I really do feel bad for Saul its one thing to lose your family but then to have a crazy chick making things worse on top of everything has to be awful. People make some really bad mistakes but dang !

Lynne made the right move and she needs to go slow with the new guy--it has been 6 months but she needs to make sure this one is a keeper, not a rebounder.  I hope he ios younger than Saul and a couple of yrs younger than Lynne (men tend to age faster).

Alicia is so damn desperate--she reminds me of those women always putting their paws on something that don't belong to them.  His kids will never forget what he did--they may forgive Paul when they see their mom is happy, but they will never accept or respect Alicia.  

Alicia don't realize it, yet, but she has really done Lynne a favor:  he was going to cheat on Lynne, sooner or later.  

let me say again that I love this revision!

This is nice! I like stories where the couple is already together and we actually get to see how they handle the hurdles of relationships. Question, how exactly do the characters look? I haven't seen any descriptions of them in your story

You deleted the previous version.You didn't have any back up of your story??

Anyways. I did not like Saul in the first story and I don't like him in this one either. Like I mentioned already in previous comments of the first chapter. We can all have our weak moments. We all make mistakes. But if you make the same mistake twice or more than that, then that is not a mistake anymore. That is just not caring and not caring at all about the consequences.  This has been going for three weeks. He didn't fully regret it after the first time. Otherwise he wouldn't have done it a second time, that had turned in to a three weeks affair.

He is disgusting!!!! He may love Lynne, but he did not love her enough to stop. He was being selfish and was only thinking about his needs. We are humans, not animals. So we are perfectly able to control our self. So him saying that he had let his dick to the thinking is a complete bullsshit. He slept with Alicia because he wanted too. These type of man does not deserve a second chance. 

I hope Lynne will leave his ass. Saul will have to loose everything for him to actually realize how wrong he had done his wife and children. He is not the victim here. So Lynne shouldn't treat him as one, no matter how sorry he is for what he had done. Some people need to lose it all, for them to finally realize what they had.

Saul is about to be introduced to karma and it would be deserved. Ifyou knew she had slept with other people at the job would fall into the abyss that was her vagina?  From here on out Saul will be known ad Stupid Saul,  SS for short.