Title: Chapter 4

Ambrosia is a slick snake can't wait til her true colors are revealed especially who she's calling & telling she loves them because I know it's not Caneron although she wants his baby. Funny how she told his father all those lies when they were broken up.wonder does he know this. Hope his brother gets to talk to her & see his nephew first.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update! I'm interested in seeing how Antonio and Christian are going to get DNA from Jaylen to peform a test. I don't think Aries would welcome them with open arms after the tirse phone call they had. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 05:07 am

Title: Chapter 4

Hosia is cheating Cameron, was the baby that she lost even his? Why doesn't Can know that Hosia is a slut monkey?  Why doesn' t the Marino know just how unworthy Hosia is?  Why haven't they had Hosia investigated? Her world is about to come crumbling down and they should kill by crossing her in vat of holy water!  Evil explodes in holy water.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 4

What's this hoes game? she's hiding another man in the wings. This chick is broke as hell, trying to have a kid from a rich man so she can be " In her mind set for life". I like Christian already, when they see the interaction between Aries and Jaylen, they will know that this woman loves this child with everything in her. Then hopefully papa marino will be aware of the dog that's carrying the bone, Ambrosia.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 03:55 am

Title: Chapter 4

Wow!! what a tangled web Ambrosia seemed to have weaved! Hope the truth is revealed and she is exposed for the sneaky person that she is. Hope all works out for Aries! Loved the update!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 4

Ooooohhhh...Ambrosia!!! You about to be in trouuuubblllle! Many these updates are killing me because I want the truth to come out! Patience...patience is a virtue. I cannot WAIT until the first set of Marino's meet Aries and Jaylen. I hope Aries gives Papa Marino what for! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 4

Ok, I love little Jaylen and she's doing a beautiful job with him.

Shady Ambrosia.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

I like that you gave us a taste but hope their is more.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 4

I can't wait for the next chapter, because cameron's father will be feeling dumb about aries being promiscuous when he find out jaylen is his grandbaby. Ambrosia is something and i can't wait for her turn with karma. That's why she can't have kids. I can't wait for cameron's reaction to having a son. :-) 

Reviewer: precious Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 02:50 am

Title: Chapter 4

I like it please update soon

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 4

Great story, great update! Well, I hope Aries stays strong through everything and the truth is found out and QUICK about Ambrosia!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

Lovely story......the truth will set you free

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This is good! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I hate Ambosia already.

Reviewer: Alexandria Glass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 05:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Love the story and the last chapter makes what's to happen even more interesting. Update soon

Reviewer: spyan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 02:46 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I think chapter 3 is really progressed the story. I cannot wait until the famiy knows that she speaks the truth. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 02:32 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Why dies he feel sorry for her if  she gave birth do Cam's son? She did and she needs help.  I can't  wait  for Ambrosia's world to come crumbling  down. Hosia was downright evil  to Aries, i want her  miserable and alone for an eternity. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 11:35 am

Title: Chapter 3

Enjoying this story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 10:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

That's great, I want more. You're doing a good job, keep going.

Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 10:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

You have not disclosed cameron's age, but given that he is a well established lawyer with his own firm and that he must have attended law school I would say he has to be at least 28 if not more.....am I Right?   

 

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 09:32 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wonderful start! I am intrigued already.

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 08:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

so so so good! thanks for the quick update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 07:33 am

Title: Chapter 3

When do we get more chapters? This is really good.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 3

Why the hostility? They have no idea what happened, so why assume whatever it is, its her fault? I've always said in these situations, forget all the threats and the blah blah blah. Just get the DNA test. That solves at least that part of the puzzle. Then find out the rest. If she were a true gold-digger they would have known about this three years ago.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 04:53 am

Title: Chapter 3

Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

Like what was said "What's done in the dark. Comes to light." What's gonna happen when all kinds of skeletons come out?

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 03:12 am



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