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Title: Chapter 2

So is Andrew her brother? I don't blame her for her reasoning but don't drag him along. He wants more that you can offer because of your career. The sooner you ended things the better. You can try to control your emotions all you want but it's going to hurt both of you if you don't end it soon. Something could still happen to him because you have been messing with him for over 2 years. 

Update soon!! 



Author's Response:

Hi KeiKei,

Thats all true, but did he ever complain through out the chapter, and he has also stayed with her for 2 years without any progress. He knows what their relationship is and how much she is willing to give he just wants more because he cares for her. He knows she cares for him even if she is hiding it behind a her tough exterior.

Will they progress in their relationship or will he get tired of her on and off attitude?

Stay tuned to find out!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 02:54 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great update!

Author's Response:

Hi baha_malo,

Thanks for the review! Stay tuned there is more to come!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 2

Serena is really afraid of of emotions, partly because of job but mainly because of her upbringing.  Jocab deserves so much more!  Has she ever tried to search for parents? As a CIA operative she access to channels that everyday schmoe wouldn't. More please!



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

She is a bit emotionally numb but like you said with her occupation and past life experiences she has to have some type of caution to life. Yes she has tried looking for her parents, I won't say more because I don't want to spoil anything.

Stay tuned to find out!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 10:47 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Is she crazy? Trying to leave that fine man, bitch please. She need to let that man into her life fully. Is he the man that was watching her, the man with the dog.



Author's Response:

Hi jacqua43,

Lol she isn't crazy just cautious and realistic to the dangers of her life and job, she knows he is too fine and good to her to leave that's one of the reasone she has hung on to him for so long. As for the quesion of if the man with the dog is Jacob or not you'll have to stay tuned for the next chapters to find out!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 05:16 pm


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