I busted out laughing when she said "I have bushy pubes." lol
Reviewer: madison Signed
[Report This]Date: December 03 2015 11:46 pm
One of them is going to have to open up outside of the bedroom in order for this to progress. They are hiding themselves from each other and by doing that is actually causing them additional stress. It is a normal human inclination to simply ask "How are you doing? You look like there are some things going on? Would you like to talk about it?" Maybe Saint can just take her on a date since they kind of skipped the whole courting phase. Maybe she can suggest an outing where they can both de-stress. I'm waiting for stuff to hit the fan with her family finding out she married and to an older gentlemen.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 03 2015 01:44 am
Seems to me they are slowly falling in love with one another. The chemistry is there they communicate great it seems in the bedroom well the before & during part but because they really don't talk about their feelings he seems to think she doesn't want to cuddle or anything after the act itself. She cares for & about him. They need to work on their communication skills & talk. They still haven't got to their living arrangement which I dont see as being a big deal except it will force them to interact with each other. They seem to like being together anyways. Loving this story update soon.
Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 02 2015 09:35 am
Keep them coming!!!! I love this
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: reader Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2015 04:55 pm
Saint-Luc and Naomi needs to make a decision on where they are going to live, they are more apart then together, her home is where he is and his home is where she is. Having a long distance relationship is hard, being married it makes it even harder. Their communication skills SUCKS!. When she told him she wanted to stay with her family for the holidays that ticked me off because he is her family now. Why? Is she not wearing her wedding ring, I go no where without mines, that's a symbol of their love and devotion to each other. Naomi needs to open her eyes and recognize a good man before another woman does. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Oooh, I think there's a feisty marriage counsellor in you, nothing you said was a lie, we'll just have to see what happens :-)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2015 02:41 pm
I have a hundred questions. Firstly, why don't they just talk? Why have they stopped talking now that they're married? She's married now, so why is she still hiding him? Does she think it will be easier to explain a sudden husband than a boyfriend?
Author's Response:
Pshtt, I have a whole load of question for these two too, but I guess with time and patience the answers will be revealed.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 30 2015 08:51 am
She don't know how to talk to him, and he don't know how to talk to her either. If they are going to make it work someone is going to have to open up soon. No communication in a marriage is very destructive. I enjoyed this story so much, you have a new fan.
Author's Response:
They are going to have to open up soon, but taking the first step is always the hardest.
oh, and thanks for reading, you're well appreciated :-).
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2015 03:31 am
I'm wondering how they would make the living arrangement work, but if there's a will there's a way. I also like the fact that Saint didn't lose his cool when she told him she was not going to see him, he handle it just like a grown man would. There is always a big differents between how a man would handle something vs a little boy. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you, considering Saint is 45, it is expected of him but obviously that's not always the case.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: November 10 2015 04:12 pm
Poor baby! Couldn't finish but I'm glad to say that she cares cause of she didn't she would've not known why he stopped.
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: November 04 2015 06:19 am
I wonder how Naomi is going to hide the fact that she is married from her family and friends, because what's done in the night always comes to the light. To Naomi her marriage feels more like a business merger instead of a loving relationship and Saints demanding personality is not helping the situation. You had me cracking up when she farted in his face, that was hilarious and Saint-Luc handle it like a true mature grown man. I'm worried about his blood sugar. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Lol, it was pretty hilarious for me too writing that part about the farting. But believe me when I say, there is a LOT that is needed to be worked out by them.
As ever, thank you so much for reading :-).
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2015 11:23 pm
Interesting!! Can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2015 02:53 am
He don't play lol! He wants her all in one or nobody is going to have her. I'm curious about what is she going to say.
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2015 03:29 am
I love this story!!! all they had to do is talk to each other and tell the other what they want, need and like. That is why my marriage has lasted so long. He gives me what I need and in return I give him what he needs, we talk everyday for hours, we loved each other. The fact that she didn't allow his sickness to turn her away was very mature of her, and rather she knows it or not that was a move of a women who loves a man. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Hm, I may be coming to you soon for relationship advice lol. But yes an understanding from each other is what is important to make a relationship work. You'll get tired of me saying this but thank you so much again for reading :-).
