Finally!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2016 07:38 am
Well damn ...
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 07:56 pm
Damn!!!! That's all I have. Don't hold back.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 04:04 pm
Uh uhhmm! Sleepovers won't ever be the same again! 😈
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 03:02 pm
This was GREAT! Now they are both sprunged.
Time for the guilt, the protests, and then the give ins. I loved the interaction between these two.
I hope she was on birth control.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 07:01 am
Oh my gosh that was hot I ain't gonna lie...he didn't wear a condom. Well damn.
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 06:07 am
Shyla was dumb as child and hasn't gotten any smarter as an adult. Matt put it on her and she won't know how to act, it was that damn good!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 03:15 am
Mucho caliente!!!
Reviewer: Iliketoread Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 03:11 am
Damn is right!
Great chapter. I can't wait to read what's next. Will she actually become his baby mama? Will they be able to maintain a friends with benefits relationship? Who will catch feelings first?
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 02:41 am
DEAD.
I swear. Those two. Oh Shyla, you better hope yo ass don't get preggers. Sooo glad that I work from home, 'cause folks would've thought I'd lost my mind laughing so loud. whew.
Chica, you sure did deliver. Now watch the fallout.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 02:13 am
Your righting has me dyin laughing but I can't belive you stoped there!
Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 12:43 am
I would be happy to edit for you. Just let me know.
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 12:30 am
That Shyla is cray! Does a white Puerto Rican count...I hollered! Too funny...love it!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: February 08 2016 10:47 pm
No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no you did not just stop right there....dang it!
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2016 03:52 pm
Hahahaha...loove! More please!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2016 07:15 am
Dang! Really you're going to end it like that?!
I don't know if I'm ready for them to sleep together. Doing it like this will complicate matters and take longer for them to realize they're in love. They will use this as an excuse to remain and maintain distance.
I'm really enjoying this story; however, you need an editor. Too many times I have to reread or pause to think about what you meant. I appreciate you want to get the story to us. My suggestion is if you don't have an editor, take a pause after writing, do something else, come back to it and read it. That way you're reading what you wrote and not what you expect to be there.
Author's Response:
I desperately need an editor! I keep rereading but it's so time consuming that it delays everything so I gave up on the final pages. If you my friend know anyone I'd happily get the help.
Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: January 30 2016 11:04 am
This was fantastic.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: January 30 2016 02:33 am
Ok...Lauren. interesting, not what I expected. I like that. I'm definitely liking this story. I don't think Matt will be devastated over her cheating. Disappointed, yes. He just doesn't seem that into her. I think Scott's in love with her.
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2016 11:21 pm
Author's Response:
I'm on it!
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2016 06:03 pm
Awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next one. Shyla and Matt are hilarious
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 29 2016 08:58 am
Dag, what a cliff hanger!!! 😁😄😝
Author's Response:
😏
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2016 06:23 pm
Shyla and Matt are so funny! I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 28 2016 05:14 pm
Please update soon!!
Author's Response:
I'll try!
Reviewer: LovenFaith Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2016 02:29 pm
Thanks for "wretched " and not "ratchet"
Author's Response:
Ha! You're welcome.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: January 28 2016 02:02 pm