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Title: REWRITE COMING SOON

Awesome!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 10:52 pm
Title: JANUARY 23RD 1990

Can someone be so wicked!

I hope Weny And Walter get whats coming to them!

 Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 08:02 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

I love your story . Excited to read more !!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Kkpeter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 03:00 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Pleeeeeease Update this story! It was so good

 Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 03:40 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

I hope you comeback to update this story. Wendy need to be dealt soon and so does her husband. I wondered do Wendy other friends keep in touch with her besides Charlotte. It would be great to see how Nat and Eden relationship evolves.

 

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2016 02:00 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

 

 

 

    UPDATES, UPDATES PLEASE! !!

 

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 12:23 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Come back to this story, please!

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Date: October 29 2015 12:05 pm
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

 

 

UPDATES, UPDATES, PLEASE!!!!!

 

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 07:05 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

Wendy is psycho she needs help. I wondering how many friends does Wendy have in that town besides Charlotte. I hope not everybody agrees with Wendy. Because the way she treats Nathanel is beyond crazy true Marty drown but it was not Nathaniel fault it was an accident. It time for Wendy and her husband to get their just desserts especially her husband.

 

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 05:02 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

Gah. Wendy - forced sterilization. That would prevent the abuse of any future children. She's a menace. And quite distasteful.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2015 08:42 am
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

I am glad you are back...Fantastic update

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Date: August 31 2015 10:26 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

Wow! this woman don't have any parenting skill, trying to potty train a 1 year old ( good luck with that). Try potty training 3 babies at once. We didn't start potty training until our babies turn 2 1/2 years old, we knew they were ready when they start tearing off their diaper and running around the house butt naked. It was much easier potty training our daughter then our sons, never potty train them in the same bathroom all at once, it's play time for them when one got up all three got up and ran in 3 different directions. Oh hell! I just realize we would have to do this again in a couple more years. I don't think Wendy really wants to be a mother she's to selfish and she's to focus on other people lives, what! she wants to be Charlotte. I'm loving the way Eden and Nathaniel interact with each other and baby Solomon is too cute. Thanks for the update MP

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 08:37 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

Great update!!! More.....

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 05:18 pm
Title: MARCH 12TH 1990

Wendy should not procreate!!  That is abusive to her child, I wonder why?  Was she abused? It still doesn't make me sympathize because she is so damn evil.  I hope that Eden get'some that job.  Wendy and new husband need to loose custody of Emily. What in the world did Nathaniel see in Windex?

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Date: August 31 2015 03:37 pm
Title: MARCH 6TH 1990

Awww, I love that Baby Sol. He is going to bring them all together as one loving family. I'm glad that Eden finally admitted how Sol was conceived and that Nathan was so encouraging towards her. I love how their bond is being cemented by doing little things together, while their attraction acknowledged as well. Great update!

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 01:40 pm
Title: MARCH 6TH 1990

Loved the update! Glad Eden and Nathaniel bonding. Hope Wendy and Walter are exposed for any dirty plans they try to put in place.

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Date: August 11 2015 03:59 am
Title: MARCH 6TH 1990

I love the name "King Solomon" what a wonderful king he was in the bible. The parable about the 2 mother's was "priceless".We also purchase our babies paint from home depot, I watched my vision on the twin's nursey come to fruition. I chose topaz, copper and a hint of orange for the color scheme. We purchase 2 cherry wood sleigh crib's, my husband hung 2 Native American teepee's over their crib's, It's like they would be living in teepee's It's beautiful. I chose topaz because they will be born in november If the lord permits, and that is one of that month birthstones. As for Eden and Nathaniel my hope is for Eden to allow Nathaniel to love her the way she needs and deserve to be loved. But If she's not ready then she's not ready. I know when the time Is right Nathaniel will love Eden and Solomon with all he has In him. What a wonderful father he was, Is and will be, because to me he Is already Solomon's FATHER. I'm glad your computer Is fixed and that you are back Inspiring us. Great update!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 05:03 pm
Title: MARCH 6TH 1990

Such a sweet chapter. Eden & Nate we're made for each other😍

 Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 06:34 am
Title: MARCH 6TH 1990

Wonderful update

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Date: August 10 2015 04:15 am
Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

This update warmed my Soul.

I hope that Nat and Eden get closer and become a couple. Sol "King" deserves a loving home and parents.

The 3 demons are planning pain for them but I hope that their plans are destroyed before anyone gets hurt. For some reason, I feel like Wendy had something to do with Marty's death. She really didn't want him because in her mind he was imperfect. She might have wanted to be free. She probably was cheating on Nat with dufus for a long time. 

Great update. Love this budding couple. Can't wait for the love!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 03:50 am
Title: MARCH 6TH 1990

I love the nickname, King. Solomon is one loved little boy!    I want Eden, Nathaniel and Leonard to be ready for Wendy and  her husband.  Please keep Solomon safe!!!

 

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Date: August 10 2015 02:46 am
Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Those 3 vile creatures are putting out so much bad juju. And that Charlotte on her way to Church and channeling the devil without any self-awareness of the irony.

I so love Sol and Nate time. I'm fearful of what the 3 will come up with to get rid of Eden.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 10:28 am
Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Why a new crib?

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 06:36 am
Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

 

Really good story,can't wait for the next chapter..

 

 

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2015 12:06 am
Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Where have I BEEN???!!!

This story is awesome. I read it all in one setting. I can't wait for their Nathaniel and Eden to spend some time alone, they both deserve some happiness. I know the drama isn't over with his ex and her crazy husband still on the stroll..... but I can't wait for them to become even closer. 

Baby Sol is too cute.

Update Soon!!!

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 06:59 pm


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