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Title: Chapter 5

I love the family vibe of this serie

 Reviewer: Bel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 06:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Maybe I missed it but does Aries now who her father is, and could be Ambrosia's dad? That would be so great, because he would love her a fist site, that would be one hell of a pay back. LOL, LOL

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 03:58 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I'm so happy Cameron found out the truth. I'm happy Ambrosia is getting her "just due". I'm happy papa Marino is eating crow. I'm happy Aries and Jaylen have a stable place to lay their heads, and hopefully a real family. I'm thankful evil didn't prevail.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 03:49 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I would  love to Aries  and Cameron  develop feelings for  each other.  Aries  and Jaylen deserve  to be loved  and protected. It still bothers me that the Marino's never had Hosia investigated.  Why dud they take her  word as gospel?  Gregory's wife should divorce him snd takes him fir everything that he had. Hosia has nothing  to fall back on as her dumb ass dropped out college before getting her degree Karma-riffiic!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 02:19 pm
Title: Chapter 5

nice story, looking forward to the next update

 Reviewer: Caligirl65 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 01:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1

First: How soon before the next chapter

 Second:  OMG,  Can't wait until the next chapter.  I'm already loving the brothers!!!!,.

and what is he going do that God Father LOL, LOL

 

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 12:42 pm
Title: Chapter 5

aaaw man

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 11:01 am
Title: Chapter 5

soooo goood - thanks for the quick updates!

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 08:29 am
Title: Chapter 5

I'm addicted to this story now, can't wait for more chapters.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 07:48 am
Title: Chapter 5

Thank goodness you didn't drag out Ambrosia cheating on Cam.  I am glad Aries showed the she is not all that into them, and would choose a shelter for her and her kid than to live with people disrespecting her.  

What is the Marino men reaction to Aries?  

I think she should keep her guard up around all of them.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 03:45 am
Title: Chapter 5

OOOOOOHHHHHH!!!! SOMEBODY GONNA GET HURT! (who called the po-po?) Well she got caught quicker than a few seconds...if her phone didn't stay she would've never got caught......KARMA I TELL YOU IS A BIG FAT MEAN MOFO Until you see it coming for someone else...(Raven symone nice and evil voice....)

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 03:29 am
Title: Chapter 5

So good!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 01:35 am
Title: Chapter 5

oh my freaking gosh, this story is so good. You write really well, and have a very well-thought plot and the characters are indents. Excited for the next update!

 Reviewer: Anony Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far, but I hope Aries and Cameron don't end up in a relationship on the premise of 'oh, I really desired Aries all along, but Ambrosia...(not even gonna lie though, I would still keep reading if it did pan out that way). I like Aries and Christian together, or perhaps her with a different brother. Maybe there is hope for my wish...I mean Aries hasn't expressed any dormant romantic feelings for Cameron. Good story so far though. Both women are beauties too so catcalls and whistles to them (just awful, I know).

 Reviewer: liking it so far Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 5

Ok, now we are about to get down to some serious business!! Yes!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 12:14 am
Title: Chapter 5

I cannot wait to see what happens next.

 Reviewer: Lifechanges2014 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 5

Fantastic update....I enjoy the slight complexity of the characters.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:57 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Hahaha ha hahaha ha HA. As Chris Rock says. "You should never hit a person. That wrong. But you should be able to shake the shit out of them." So someone shake the shit out of Posion. Cuz that trick is NOT Ambrosia. 

 Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:49 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Yes kick her Ass out ASAP lol

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Oh hell...Cameron does not need to go to jail over Ambrosia's trifling behind.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 5

great update

 Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Damn, you didn't write about the initial confrontation between Cameron and Hosia.  The *itch is crying now besause her skwnky butt got caught. Her and her momma don't deserve sugady!  Christain met his nrephew and Antonio finally knows the truth about Hosia. Why was the dumb ho screaming?  Such a wonderful chapter!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:19 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Please make these chapters longer.  Ambrosia is a horrible person.  I can't wait for Cameron's father to eat his words.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Cameron should get tested because Hosia has a just ho.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 12:53 pm
Title: Chapter 4

What's with the cliffhanger though😒? I'm so hooked on this story! I can't wait for for the next chapter... like literally. Please update soon! 

 Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 05:39 am


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