Reviews For Serenity's Flame
Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad that she is going to attempt to end things with ole boy before something bad happens to him. I don't know how I would have reacted to learning that the people who sold her like a sex slave are involved in the case that she is working on. I would have pulled out. I don't think I would be able to think straight. Not completely. That is horrible!!! I feel bad for what her and her brother had to endure while in foster care. I'm glad they were able to survive and she not get raped. Dang, he hurt them that bad that his leg had to get amputated. Wow! I wonder if he killed the mother after he found out she called the police. Took her long enough, it should have never gotten to that point. I understand that you're scared too but he could have killed those kids because you were too afraid of him hitting you. But I am glad that she found some courage that night. 

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 3

This is a beautifully written chapter. You watched your pronouns and sentence construction which made this an easier read. Bravo! 

Wonderful chapter...the relationship between Serenity and her brother is so warm and sincere. It has such connection and relatablity. It was a pleasure to read. I want to see how Serenity is going to cut off her relationship and Irish, is so cool. Very good characters that come to life. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep on wrrting. 


Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow, that was powerful.  So was the Candy land before after being in foster care?   I want to say after since the foster father tried to rape her.  The was a sex offender and I he's dead!  My spidey sense is tingling and I am not trusting the powers that be. Keep your opens Serenity! !



Author's Response:

Hi pmgayles, 

Candyland was actually before she her foster father, she was at candy land until she was 14. Hmm the foster father dead? We shall see! Keep reading for more spine tingling mystery with Serenity! 

I have been give the opportunity to make Serenity’s Flame into a book so I will not be posting any more chapters. But you can check out my website to make a donation to my publication fund or receive updates on the publication process so that you can purchase a copy of Serenity’s Flame on ebook or paperback when it's available! 

http://www.gofundme.com/vc4673k2a

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2015 03:02 pm



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.