story. I am such a romantic that I hope Aria and Justin can find their way back to each other, even though they are currently with other people. They may have been too young to marry, but their love was very real and deep. It doesn't seem like any other love or relationship can compare or even come close. So, looking forward to your next update. Hope it is soon.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2015 04:58 am
Excellent!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2015 11:33 am
I wouldn't have imagined a more powerful reunion. The fact that he was worried about her as well as hated her all this time, shows how deep he loves her. I especially love that it wasn't blatantly lust at first sight without having a real discussion. Yep, definitely love your characters. However, how can she have her wedding ring when the wedding never unfolded ?
Her mom seems to be the sweetest person and deserves to be more considerated. Tell me otherwise if I'm seeing too much into what she told Justin, but she said she didn't wanted to end up like her mother. What happened to her for her daughter to loathe her situation so much ? I completely understand the wanting more reason, but not the not ending up like my mom.
Anyway, excellent update, till next time...(soon, right ?...).
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Aria doesn't have the ring, she just has the box. She found it sitting in their room when she was running to the bus station. And I don't think she loathe's her mother but she just wanted more than what her mother amounted to be. Everyone has dreams, everyone wants to do big things but her mother was soon saddled with two children and just fell into the roll of mom, giving up on the life that she really wanted. Aria wanted bigger and better things before that happened to her.
And yes, hopefully another update is right around the corner :) Thanks again!
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2015 07:50 am
GOD MOST DEFINITELY GAVE YOU STYLE! how is it possible that i feel so emotional over this one chapter? as if you've led me through this long journey when it's barely begun? I honestly want to say how much i fucken love this chapter and this story! PLEASEEEE PLEASEEEE continue to update and give me more fuel for my already built love for both of your main characters! I love how aria is back home... i mean you can see the happiness in her sister and mum's face. It is so beautiful!
Aria is a beautiful person who has a beautiful soul. I feel so sad and upset for her... i mean yes she was the one to make the decision to leave and yes the 15 years of pure hell was indeed her punishment ... but seeing how hurt and distraught she still is? really did make me feel so sorry for her. will we ever get to see her drunk and letting loose? ;) i'd loveeeee to see his reaction lmao
for justin... my goodness he must've loved her something beyond human measures. He was never over her, and how he waited? fuck so many women would kill to have a man like that. who loved unconditionally. who cherished her like a queen. who waited her every move. who loved without restrictions or restraint. Obviously his anger and pent up resentment was right since she never once gave him that closure he needed and craved for 15 long years! he loved her so much that even though she left him broken, he still worried for her safety.
one thing i cant wait to see... is a territorial justin lmao he seems like a passionate lover. which is a HUGE YES! a passionate, territorial lover. i think now that she's back in town... it'll be difficult to not want her. I hope she stays... and kind of just tries not to pay him attention lmao NOT IN A BAD WAY but in a way that makes her able to avoid being hurt by seeing him with someone else you know?
i fucken love their obvious chemistry and connection... their love when they were younger was pure. very rare to find.
PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME HANGING FOR LONGGGG!! I LOVEEEEE THIS SO MUCH!!! SO FUCKEN AWESOME!
Author's Response:
This review almost made me cry, lol! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to respond, it truly does mean a lot!!! I'll try and update again very soon :)
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 11:12 pm
i cried a little while reading. Excellently written and very touching.
Author's Response:
Awww! Thank you :)
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 10:30 pm
Interesting.Bitterness and drama aboard.
I double-checked the name,lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review! :)
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: January 09 2015 10:03 pm
Is this the end, bc I think Justin can move on from her and be happy? Your story is so good it made me teary...hell, it made me cry :-).
Author's Response:
This isn't the end yet :) I have a few more parts to this in my head.. possibly another longer story featuring these two as well. Only time will tell... Thank you for the read!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 09:03 pm
So glad I read this! It's always refreshing when someone uses your hometown as their story setting. Even if it's the more rural part lol. I'm interested in where you'll go with these two characters. There's a lot of explaining and making up to do with these two---even for a friendship. I'm excited to see where this story goes and keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the read and review! Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2015 08:17 pm
Great start so far, looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I'm working on the next part as I type this :)
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2015 02:38 am
Wow, this story is definitely promising! You portrayed your characters in a marure way, I really appreciate that because it seems that the story won't take easy shortcuts for their painful reunion. I double checked for Justin's name though...lol. Thanx for sharing and I can't wait for more !!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! I tried to mention his name as late as possible, lol, thought it would add a little more suspense not knowing who she's in so much pain over.
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2014 12:55 am
Whoa! This is one tight, emotionally-charged beginning; very well done in giving us a past and present on this couple.
She made her choice, went about it wrong for a long time--15 yrs and couldn't drop a line, email, phone call to say sorry?
Oddly, I understand why she ran and I think she has more than paid for it--job she hates, boyfriend who means nothing, and an ex who has moved on. Please don't add homewrecker to her list, bc Aria is only surviving, not living
Justin has been with Harper for 4 yrs, there are emotions invested--unless they have an 'understanding'. Justin changed from being that sweet kid the day she ran out on him and after 15 yrs he is a man. Oh he is going to punish her and he owes her nothing; 15 years is a long time to hold out hope for anyone!
Wonder if Harper is staying with him in their old house? I can barely wait till your next update--Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Happy New Year to you as well! Thank you for the read and review! I can sympathize with Aria as well, getting married at 20 is pretty daunting. You've barely had time to figure out who you are and how to take care of yourself, let alone another person. In her mind, she had only one way out and she took it. But, if she hasn't moved on, how can we expect Justin move on? I mean, he was the one who got left at the altar. How can he be in a committed relationship with another woman with this hanging in the background?
I'm trying to play devil's advocate here, lol. Thank you again for the read and review :)
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2014 07:35 pm
Nice
Author's Response:
Thank you for the read and review!
Reviewer: Black girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 30 2014 05:57 pm