BRAVO...I was crying with laughter reading this installment...your flair for comedy is perfection...then to switch directly into drama...your creative genius really comes to complete and full life here...I so applaud and am in awe of you...I just can't give you enough praise...I knew Brandon was going to surprise her although you did surprise me with Mannie being her guest from the cliffhanger...I so love how you segwayed Brandon's surprise visit into the surprise that was Mannie...and Brandon disguising himself as the delivery guy was pure genius...I can't wait to read of them fulfilling their signed agreement...another LOL moment was when Diya confessed her iced-coochie to Brandon...that's real love...and so funny...only a cray, cray woman would think to write such stuff...love your kind of cray…
That sneaky Brandon is so perfect...I am so fangirling over you, Ms Jax...I loved Diya's response to Brandon when William was approaching...she knew that if she tried to hide him, she would do severe damage to their relationship, so asking him for a kiss that her father would clearly see, showed Brandon that Diya truly loves him and is not ashamed of him...and his response to just kiss her hand shows that he truly loves her and didn't want meeting her father as Diya's boyfriend the first time to start off a firestorm for her...I so love this couple...you are remarkable to create characters that feel so real to me...I knew William would find out...but Diya standing up for herself, I loved...And Brandon's note "as long as you come back to me" had me swooning...just beyond brilliant...Ok as for updating...to be honest, I really, really, really look forward to updates and tend to reread chapters during the wait...I find all sorts of goodies in doing so...I'm spoiled with getting updates, as you write because this story is brilliant and I am too excited to read more...that said, I will always read your work whenever you post...I support any approach you decide to take on finishing the story as long as you bless me with more of their journey...I am always so excited to read your updates...you made my week with two chapters...I so appreciate you sharing your gift with us...may you continue to be blessed...
Author's Response:
Thanks SO very much for the well wishes and this awesome review!!! As always, your insight is so on point. Diya's request for a kiss and Brandon's response said what both needed to hear: That she wasn't ashamed and he understood that and wouldn't force her into making introductions before she was truly ready. The note was the icing on the cake, and a reminder that, despite his teasing, Brandon understood Diya's need to leave,, and loved her. Understanding and love are two things they're both going to need going forward, as William won't take his new discovery lying down. More on that next chapter.
Thanks again for your input and your support, jahchannah. I can't express how deeply I appreciate both : )
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
[Report This]Date: June 17 2016 06:12 am
Oh crap!!! Shit's hit the fan!! Diya and Brandon both have to be strong and show their love for each other. This was a great chapter. Manny was cute, Brandon even cuter. I'm glad her daddy found out and it will be interesting!!! Side note...I like the chapter updates even if we wait awhile sometimes. I know you'll finish they stories, no doubt and we have to understand that you have a life outside of writing. I'm just happy to get to read your stories because you're so talented, as many people are on VC. So do what's best for you...I'll always read your stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input and support, Michmom2!!! I really appreciate both. And you're right. Brandon and Diya will need to be strong, because Daddy De la Roy DOES NOT approve and will react as only he can...
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2016 04:18 am
Dag, so the honeymoon really is over, and the ish is gonna start hitting the fan. I can tell by the way Daddy De La Roy has responded so far. I have to give Diya some credit though ... it seems she was trying to hold it down with being open about her relationship. I agreed with Diya in that, 'that' particular moment probably wasn't the best to introduce Brandon formally as her boyfriend to her dad. Especially with Mannie (her dads chosen) present. Also, given that she didn't get a chance to really plan for an introduction, then I would say she held it down pretty good. Sadly, you can tell she would love to share her new love with the world, but is afraid of how it may impact them. One thing is for sure is that they're in for a challenge ... one I 'really' hope they're up for.
Diya and that ice pack had me crying!!! (LOL) 😅
One question ... will Mal and Camilla ever meet 😾😼? Wonder what that encounter would be like?
