Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 18 2015 04:29 am
I'm slightly confused. They're both going on the research trip with the same Dr. Benton? Does he have a vet degree and a medical degree or just two Ph.D.s? If you're getting ready for publishing, do you have an editor to catch "pampass" vs "pompous" and other grammatical/punctuation markers. It's a good concept.
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 16 2015 02:38 pm
I just read the full synopsis, a shifter story, so Jake ain't the one. Will Jake meet someone special? How about Nessa? But this Alex's story so those two will have to take a backseat. Awesome sauce!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2015 12:49 pm
More please?! I love Alex and Nessa are two girls after my own heart. Sammy to really think Nessa will give you second chance to break her heart? Really dude, you cheated on her with her roommate! Why would Nessa ever trust your trifling ass again? Mikah step on in their Nessa deserves to have tried love. What about Alex and Jake, is he attracted to her? Is Alex attracted to Jake? Will you post cast pictures?
Amazing beginning to what I am sure will be a awesome story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2015 12:44 pm
ow, great start... I'm loving this brave and strong woman. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Please post soon :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2015 08:41 am