What kind of women did Pops become involved? No one noticed Ginger's stalkerish behavior hoverinf bu the window? Why was she hanging around? Intersting, very interesting!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there. One of the women from Pop's past will be introduced in an upcoming chapter. There is a reason for Ginger's stalkerish...err "alertness". Also, this is my first attempt to write something longer than a short story and I'm realizing that based on the way my brain functions, I need an outline quick fast and in a hurry. So, it might be a while before I post again but I will post. Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 02:00 pm
That felt like a teaser. Want more? What regrets? He has 2 daughters, can't wait to meet them.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and more is coming. I finally figured out that the number of pages typed in my word processor is much less when posted online. That darn 16 point font fooled me good! Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 01:21 pm
Nice start, but it's too short
Author's Response: I agree that it's too short. I'll work on the length. Thanks for the feedback. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 12:50 pm
Interesting start...looking forward to reading more.Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 07:08 pm
I like it. I'm intrigued. Please continue.Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 02:11 pm
sounds interestingReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 08:41 am