You can almost feel how overcome Charlie gets when people are kind to her just because. She's not used to that at all.
I love that Eli gets the crap kicked out of him next chapter. There needs to be even more justice with that scumbag!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2019 02:03 am
Good to see you updating. Really, really happy that the truth is out to some people, and Charlie has someone in her corner.Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 04:57 am
I said it the first time around with the other version, this is probably my favorite chapter in this whole book for me. Charlie found a true ally. Not that Gabe isn't, but it can only take another orphan to truly understand what its like to have no one to depend on. Not a single soul. Not even distant family you might not like! This cemented Grigori and Charlie's relationship for all time for me. Even if everybody else turned on her, Grigori would have her back. He got lucky and got adopted, so I know he's just imagining what Charlie's life was life in the system her entire life. Like what she had to do and no one to help and guide her. She doesn't have to explain for be judged because he already knows.
Ahhh....this just gives me all the right feels.
Lovely!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2018 08:53 pm
Charlie already told her story to Simona ( that's what being an asshole gets you😆 running out in tears😢 ) she should tell her story to everyone and put Eli on blast😲 I really hope her birth mother is a good woman because she needs some goodness in her life😆 I'm digging this😆Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2018 02:13 am
Wow! Even better than the first version, which was great! Looking forward to your next updateReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 29 2017 04:22 pm
I really enjoy this story. Unfortunately, I did not read it the first time that it was posted on The Vhamber but I’m enjoying it now. I’m curious to see how this added dynamic will effect Gage and Charlie’s burgeoning relationship as well as her journey towards self discovery. Please update soon. Thanks.Reviewer: Anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2017 08:52 pm
OMG THAT FUCKER ELIJAH!!! Tell Gabe! He already knows about your past so tell him about this dick before he does something to her! Wahhhhh she's fallen already and I think he has too. He's so emotionally attached to her and he doesn't realise it yet 😩😩😩 I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that this book was updated! I love it so much and I'm so grateful towards you! Pleaseeeee don't go again 😩😩 I'll keep rereading it hahahahah thank you thank you!Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2017 11:08 pm
Still just loving this story! The chapters with Jimmy were some of my favorite from the first version as well. It cemented Grigori and Charlie's relationship for me. She found a real friend in Grigori who understood what she went through.
Nice!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2017 03:37 pm
Missing this story ):Reviewer: Nonny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 30 2017 05:52 am
will you finish this story soon? Or at least post the finished old version a85;a039;Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 03:33 am
you got 50o stories going on & only update once every yearReviewer: Eman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2016 02:28 am
More please.... I need more. This story is both funny and dramatizing. It's the perfect formula for a romantic comedy. I love how the way he detais are presented in the story, and how there isn't too much details to where th story is boring. The way she writes is clear and understandable to everyone. I just love this stry and can't wait until its finished.....or at least another three updates.Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 06:39 am