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2015 01:09 am
This Ch.was kinda sweet. they are getting married.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :-).
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2015 11:55 pm
Wow that was good! can't wait for more.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 10:26 pm
Ok, I swear if I had her job I'd do the same if they are mentally abusive... She might feel like it's the last thing in the world but if it's dealing with her health is say peace and bring it on.
Author's Response:
You're totally right and hopefully Naomi deals with it the right way.
Thank for reading :-).
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2015 06:22 am
Good so far update soon
Author's Response:
Lol, yes ma'am.
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2015 03:22 am
So what does he consider her? I mean you are paying her to sleep with you but yet you want a Christian wife? What happened to him in the past? He didn't start off this way. I really feel like underneath this straight shooter talk he is a romantic or softie underneath. Why doesn't he see his brother? I can't wait for this story to unfold. You did shock me with him being 45 years old. I pulled out the calculator to double check my math...LOL
Author's Response:
Lol, he considers her his ''personal assistant''. Yes Saint does has had quite a lot of growing up to do which has made him into the man he is now, but all that for later. You are definitely one inquisitive reader, I like how your mind works. Thanks so much for reading :-).
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2015 01:35 am
I agree with Jacqua. But I also think he should have hired her on as his personal assistant to handle his business & keep him company. They have a pretty good relationship that spending time would have turned more intimate. Didn't have to be so vulgar but I guess he is strait forward so but it makes her sound like a prostitute or courtesan.
Author's Response:
Saint most definitely does not mince his words, and why he's very much like marmite but there's a more to him than what meets the eye.
Thank you for reading :-).
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 22 2015 09:51 pm
Mr. Saint-Luc has a little insecurity about his age. He's so honest with other people but not himself, he's worrying about how Naomi will reject him because of his age. Ms. Naomi is worrying about the same thing but opposite, she's thinking he will only see her as just a sexual companion instead of a worthy women. They both are wrong, they are looking for each other and they don't even know it yet. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Well there's a reason they say, ''opposites attracts''.
By the way, I completely thought I'd replied to your comment on Ch.2 but I must have forgot which is odd since I found it so amusing to read.
Thank you so much for reading and your support, it means a lot :-).
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 22 2015 08:25 pm
Why? are they in a strip club for women, where are the men. I wouldn't want to see fish flopping around, I want sausages bouncing up and down. Saint-Luc is very blunt and honest and I find that refreshing in a person, someone who is always going to tell you the truth vs someone who will tell you a lie to make you feel better. I find that man HOTT!!!. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2015 09:03 pm
Is he mental? You don't piss off your server, EVAH. Especially if they're going to serve you more items.
He should feel guilty. I hope he doesn't get her fired. What a real ass.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: October 20 2015 03:20 am
He is an interesting character. I think he felt offended when she didn't remember him because he purposely was a butthead so he would stand out to her in comparison to all of the other gentlemen she served that evening. Then to put on that charade and she didn't remember him...oh the ego. I think that first sentence was based off of past experienced and again a hurt ego. He definitely comes accross as an ass but I wonder if it is from boredom with everyone else around him. I'm sure it has to be pretty stuffy in the upper echelon with the same people. I wonder how old is he since Miriam called him an old man. Their conversations should be interesting as I think he is trying to be helpful but sounds like a pompous jerk. She will have to utilize some good ole Christian values to maintain her calm around him.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
You're definitely onto something Ms.Jackson :-P
Thank you so much for reading :-).
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: October 19 2015 10:43 pm
I don't like him. What a jerk. He acts nouveaux ri
Author's Response:
What does noveaux ri mean?
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2015 02:26 pm
I would have put a little "Shug Avery pee in his drink"LOL!.
Author's Response:
No lie lol, that's actually a good idea. Thanks for reading :-).
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 15 2015 04:03 pm