As always ... Great update. Thanks for giving us two! 😊
Author's Response:
You're so very welcome : ) Diya is a mess. She did attempt to tell her father about Brandon, twice. But it wasn't the right time and neither Brandon nor her father really gave her the opportunity. You're absolutely right: Brandon is Diya's world. She would love to tell her family about him and have them love him as much as she does, but knows better and fears the impact their reaction will ultimately have on her and Brandon's relationship. And for good reason.
Yes, Mal and Milla will meet, God help them all...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review, Musicluva!!! As my peoples would say, 'preshate cha!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2016 02:12 am
To hell with what her father and family thinks about her being with Brandon. Diya you're a grown ass woman! Stop caring what they say about you! This is what frustrates me about her.
Author's Response:
Diya's doesn't care what her family thinks about Brandon beyond what it'll make them do. With the exception of not wanting her father to know she was sleeping with Brandon, literally and figuratively, she never has. She's kept their relationship a secret with the sole intent of protecting it. In the past, her father has successfully run-off multiple boyfriends he didn't approve of for his girls (see the chapter 8 convo between Diya and Zeria). He'll definitely try with Brandon, and Diya is terrified he'll succeed--fears that may prove well-founded. Thanks Janez91!
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2016 01:19 am
Words can not describe how amazingly talented you are. Another great chapter (as per usual) Ive been following you/been a fan since you first started posting work on here..... Speaking of past works (I could be mistaken and please correct me if I am) I recall reading a story you posted about a woman who was stuck between two men (one had constant bad migranes) and the other was named something like Ogden? I LOVED THAT STORY.. would you ever please rethink of posting it? Pretty please....
Author's Response:
Thanks SO much, rougemadame, for your wonderful compliments and your continued support! Both are much appreciated : ) You're not mistaken. The story was called "Broken Promises." It's high on the list of stories to be revised and reposted. As soon as life slows down a bit, I'm on it.
Reviewer: rougemadame Signed [Report This]Date: June 17 2016 01:04 am
I'm glad Diya is finally showing some back bone regarding her relationship with Brandon. It's time for her to draw the line in the sand, and dare them to cross over. Diya need Brandon, and she needs tell her family to frak off. Joelle Jax you are rocking this story hard. Love this chapter. Thank you Bain
Author's Response:
YW, Bain : ) So glad to hear you enjoyed it. I agree--whether Diya is ready or not, she has to firmly stand her ground with her officious family. As the story progresses, that may prove easier said than done.
Muchas, muchas gracias for reading, reviewing, and introducing me to "frak"! I know. I'm so late. Lol!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 11:35 pm
Diya you could always quit your job working for your father as he will never give you peace. Your sister will make a horrible mother, she is much too self-involved.
Author's Response:
You've got a point in both regards. Thanks pmgayles!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 11:14 pm
Life!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Artamiss Caine!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 10:50 pm
D@mn girl **swooning**. Where can I find a Branny Swagger and Romance 101 class!? Need to sign up a whole lotta men for that one. D@mn, d@mn, d@mn ....!!!
Author's Response:
Lol! He is pretty yummy : )
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 09:19 pm
Awes man JJ, 😱😵, I don't know if I can get through without my Diya and Branny fix every now and again. I enjoy rereading anyway because it seems as if I discover something new each time. My vote would be no, puhleeez, I beg you 🙏🏾 ... don't make us wait. It's up to you though, as this is your masterpiece. 😌
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input and compliment, Musicluva! For right now, I'll probably just keep posting as I go. That way, people who don't want to wait can read now, and those who don't still have the option of waiting until the story is complete.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 08:25 pm
Great updates on both chapters JJ!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 08:20 pm
At this point, Diya need to pull up her big girl panties, heck even if they are granny panties and get prepared for the war. If she loves Brandon as much as she thinks then she cannot roll over and play dead like she's done so much before. You can love and respect your parents and family but you cannot live FOR them. If your family loves and respects you then they will abide by your decisions. I remember some quote or statement that mentions love doesn't come with conditions, restrictions etc and that should be true of a parents love for their children. I am waiting to hear her woman up but I haven't forgotten about Maria Thoteria and Bryan's need to set parameters with her behind also.
