Reviews For Breathe (revised)
Title: Where Do We Go From Here?

Saul best make sure that bitch is in check. And she may be bad, but there's always someone badder. She don't know Lynne. She best be careful if she tries to step to her. That little mousy school teacher might just dust the floor with her crazy ass. Lynne's a lady, but I suspicion that if pushed, she will kick a mudhole in that ass.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 07:32 am

Title: Where Do We Go From Here?

Where do we go from here?

Well, Saul needs a cheap furnished apartment.  I feel that he is still not getting the damage he has done.  

Lynne needs to go to a lawyer and a doctor, perferably the doctor first.  

Alicia needs a good beat down, but she won't test Lynne again.  I hope Cam, who seems to have a good head on her shoulders, tell Alicia she can't make someone love her.  

I don't know if Saul is worth it:  one night stand I could see counseling and a try, but what he did and in his office, too...Lynne should file for a separation and take her time on making a decision.  She owes Saul nothing.

I am loving this revision! 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 05:05 pm

Title: Where Do We Go From Here?

Alicia is cray cray, Saul you made a big mistake. Lynne kick that bitches ass! Can't wait for momma and auntie to come to town!! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 04:24 pm



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