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Title: Blood and Tears

That crazy woman set that up, I just know it!

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 01:52 am
Title: Blood and Tears

I want a Malcolm. Taking Applications. lol j/k

In a relationship I can work through anything but cheating. That's a no-no, especially with all these diseases floating around. eww, my skin crawls with the thought of it.



Author's Response:

He really is a sweetheart.

 Reviewer: jlly16 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 10:48 pm
Title: Blood and Tears

So, what you wanna bet that Herpes chick of Saul's had something to do with this. There goes any sympathy I might've dug up for the cheater. Saul, this is all on you.

And that trick is so delusional, she might just let Saul know that she did it for them to be together. Which is stoopid, 'cause FELICIA, Lynne already DIVORCED his ass and if he wanted to be with you, he WOULD. What is your occupation again, you braintrust?

Well now, Malcolm seems to have real feelings for Lynne. I like it. The kids have met him and he's a hero for saving their Mom. Should be interesting what their reactions will be when they realize that Malcolm really likes Lynne.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 11:21 am
Title: Blood and Tears

i smell a BIG STINKIN RAT named Alicia...!  i'm sure she had something to do with this...!!

 

thank God for Malcolm! Another great update - thank you!

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 08:11 am
Title: Blood and Tears

Malcolm saved Lynne and the kids will readily accept him in their mom's life.  I hope Saul don't try to weasel his way back in.

 I wish Angela and Malcolm would pay a visit to the assailant--he has to be handcuffed somewhere in that hospital.   

Poor Lynne...can Malcolm help nurse her back to health?

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 05:19 am
Title: Blood and Tears

Wow, I didn't see that coming...good chspter

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 04:17 am
Title: Blood and Tears

betcha that bish ass Alicia had something to do with this.  Even more reason why Saul will feel guilty as hell for bringing this cray cray chick into Lynne and his kids life.  If he would have kept his little penis in his pants versus trying to get it inside a chick, this would not be happening but ya know what, God always has a plan and this happened for a reason.

 

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 03:17 am
Title: Blood and Tears

Aliho hired that man to kill Lynne and I hope he sqeals!  Aliho needs a beat down of epic proportions. C-I-L-L Aliho!!!! Team Malcolm!!!  Damn that SAS (Sorry Ass Saul) beat his ass too!.  



Author's Response:

:-)

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 03:06 am
Title: Blood and Tears

That Malcolm is a keeper! I'm certain that Saul's bitch had something to do with Lynne almost dying. Saul does not deserve Lynn after getting involved with that crazy woman, of all the women he had to choose the craycray one? That says a lot about him.

 Reviewer: katt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 02:58 am
Title: Blood and Tears

That crazy bitch did this.  When is going to get her come upings? 



Author's Response:

Ding ding ding! She is going to be getting hers...soon.

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 02:54 am
Title: Blood and Tears

Wonderful



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 02:13 am


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