Author's Response:
I agree: You can't live for your family. But in Diya's case, you can't discount their ability to make life and carrying on a healthy relationship very difficult. The De la Roys don't just criticize and ostracize. They plot and sabotage. That's her concern. She can make whatever declarations and set whatever boundaries she likes, but she can't make them do or not do anything, as you will soon find out. Marisol is another matter all together. Thanks lajack1
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: June 16 2016 07:52 pm
I choked on the popcorn I was munching while reading the Ya, Brandon and Mannie scenes. For Reelz. I couldn't breathe there for a sec I was laughing so damn hard.
I'm getting tired of Diya and her inability to stand up to her father and acknowledging Brandon. He does what he does because she ALLOWS him to do so.
Brilliant chapter, Chica. DEAD.
Author's Response:
Thanks BellaChica!!! So happy you got a good giggle out of their foolishness.
As for Diya standing up to her father and acknowlegding Brandon, she tried. In the past, she's allowed William to do the things he does so far as she's forgiven him after the fact. But, as you'll soon see, that's where Diya's control over William and his meddling begins and ends.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 07:40 pm
Long past the time for her to do the ups: grow up and stand up.
Author's Response:
Thanks Penelope.
Author's Response:
Thanks Penelope.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 06:50 pm
........... Speechless......... Oh my word......
Author's Response:
Thanks ErisJade!!!
Reviewer: ErisJade Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 05:58 pm
I finally got into this story, (Members Only locks me out and I don't remember the password I used). I see I missed a lot, but I'm back just in time for the drama to begin...Daddy Dearest meets Mr Tattoo.
Author's Response:
That you are.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 16 2016 01:04 pm
Hmmmm... Did Brandon perform a surprise drive-by or is it his brother 😮? Sounds like Branny and Diya was really getting it 'in' 😀. Much needed release for their delayed gratification. LOL @ Killa Camilla! Maybe Mal picked up on her scent, and decided to let it be known.
So glad to see this update, but as always, I'm greedy for my favorite story 😋, so update soon. I'm anxious to find out who this visitor is!
Author's Response:
Thanks Musicluva!!! The wait for the unmasking of the mystery visitor is over. Update posted : )
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2016 09:53 pm
Before telling her father about Brandon--she needs to grow a pair and tell Brandon that she is afraid her father will ruin their relationship and why. She is going to hurt him when he mistakenly thinks she is ashame of him.
Author's Response:
It's been a LONG time since I posted it, but Diya did tell Brandon the reasoning behind her reluctance to tell the De la Roys about him (way back in chapter thirteen). Before that, he had assumed she was ashamed of him. Thanks Penelope!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2016 06:30 pm
no she didn't buy one of those ice packs? HA!
Author's Response:
She did : ) Thanks BellaChica!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2016 04:18 am
JJ, you made my week dearest! In love with these two!! Thank you thank you!!!
Author's Response:
And you made my week in saying that. Thanks sunsetdawn!!!
Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2016 12:15 am
Hot hot hot!! Brandon is the sexiest man around and Diya is perfect for him! Her father is so irritating though. He needs to back off plus Diya needs to tell her family about Brandon and move on. Glad you're back!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Michmom2!!! William backing off seems highly unlikely. But Diya telling her people about Brandon...that may happen sooner than you think.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2016 11:11 pm
I could so see Diya stoking a freezer pop up her kitty Kat. Lol I think she has a case against Brandon for breaking it. Lol. Now I am intrigued to find out who has walked in on Diya without her hearing them... Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You can't put nothing past Diya. Thanks JovanBleu26! Update posted.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2016 10:19 pm
Great chapter! Now, did Brandon just show up at her job?!?!
Author's Response:
We shall see... Thanks Love33!
Reviewer: Love33 Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2016 10:07 pm
Beautiful!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Bain!!!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2016 07:06 pm
Diya needs to tell her father already, and quit working for her father because he won't take Brandon well. She just needs to realize that her father would rather lose Diya than accept her love for Brandon. At least for awhile until he comes around. Brandon is a keeper!!
Author's Response:
Brandon is a keeper. But William coming around? I don't know. We'll see. Thanks pmgayles!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2016 06:37 pm