Please come back and update!!!Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 02 2015 03:33 pm
This story is really good. Great update; please make the next chapter really long!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 12:38 pm
Whew, we got some powerful emotions here. I can't wait for more. I wanna know is Delaney his daughter and if so, he has a lot of making up to do but I can't get behind Simone sleeping with someone else either especially if she didn't offically call the relationship off to his face or at least a voicemail. I am always about 100% closure when the relationship is over; not 100% disclosure because there are some things i just want to keep to myself ;)Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 08:20 pm
Garrett is a very angry man. Simone is....not sure what Simone is yet. They need to talk.
Couple of confusing parts for me...
Why was Malcolm acting all possessive about Delaney being his daughter and talking about putting Simone, Garrett, andd Garrett's parents in their places when he knows he's not the father, then later pushes for Simone to talk to Garrett?
What's going on with location? It read like everyboby was in the same place, but now he's catching a plane to get to Simone and his family?
Good start.Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 04:37 am
Michelle the ho or as I like to call her Hochelle has to be married to get her trust fund, is there a clause saying she should faithful? Hochelle seems to narcissistic only caring about herself. If this is a marriage in name only, why dine with her parents ? Who came with this lame idea to get married for material gain?
I am still trying to wrap my head around Simone and her baby, why continue the farce with Michael if they aren't in a relationship and pretend that your baby is his? Did Michael and Simone have sex and is her baby really his? Why did she run instead of talking to Garrett? Simone is a punk!! Garrett is as special marrying for a partnership in a law firm. Dumb, dumb ditty!!
Hochelle, you all are killing me with that name.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 12:00 am
Wow! I hope Simone is ok, girl I became a Registered Nurse at 22 years old and one of my first jobs was in a prison hospital and there was total chaos, we had to have a armed guard come with us when we did anything for the inmates if the guards didn't like you they left you behind and one Nurse was raped and beaten by a inmate patient, girl I tried to get along with everybody and treat everybody with respect but after that I quit. I started working at a local hospital in my area and decided I wanted to work in the NICU. I have worked with babies for over 20 years now, I went back to school and got my Masters and now i'm a Certified Registered Nurse Anesthetists, I'm still working with babies and I love my job. People need to know that there is danger in all professions. Now Garrett will come to the realization that he wants his Simone back. Thanks for the updateReviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2015 09:06 pm
If Simone has doubts about Laney'so parentage why not do a DNA test? Garrett may have cheated but that no reason not to tell him that he is a father. What is Michelle getting out this deal that net Garrett a partnership at the firm? Why is he willing to sell his soul for this partnership? Michelle is cheating, is Antonio her boyfriend or some dude she just picked up? It's not clear, did Garrett catch Simone and Malcolm doing do? If he did, that would be a very good reason for not to realize that Laney is his. Good stuff!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2015 12:32 pm
GIRL!!!!! this is so good, please continue!!! you had me invested from the start. Things like this happens when there's no communication in a relationship or trust. I not feeling the way Garrett called a baby out her name, part of me thinks that Malcolm is gay and only taking on the responsibility as Delaney's father. I'm hooked!!!!
Thank you. You have made my day!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 04:37 pm